Year of the Dog

catastrophic causes
unlogic losses
complete flawless killings
obscene, jawless thrillings
blood spilling- wrong abuse
wrong use- gone along nuse
sued, true unblessings
cousins- dozens resting
testing- paying illegal fees
you- straying feeble greed
feed, we're hungry bitch!

sick of your bullshit
dick- fuck your click
we've been hurt enough,
we're dogs, fuck micheal vick!

Didn't know what to take from this one. It's all over the place. I suggest a bit more cohesion, I like the sporadic structure but you just have to pull it off a little better. I like the use of alliteration and the rhyme scheme was entertaining. Not much to say about this one. Interesting take on this, definitely not expected. Keep at it.