Re: From My Heart to Yours
very solid and emotional piece. and amazing usage of vocabulary.
the read was great, but i got stuck on a couple of words, lol. but
thank god for AOL's dictionary, lol.
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This feeling that overwhelms my mind, heart, body and soul
With most omniscient power and devotion, yet
Like the Universe it knows not bounds
For it expands and grows endless
In your presence and absence both
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^very dope and worded nicely.
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For only he could personify all the virtues and beauty’s
In your silhouette; angels are but prototypes in your comparison
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^this is just a very beautiful part of the piece.
the wording and shit made it real solid.
thanks for the read, man, cuz it really was worth it.
keep up the good work and im sure ill be sticking around to
read more from you. so, until than, peace out.