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@Exalted.
@Ryno
The math ain’t adding up. Ur sad asf w/ no zingers
This pussy is weaker. Ur ‘numbers up’ against Ry like u count w/ ur fingers
Dude is a wiener. Gettin cut n chopped up. I thug the best
Every time this ‘hacksaw’ competition, he realized he wasn’t cut above the rest.
U bluff the best. Step to my plate? Kid, my hits legit
One ‘knuckleball’ em into a fetal position the way I pitch the shit
Dude is just average, lying tryna prove that he’s savage
I mean we know u ain’t ‘deep fake’, cuz ur content ain’t fooling the masses
Fk this schmuck. How can he compete? His flaws is sus
I doubt ‘Ex pose’ a threat. I’ll slash the machete n uncover ALL his guts.
slid in your home w/ ur girl before u got back
We made ur bed shake. she spread legs lettin me snack quick
U woke up w/a chip on ur shoulder after feeling a wet Dip in the mattress
Wrestling fanatic. stream wwe 24/7 bet ur life is unstable
Pls Dinette addict.. get a chair slammed to the back then piledrived thru a table
Bro your overrated trash wordplay has me bored to death
Ur bars all zeros on a scale to Tensile Stress the materials forced & stretched
Fam struggling. mans hustling til his spiraling psyches dead
If he loses another Marble Ry wont be able to afford to buy kids bread
One eye in the scope shoot as ur peoples tears be gushing
They can vent when I Peek & Fire. ur dome leak like a volcanic eruption
The math ain’t adding up. Ur sad asf w/ no zingers
This pussy is weaker. Ur ‘numbers up’ against Ry like u count w/ ur fingers
the wording on this could be better
Dude is a wiener. Gettin cut n chopped up. I thug the best
Every time this ‘hacksaw’ competition, he realized he wasn’t cut above the rest.
this needs work
U bluff the best. Step to my plate? Kid, my hits legit
One ‘knuckleball’ em into a fetal position the way I pitch the shit
needs work
Dude is just average, lying tryna prove that he’s savage
I mean we know u ain’t ‘deep fake’, cuz ur content ain’t fooling the masses
whats a deepfake... needs work
Fk this schmuck. How can he compete? His flaws is sus
I doubt ‘Ex pose’ a threat. I’ll slash the machete n uncover ALL his guts.
you need to work on your entendres.. you're only showing one side of the wordplay
We made ur bed shake. she spread legs lettin me snack quick
U woke up w/a chip on ur shoulder after feeling a wet Dip in the mattress
not feeling this
Wrestling fanatic. stream wwe 24/7 bet ur life is unstable
Pls Dinette addict.. get a chair slammed to the back then piledrived thru a table
needs better w/p
Bro your overrated trash wordplay has me bored to death
Ur bars all zeros on a scale to Tensile Stress the materials forced & stretched
what was the point of saying tensile/ten so?... needs better linkage
Fam struggling. mans hustling til his spiraling psyches dead
If he loses another Marble Ry wont be able to afford to buy kids bread
i get rye and bread... but this made no sense
One eye in the scope shoot as ur peoples tears be gushing
They can vent when I Peek & Fire. ur dome leak like a volcanic eruption
your wordplay needs work
though i wasnt feeling Ryo's verse his wordplay was a lot better than Exalted's
v-Ryno
ry had a chill battle verse
i aint think nothing hit all that crazy
but u was jabbing the whole time
numbers up and expose was ur best lines
ex 's open bar i fucked wit
good way 2start
dinnette wasnt feeing
tensile aint work for me ten sigh'll is how its pronounced 2me
marble was ok
i think you could of set it up better
last bar aint connect 4me
winner ryno
i think ex had the best bar of the battle
but his misses were bigger misses then rys
This was a close one to me this is a clash of styles and how one reads it back rynos was written ''better'' but exalted had a bit more depth in his punches and personals while rynos was on point in terms of delivery -- it can go either way i say ryno won techically but i enjoyed exalted verse more
-V - exalted
Ryno
Dude is just average, lying tryna prove that he’s savage
I mean we know u ain’t ‘deep fake’, cuz ur content ain’t fooling the masses
vs
Exalted
We made ur bed shake. she spread legs lettin me snack quick
U woke up w/a chip on ur shoulder after feeling a wet Dip in the mattress
Bro your overrated trash wordplay has me bored to death
Ur bars all zeros on a scale to Tensile Stress the materials forced & stretched
I almost put the Marble Rye bar because the concept and wording up until the punch was on point. but the punch just need a different finish to it IMHO. but other than that it was a conceptually dope bar. I usually enjoy Ryno's "talk to em" style but this week bro seems a bit uninspired. while Ex came into this match up with his creative lady juices flowing.
v/Ex
Dude is a wiener. Gettin cut n chopped up. I thug the best
Every time this ‘hacksaw’ competition, he realized he wasn’t cut above the rest.
U bluff the best. Step to my plate? Kid, my hits legit
One ‘knuckleball’ em into a fetal position the way I pitch the shit
Vs
We made ur bed shake. she spread legs lettin me snack quick
U woke up w/a chip on ur shoulder after feeling a wet Dip in the mattress
Ex had some good ideas but they just didn’t come off for me but was a nearly dope every time ryno had some hard misses but think he had the better bars overall
V/ryno
The math ain’t adding up. Ur sad asf w/ no zingers
This pussy is weaker. Ur ‘numbers up’ against Ry like u count w/ ur fingers
Dude is a wiener. Gettin cut n chopped up. I thug the best
Every time this ‘hacksaw’ competition, he realized he wasn’t cut above the rest.
Vs
We made ur bed shake. she spread legs lettin me snack quick
U woke up w/a chip on ur shoulder after feeling a wet Dip in the mattress
Fam struggling. mans hustling til his spiraling psyches dead
If he loses another Marble Ry wont be able to afford to buy kids bread
I thought ry came ok but it didn’t seem all that creative… none of it was played but it felt like they should be played… ex was a little more creative with his punches I thought. It was definitely close tho, both had two bars worth quoting its just ex seemed a little more thought out.. ry writing seemed a little lazy this week. …VOTE- EXALTED
Ryno - Numbers up was okay. Hacksaw was a solid concept, but could have been dope if set up better. Knuckle ball was solid. Deep fake was as well. Expose was good.
Exalted - chip on the shoulder/wet dip was fire. Dinette was mild. Tensile stress was nice. Marble Rye was solid. Close was okay.
Good battle. I got Ex edging this.
Vote - Exalted
4-3 exalted
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@mac
The math ain’t adding up. Ur sad asf w/ no zingers
This pussy is weaker. Ur ‘numbers up’ against Ry like u count w/ ur fingers
*I liked this bar. One line tied into the 2nd nicely
Dude is a wiener. Gettin cut n chopped up. I thug the best
Every time this ‘hacksaw’ competition, he realized he wasn’t cut above the rest.
*Good wordplay on this bar - chop/hacksaw. not sure if the word cut was needed in the 1st line, but it was still good.
U bluff the best. Step to my plate? Kid, my hits legit
One ‘knuckleball’ em into a fetal position the way I pitch the shit
*This was a good hit. Though the setup, wordplay, and hit was good
Dude is just average, lying tryna prove that he’s savage
I mean we know u ain’t ‘deep fake’, cuz ur content ain’t fooling the masses
*Truely, I though the deep fake wordplay was one of the best and a great punch. I saw the Netflix trailer for the show and laughed bit when I read it - strong hit*
Fk this schmuck. How can he compete? His flaws is sus
I doubt ‘Ex pose’ a threat. I’ll slash the machete n uncover ALL his guts.
*This was okay, but so many people already used the slash / machete line against me
vs.
We made ur bed shake. she spread legs lettin me snack quick
U woke up w/a chip on ur shoulder after feeling a wet Dip in the mattress
*setup and 2nd line was great. Good wordplay and creativity
Wrestling fanatic. stream wwe 24/7 bet ur life is unstable
Pls Dinette addict.. get a chair slammed to the back then piledrived thru a table
*This was okayissh, but thought it could be delivered better
Bro your overrated trash wordplay has me bored to death
Ur bars all zeros on a scale to Tensile Stress the materials forced & stretched
*This was okayissh, but thought it could be delivered better
Fam struggling. mans hustling til his spiraling psyches dead
If he loses another Marble Ry wont be able to afford to buy kids bread
*yeah, this punch was I'll. Good nameply flip and wordplay. Strong hit.
One eye in the scope shoot as ur peoples tears be gushing
They can vent when I Peek & Fire. ur dome leak like a volcanic eruption
*This was descent. While most of the volcano punchlines are a bit played, I felt this was done pretty creative
I though both people had a good amount of creativity in their verses. This was definitely a good battle which good wordplay incorporated by both ppl.
Vote - Ryno
4-4 next vote wins
Numbers up
Hacksaw
Knuckleball
Expose
Vs
Wet dip
Marble ry
Peek and fire
Ex’s misses for me really fell flat where Rynos were just bland but his wording was much better. Also got Ry with one more quotable
V/Ry