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You see, I wasnt too hindered when called out by old mate Indrid
I looked through his battles, couldnt find anything apart from whack shit
But you see this cunt watched 8-Mile, now he thinks he's a pro
and just like B-Rabbit I bet this dog will choke
What is known to come from New York City? People like you with no-hope
Now I think you should take the rope, I've crucified you.
I've taken you down, it was easy, I know what to do
But thats not a celebration because you're the shittest cunt on these forums, true?
You have the weakest punches and terrible flow, this is what you lack
I just think I'll take you on Aussie style, see your family dressed all in black.
heres a quick-key
ill make you feel a hundred deaths- when you freestyle, it lack's the essentials of finesse
because being decapitated is the only way he can go off the top..and be on the cutting edge
your the prey, not the predator..plus your concepts are weak..you need something thats iller
and its true..he is at the bottom of the food chain..cuz he's full of nothing but filler's
this is easy for me..in the end ill make sure your final moments wont be of glory
give the word to jesus for me..once i lay him to rest and completely roast him like a crematory
he thinks he can top me, and far as skill goes..owch see's me as that guy he looks up too
but its likes our location's on the atlas, im nowhere near you and miles above you
fake brit..the second my fist connects with you face, it'll cause a loud thunder
and when i put him in a grave, there should be no complaints, he use to being down under
pretty easy to call...Indrid by a long shot.
Owch:
Owch I can see you improvin quickly. Came def better than in the battle against me but yet you still have a long way to go. I mean you cleaned up your structure and tried to add some wordplay but your punches were just meh. keep checkin out battles and try to peep some of the grind-time battles for example that will help you to get an idea of what a real punchline is.
Indrid:
like I said in the beginning you got this in the bag. you just came harder, ahd the better concepts and executed better. nothing more to say
Vote: Indrid
owch, you came off pretty weak but these lines stood out moreso than the others ..
I've taken you down, it was easy, I know what to do
But thats not a celebration because you're the shittest cunt on these forums, true?
You have the weakest punches and terrible flow, this is what you lack
I just think I'll take you on Aussie style, see your family dressed all in black.
Indrid-your mutlis were dope and you had some good punches :
ill make you feel a hundred deaths- when you freestyle, it lack's the essentials of finesse
because being decapitated is the only way he can go off the top..and be on the cutting edge
he thinks he can top me, and far as skill goes..owch see's me as that guy he looks up too
but its likes our location's on the atlas, im nowhere near you and miles above you
overall this battle was one sided, my vote goes to indrid cold
ima have to go with indrid hands downs
uppin
owch
You see, I wasnt too hindered when called out by old mate Indrid
I looked through his battles, couldnt find anything apart from whack shit
no hate man rhyme scheme was off here and punch just a little to basic here
But you see this cunt watched 8-Mile, now he thinks he's a pro
and just like B-Rabbit I bet this dog will choke
weak concept im sorry
What is known to come from New York City? People like you with no-hope
Now I think you should take the rope, I've crucified you.
again no ryhme scheme here but overall slightly better punch
I've taken you down, it was easy, I know what to do
But thats not a celebration because you're the shittest cunt on these forums, true?
ok
You have the weakest punches and terrible flow, this is what you lack
I just think I'll take you on Aussie style, see your family dressed all in black.
ok
Indrid
ill make you feel a hundred deaths- when you freestyle, it lack's the essentials of finesse
because being decapitated is the only way he can go off the top..and be on the cutting edge
nice concept good opener
your the prey, not the predator..plus your concepts are weak..you need something thats iller
and its true..he is at the bottom of the food chain..cuz he's full of nothing but filler's
lol nice concept again
this is easy for me..in the end ill make sure your final moments wont be of glory
give the word to jesus for me..once i lay him to rest and completely roast him like a crematory
i like the concept but thought the finisher coulda been wordred a bit better
he thinks he can top me, and far as skill goes..owch see's me as that guy he looks up too
but its likes our location's on the atlas, im nowhere near you and miles above you
setup coulda been better the finisher was cool
fake brit..the second my fist connects with you face, it'll cause a loud thunder
and when i put him in a grave, there should be no complaints, he use to being down under
ok pretty direct here
well this battle pretty onesided Indrid had the harder hits here. Fuctup ur last 3 bars were ok slight hits but u really gotta work on those concepts my dude.
shit meant owch wtf lmao. need to work on those concepts my dude.
V.Indrid/Both had little personals;mostly statements..indrid just had the better verse