Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3 - Smog WINS

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@Jit @Smog

Check, 12... I'll either drop Wednesday or Friday,

Ext? Kinda having a rough night rn

No prob duke.. I'm ready whenever just hit me uo

I bet..
... U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write

Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
.9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow

. U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
^dope
3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
^nah
I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
^lol
U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
^ok
So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
^ok
N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write
^damn lol

Vs.

Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
^lol nice tie-ins
Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
.9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
^nice
U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
^nah. Maybe if u said Bloka instead
Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
^Lol but played
U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
^might of seen that wp b4 but cool bar
Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
^lol ok bar



Best verse I've seen from jit, but I liked smogs personal angles


V/smog

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by plethora

. U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
^dope
3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
^nah
I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
^lol
U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
^ok
So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
^ok
N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write
^damn lol

Vs.

Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
^lol nice tie-ins
Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
.9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
^nice
U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
^cool bar.
Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
^Lol but played
U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
^might of seen that wp b4 but cool bar
Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
^lol ok bar



Best verse I've seen from jit, but I liked smogs personal angles


V/smog

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Had to edit my vote. I reread the mega blok line and it was good. Vote still stands tho..

Good battle some solid punches from both sided. Believe smog came with the harder hits today, had the better flow in his verse too. Overall not alot between the two imo but my vote goes to smog.

I dont think smog had any misses. pretty dope verse tbh. the lethargic bar would be your lightest but other than that nice verse. This was one of Dills better verses. very entertaining. i think loose screw and mega blok were a miss thoiugh. everything else was pretty decent.

v. smog...more personal and consistent

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Originally Posted by Smog

I bet..
... U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
I really don't like this. I don't feel like it's clever.

3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
Eh. This is kind of clever but doesn't really feel like anything.

I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
I don't love this. I don't know if I get it -- feel free to PM me. Jit I get. Ters. Ers. ? I get Jitters and creeps. PM me.

U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
Idk man.. The whole setup is a throw away. And it's such a low impact gun bar. Like, it doesn't say anything new or say an old thing in an interesting new way.

So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
Eh. I like the concept but I feel the execution is lazy. instead of setting up construction site you just said it. This is my fave bar so far though.

N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write
I mean... people read all his shit. This is a contenders battle

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Honestly? I know before I even look at the votes that people are gonna love his verse. Smog, I don't hate you. I obviously respect what you do. But I literally feel like this verse is the quintessential RB verse --- says nothing new, nothing creative. But because people "get" every punch immediately, they love it. I don't think it was super personal. I don't think it was super creative. But I do think this verse is gonna win the battle, even without seeing JD's. It is just the RB verse of all RB verses.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Jit

Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
I don't love this.

Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
.9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
Don't love this. The concept is better than this execution. Two x's. Crossed lines. Etc.

U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
This was weak. There really isn't a punchline here. It's not concise and the image isn't strong.

Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
I don't like punches like this. It's not that interesting. It's not personal. It's just kinda generic.

U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
Lazy punches the whole time man.

Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
No thanks

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VOTE Smog. Honestly this was a disappointing battle, but I bet the peepers here are gonna love it. Everything was played. None of the concepts were creatively executed. All of the images and most punches were generic. And I didn't get a feeling like "oh that's clever" on any of the bars.

I bet..
... U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
good
3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
cmon bro i aint researching this
I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
ha, ok
U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
not bad
So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
nice!
N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write
not bad



Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
good
Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
.9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
ok
U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
alright not bad
Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
funny!
U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
not bad
Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
ha, ok

smog, i thought construction zone line was dope, i think it might be the line of the battle, everything else i felt you both were neck and neck. jit, this probably wasn't your best week but you still put up a good fight. another close one so props to both, giving it to smog.

Smog wins