I'm on second.
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I'm on second.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...Off-Joe-Boston
Lyrics are pretty decent, but you're all over the place with flow. It's not consistent. I would suggest writing less in each count until you have it down packed. Syllable cramming isn't really the style anymore, so I think you could do without it. Beat sounds pretty cool though.