LLL Season 11: Week 5
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LLL Season 11: Week 5
Standard Rules (found in LLL Office)
Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)
16 Lines Minimum
Vote on 5 Battles
MUST LEAVE LINKS in your check in, or lose 2 votes per missing link
Good Luck
hey, 20
I'm sticking to 16 until the playoffs..
Good luck Truc.... :alc:
Hexzen Vs Cry
Mars Vs Archetype
Kenny Vs Josh
Born Vs Commissioner
Manic Vs Mariah
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third dayQuote:
Originally Posted by Barcotic Vs. Cry
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
Good Luck.
Fuck Truc..........Quote:
Originally Posted by Barcotic
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it..
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
vs
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
Man, this battle was disappointing. Those were the only lines I was feeling tbh. I've sat here writing stuff out but it's kind of odd to call. Bar had the smoother wording, but he was flipping punches in really weak ways. Just seemed like he was really reaching to make a punch out of stuff. They just didn't make an impact to me.
But Truc fucked up a lot of his concepts in weird ways. The two I quoted were solid but fairly straightforward. Bar had the better quote (that line was pretty good) but Truc had two which were better than anything in the rest of Bar's verse. I read Bar's verse first and thought damn Truc must have got this, but.. i dunno. I can't call it and I can't be assed to delete all this and rewrite it later, so...
I'll return I guess.
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
^solid hit, not too creative
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
^blah, a weak concept
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
^'you we are a champ at the bit'? lol. anyway, are you trying to flip champing at the bit? it doesn't really work anyway
Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
^weak punch, violence needs to be more creative or it's blah
This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
^almost ok, but a weak punch
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
^not fresh feeling, but a solid, well executed line. I liked it.
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
^felt really forced to me, a reach
I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
^What? no
vs
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
^really really bad imo. you're using two words from your own quote from last week to flip into a punch?
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
^the wordplay is fine, but the punch is so weak
Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
^another reach to me. it's like you're setting up something then connecting it some other thing that relates to it in a really loose way
Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
^a bit better
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
^there is cleverness to this even if similar homeless flips have been done to death. i appreciated the wittiness and it tied in well. best bar of the battle.
He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
^this was the worst line in your verse, ridiculously simple. this newb stuff man
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
^again the flip is just kinda dull. the wordplay just about works, but punch isn't hard.
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
^concept was weak again. really really simple, random violent punch
WTF HAPPENED? This battle was really awful. Sorry but it was.
Barcotic gets it by the tinyest of margins basically for having smoother wording of really weak concepts. Maybe i'm being overly harsh, but this was a HW Match. Ehh, well, constructive criticism. I've seen better from both of you, obviously.
V/Barcotic
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
good
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
decent at best
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
haha nice
Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
nope.
This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
meh..
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
cool.
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
ok..
I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
ehhh.
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
ehhh..
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
lol cool.
Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
decent.
Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
played wp. ok punch.
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
cool.
He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
ehhh..
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
alright good..
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
nah.
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
vs.
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
Arlight, decent battle..i thought it would be a little better but there was still a few nice bars from each. Based on who had the harder hitting stuff, and more creative stuff in my eyes, i gotta give it to Truculent.
Vote - Truculent.
phlymo gets to decide whether my vote counts or not, not you
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
its aight, not great
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
played, corny
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
ehhh, wording was really awkward, even things like were had an unneeded apostrophe
Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
nerve stuff has been done and this one is reaching a little, i mean its one thing to rips nerves out or something but putting his on a shelf, its iffy, average
This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
i get the wp but the way you worded it is very indirect, needs harsher wording
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
aight flip
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
i liked this a lot except for the setup, i would have said something about playoffs instead of guns and maybe changed the first line a bit too, drop a tight single, etc..
I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
average, playedish misdirection
vs.
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
meh, this was average at best, lackluster opener
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
this was cool, setup could have been better but otherwise hot
Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
i get the craft beads reference but this is still meh, not a strong enough concept to construct a punch around, gay!
Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
i've seen the wp before, its average the way you did it i guess
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
flow/rhyme was off, which you really need for this kind of flip
He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
dude- this kind of line is completely not worthy of a champ match- its played and its corny
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
this wp has been done many many times, this is near-bite status no lie
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
good close
v/ bar
truc didn't really have any haymakers to me and his wording struggled in spots, bars limewire and closer were both pretty solid, rest of his shit struggled, both of you seriously slacked for a champ match,
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
.....VS
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
GOOD BATTLE I enjoyed reading this both came good truc u had some decent shit decent creativity..your wordplay was on point it u didn't have any strecthed bars ya punches were hitting...bar u had a good verse as usual couple creative bars good wording and structure I really liked ya opener it was creative and good personal.....this was a close battle but I give it to bar 4 his opnere even though I was gonna vote for truc 4 his copy line no hate overall good battle keep this shit up
so does commissioners vote count? cuz u said u dont want him voting...
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
lol, good
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
played
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
no, plus it's sloppy
Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
ok flip
This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
it's alright
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
played
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
it's ok
I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
ok
vs.
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
lol
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
dope
Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
connection lacked imo, was alright tho
Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
coo
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
played
He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
nooooooo
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
played
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
coo
so yea.. mad close. it wasn't the best battle but it was alright. both had some hard shit & then some wtf/no/played stuff. i think bar edged it though.. barely. limewire was lotb.
v/bar.. by a fleas penis
Quote:
Originally Posted by Barcotic
vs
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
mehh
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
ok
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
true, but bad wording
Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
mehh
This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
nah
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
ok
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
mehh, no
I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
mehh
damn, after reading bars i thought truc would've had this because of how weak it was, but honestly truc's wasnt any better....im really having a hard time picking a winner. but....i think that a couple of bars lines were decent, so he can get this.
v/ Bar
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
Cool opener, kinda funny
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
Eh not feeling it
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
more of a statement than a punchline
Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
okay
This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
whatever else/ails is a stretch in itself
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
this is kinda dope but its really the same concept as your first bar
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
eh....
I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
okay closer
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
Eh kinda corny
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
Not feeling
Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
okay..
Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
This is cool
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
It's creative
He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
this is kinda corny but it's alright
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
I've seen the concept used before but it's a new flip
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
Strong closer
I kinda expect a heavyweight match to be some dope shit...really both were disappointing and using some REALLY basic concepts. Truc I could've sworn I saw a freeflow you posted on another site that had some good lines, a going down in history line that was dope and I would've expected something better.
After reading the battle over again I think Bar had maybe 1 or 2 solid bars that barely gave him enough for the win.
Overall Vote - Barcotic
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
vs.
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
LMFAOOOOA WIofjaOWFIOA
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
vote; barcotic..wow i actually thought bar took this pretty easily imo. truc had alot of stuff that wasnt worded right, and more misses than hits actually 1 hit as quoted, i wasnt feeling the rest. bar had some nice bars, and those one i quoted made me laugh..lmfao at the starstruck line that was the LOTB imo...
anyways decent battle, but no upset i guess.
Truc:
See, Bar's concepts'll disgust us forever & a third day
So you know he'll try to make amends...into a forced & wack wordplay
u shouldntve used this....his amends line was better than yours, you called his shit some forced and wack wordplay and thats how your amends line came off...
Your just another reason why this is drained an it's played
If you think you took text by storm, it's cuz YOU rained on it's parade
lol...this is coo right here...kinda funny...decent diss
Faced hens, dios, $pit, toke in their prime? i'm not denying
Yea you we're a champ at the bit... of league the vets stopped trying
ur wording is slackin so far...kinda played anyways
Strainin me? ..i'll tear bodies apart if a welps attackin words
This battles only nerveracking for me, cuz yours'll be on a shelf afterwards
lol...this was decent here...decent wordplay
This is your life, text & alcohol so when I impede ya hopes
Just get whiskey or whatever ail's you... will need to cope
lmao...this was pretty tight...
Bar'll have a laugh, but that in his lines stays impossible
Cuz he's known to take a joke... then ruin it in every way possible
played, lame, etc
Lama's verdict wasn't convincing & i've got the bite signals
So you can forget guns... only c'in rounds as copyright symbols ©
u fukd up the wording here...coulda been tight
I end careers, this is text but Bar'll still flunk & flop in rap
Cuz after this, you droppin verses. <---- I just put a fuckin stop to that
uh-uh
Bar
Don't let his undefeated record fool you and don't forget he's a rookie
he won by a cunt hair last week, and sadly, that's the closest he'll get to a pussy..
decent start here, concept is played of course
He looks for his concepts in underground tracks, this dude's a song hunter
we just hope he fucks with some Limewire.. on a bomb and it's the wrong color..
nice shit here...cool wordplay and some lightweight imagery here too
Have ya'll noticed how fake he is? everything he says is make-believe shit
but I knew he had a crafty tongue, the same one he licks his anal beads with..
lol...disgusting dude
Americans tend to act bitter towards Canadians, meh, I just get mad back
but if Truc's wack shit stays Bruin, our sport might never stop gettin' laughed at..
cool wordplay
I don't feel sorry for him, there's kids in the world that are fuckin' starvin'
and if sad shit hits close to home, Truc's rap should be thrown in a public garbage..
lol...decent shit here...no pun intended
He's been here for about four months now and still isn't decent or dope
and I'm willing to bet that he joined in April so he has an excuse for bein' a joke..
played as fuck!
I'm pretty damn popular here, like a celebrity, nobody's doubting me yet
and if ya'll are starstruck.. might mistake you for the ones surrounding his head..
decent...wrote it before, seen it before (concept)
He's gotten lucky in every battle, fuck the usual "teach him a lesson" shit
he called The Ark a pile of wreckage last week, now his body's sinking next to it....
decent closer
overall: i think bar got this pretty easy...pretty one sided. truc you had some decdent ideas and concepts but ur wording aint really help u pull them off while bar was just lettin the zingers fly....
v/Bar...by an elephant schlong