NEW SONG - OKAY! (PlayWryte)

Its been a while since I've been on here, would appreciate feedback!

https://soundcloud.com/playwryte/okay

OKAY (Lyrics)

Hook x2
Okay
You know me,
But that dont mean that we homies
Okay
You sorry,
But where the fuck was you always
Okay
Its on,
But I’m too far gone
No way,
Just faded
In all the best ways, ya

Verse
Okay, now its time to be real
As I’m winding the reel, keep ya eye on the film
Lets take it back, to the night of the deal
Its more than a moment, whole life that I feel
I feel like you hated me, feeling enabled me
It gave me a greater need, say it creatively
Years in the making, blood, sweat, tears and patience
Its more than a moment, you’ll feel this creation
I spun that shit backwards, It's love that I’m after
But once that is captured, I’m done with this chapter
Its all pyschological, mind is an obstacle
No moment of silence, I find to be possible
On the quietest of days, it felt like a race
No sleep for the mind, I’d lie there awake
I never stopped writing, the come up was crucial
I wanted approval, but what would that do though
Few minutes of fame, you all knew my name
But now that its over, a few that remain
Its all just a cycle, I’m back stuck in idle
I wanted the title, but never this tidal
Cause this tidal wave, got my mind astray
But I spun that shit backwards, finding my way
On October sky, I’m waving good bye
But til that day comes, I say look alive

Hook x2
Okay
You know me,
But that dont mean that we homies
Okay
You sorry,
But where the fuck was you always
Okay
Its on,
But I’m too far gone
No way,
Just faded
In all the best ways, ya

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I like your style and the topic - the chorus the most

Appreciate it!