Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1 -Vote-
Lethal Lyricist League Week 10
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Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1
Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1
Quote:
Originally Posted by Token.
the accusations were thrown at barcotic, but pretty sure they were just played concepts tbh.... can vaguely remember
barcotic, sign in
Quote:
Originally Posted by Token.
now that we're all getting along, bar sign in.
Dude you're not good in text AT ALL.. and with that said..
Are you gonna post here? Or just do your "Suck Bar" thing in the chat thread
People call you pussy, and I'm not known to fight a bitch..
But Idk you on a personal level.. since it's clear you can't write at his
You just LOOK like a pitbull.. ya not vicious nor heavy kid..
But I'll give you the advantage.. 'cuz I can't stand to see an unhealthy bitch
& I'm serious you're hairy as fuck.. so here's a razor, use it right..
You fuckin werewolf.. pussy juice like we condone what you do at night
Plus I heard Star gained weight.. during sex she intentionally buries him..
Mean bitch.. the only thing that cantankerous the National Aquarium
But all she wants is to have some fun.. and sex you can't master son..
So I'll make your Hyundai and beat the pussy up in the back of one
I'll give you the work bitch.. saying you're the old Token that hurts kids..
& looking at your front.. it clearly says that you're not ACTUALLY worth shit
Heard you're gettin' sick.. nah I'm not callin' you the hottest dude..
You're in the coughin' phase now.. underground with a tombstone atop of you
Probably the favorite here.. Token's an old vet known for killing fools..
So you'll tack on the W.. trying your best to cover the L that I'm giving you
I'm winning dude.. & I know for fact that only bitter's what this brings..
'Cuz you're leaving with such an ugly 2-2 that ballet will reconsider existing
Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1
Quote:
Originally Posted by Raydeoh's Rankings
9. Token
Token’s been around.. he took a loss to Per$ last week but this guy can bring it.. he’s definitely proven that in the past.. this week I think he’ll be back to his old self and write at the level he used to.. he’s got me this week
Quote:
Originally Posted by Raydeoh
I think I was using detremental. back then.. or Apex before it got hacked
this dude must be into beasiality... his taste in girl's are the wackest dude
& ur literally fucked if ur Apex........ ever made the mistake of running back to you
you aint a menace w/ the text, i'm relaxin without a doubt
cuz if the threat's Detremental to my health... then I got nothing to worry about
this faggot speaks out his ass, so i'll leave him with broken nuts
now the battle's afoot........ so this nigga's deepthroatin the both of us
you'll never be champ material, it's clear this kid's trapped
get caught in a sticky situation? bitch you couldn't get to a contendership's match
you ain't fit for a HW title, he's got a bad habit with the dudes
just turn on the light, wait..... now we got this faggot in the mood
I was a vet before u registered, yet you write shit with '04 context
shit, if the votes come down to seniority... then you got me with your concepts
bitch you'll never have any fans, just try n' come off as strong
shit, ur like a bull out the gate....... the way nobody'll ride you for long
the voters know ur wack at best n' i'ma teach this fag a lesson
with so many loose screws, it's no surprise Raydeoh gets nothing but bad reception
time to get personal, everyone knows ur fucked kid
only time you're ahead of me is in the mag rankings...... that YOU came up with
Quote:
Originally Posted by Raydeoh's Rankings
8. Raydeoh
Won easily last week.. I’ve got Token this week.. let’s see what takes place
I devour wackness when I see it, so you losing is fate
but I made an honest man outta you, now you can say that you've truly been 8
Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1 -Vote-
Dude you're not good in text AT ALL.. and with that said..
Are you gonna post here? Or just do your "Suck Bar" thing in the chat thread
lol
People call you pussy, and I'm not known to fight a bitch..
But Idk you on a personal level.. since it's clear you can't write at his
good
You just LOOK like a pitbull.. ya not vicious nor heavy kid..
But I'll give you the advantage.. 'cuz I can't stand to see an unhealthy bitch
decent... see the flip... not a hard hitter though
& I'm serious you're hairy as fuck.. so here's a razor, use it right..
You fuckin werewolf.. pussy juice like we condone what you do at night
eh... not really feeling this bar
Plus I heard Star gained weight.. during sex she intentionally buries him..
Mean bitch.. the only thing that cantankerous the National Aquarium
decent... kind of a stretch on the wordplay...
But all she wants is to have some fun.. and sex you can't master son..
So I'll make your Hyundai and beat the pussy up in the back of one
good
I'll give you the work bitch.. saying you're the old Token that hurts kids..
& looking at your front.. it clearly says that you're not ACTUALLY worth shit
cool
Heard you're gettin' sick.. nah I'm not callin' you the hottest dude..
You're in the coughin' phase now.. underground with a tombstone atop of you
decent
Probably the favorite here.. Token's an old vet known for killing fools..
So you'll tack on the W.. trying your best to cover the L that I'm giving you
nah, not feeling this one, bro
I'm winning dude.. & I know for fact that only bitter's what this brings..
'Cuz you're leaving with such an ugly 2-2 that ballet will reconsider existing
ok closer
vs.
this dude must be into beasiality... his taste in girl's are the wackest dude
& ur literally fucked if ur Apex........ ever made the mistake of running back to you
rofl...
you aint a menace w/ the text, i'm relaxin without a doubt
cuz if the threat's Detremental to my health... then I got nothing to worry about
ok-ish
this faggot speaks out his ass, so i'll leave him with broken nuts
now the battle's afoot........ so this nigga's deepthroatin the both of us
lol
you'll never be champ material, it's clear this kid's trapped
get caught in a sticky situation? bitch you couldn't get to a contendership's match
decent
you ain't fit for a HW title, he's got a bad habit with the dudes
just turn on the light, wait..... now we got this faggot in the mood
lol
I was a vet before u registered, yet you write shit with '04 context
shit, if the votes come down to seniority... then you got me with your concepts
good
bitch you'll never have any fans, just try n' come off as strong
shit, ur like a bull out the gate....... the way nobody'll ride you for long
good, again
the voters know ur wack at best n' i'ma teach this fag a lesson
with so many loose screws, it's no surprise Raydeoh gets nothing but bad reception
good flip on the name
time to get personal, everyone knows ur fucked kid
only time you're ahead of me is in the mag rankings...... that YOU came up with
I was waiting for this one... good
I devour wackness when I see it, so you losing is fate
but I made an honest man outta you, now you can say that you've truly been 8
reference to the rankings... nice closer
good battle fella's... both brought it and had me laughing my ass of for most of
both verses. With that being said, I think Token took this by a cunt hair... just
harder overall hits.
vote- Token
Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1 -Vote-
People call you pussy, and I'm not known to fight a bitch..
But Idk you on a personal level.. since it's clear you can't write at his
decent..ive seen the concept a few times
But all she wants is to have some fun.. and sex you can't master son..
So I'll make your Hyundai and beat the pussy up in the back of one
^cool
I'll give you the work bitch.. saying you're the old Token that hurts kids..
& looking at your front.. it clearly says that you're not ACTUALLY worth shit
^this is iight
Heard you're gettin' sick.. nah I'm not callin' you the hottest dude..
You're in the coughin' phase now.. underground with a tombstone atop of you
^ive seen this concept a few times..decent flip
vs
this dude must be into beasiality... his taste in girl's are the wackest dude
& ur literally fucked if ur Apex........ ever made the mistake of running back to you
^cool
I was a vet before u registered, yet you write shit with '04 context
shit, if the votes come down to seniority... then you got me with your concepts
^iight
the voters know ur wack at best n' i'ma teach this fag a lesson
with so many loose screws, it's no surprise Raydeoh gets nothing but bad reception'
^cool n/p
I devour wackness when I see it, so you losing is fate
but I made an honest man outta you, now you can say that you've truly been 8
^nice
vote: tokeN for a stronger, more direct verse with less misses...both came cool but tok outshined ray
Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1 -Vote-
C'mon ya'll where the votes at?
Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1 -Vote-
People call you pussy, and I'm not known to fight a bitch..
But Idk you on a personal level.. since it's clear you can't write at his
Plus I heard Star gained weight.. during sex she intentionally buries him..
Mean bitch.. the only thing that cantankerous the National Aquarium
vs
this dude must be into beasiality... his taste in girl's are the wackest dude
& ur literally fucked if ur Apex........ ever made the mistake of running back to you
this faggot speaks out his ass, so i'll leave him with broken nuts
now the battle's afoot........ so this nigga's deepthroatin the both of us
I was a vet before u registered, yet you write shit with '04 context
shit, if the votes come down to seniority... then you got me with your concepts
the voters know ur wack at best n' i'ma teach this fag a lesson
with so many loose screws, it's no surprise Raydeoh gets nothing but bad reception
it was closer than the quotes cuz ray had some almost good lines, but he also had some shit ones like the tack on W shit... Token had a cleaner verse imo
vote token
Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1 -Vote-
Dude you're not good in text AT ALL.. and with that said..
Are you gonna post here? Or just do your "Suck Bar" thing in the chat thread
People call you pussy, and I'm not known to fight a bitch..
But Idk you on a personal level.. since it's clear you can't write at his
Plus I heard Star gained weight.. during sex she intentionally buries him..
Mean bitch.. the only thing that cantankerous the National Aquarium
vs.
this dude must be into beasiality... his taste in girl's are the wackest dude
& ur literally fucked if ur Apex........ ever made the mistake of running back to you
this faggot speaks out his ass, so i'll leave him with broken nuts
now the battle's afoot........ so this nigga's deepthroatin the both of us
I was a vet before u registered, yet you write shit with '04 context
shit, if the votes come down to seniority... then you got me with your concepts
the voters know ur wack at best n' i'ma teach this fag a lesson
with so many loose screws, it's no surprise Raydeoh gets nothing but bad reception
Vote - Token
Re: Raydeoh 3-1 Vs. Token. 2-1 -Vote-
Dude you're not good in text AT ALL.. and with that said..
Are you gonna post here? Or just do your "Suck Bar" thing in the chat thread
People call you pussy, and I'm not known to fight a bitch..
But Idk you on a personal level.. since it's clear you can't write at his
Probably the favorite here.. Token's an old vet known for killing fools..
So you'll tack on the W.. trying your best to cover the L that I'm giving you
vs
this dude must be into beasiality... his taste in girl's are the wackest dude
& ur literally fucked if ur Apex........ ever made the mistake of running back to you
this faggot speaks out his ass, so i'll leave him with broken nuts
now the battle's afoot........ so this nigga's deepthroatin the both of us
you'll never be champ material, it's clear this kid's trapped
get caught in a sticky situation? bitch you couldn't get to a contendership's match
bitch you'll never have any fans, just try n' come off as strong
shit, ur like a bull out the gate....... the way nobody'll ride you for long
the voters know ur wack at best n' i'ma teach this fag a lesson
with so many loose screws, it's no surprise Raydeoh gets nothing but bad reception
Toke you're definitely warming back up with the concepts.. Raydeoh you came nice here..keep at it, you could make it to the playoffs for sure.. feel like Token took this one, just a little fresher, but liked both drops. good job guys.. Raydeoh you have a dope style just tighten up on the misses and you'll do extremely well here
v/ Token
