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Frame of Mind
Frame of mind
The day's of long ago, no humans, no intelligence to follow
A simple creation sparked relations to make life, we now know
Call it what you want, call it God.. or maybe unknown miracle
I was born & grew up on flat land, that's on the outside spherical
I follow the food chain, I live to eat what others eat to live..
It's survival; of the fittest, the bottom group was put here to give.
Like Jesus, gave his holy & sacred life for human sacrifice..
healed the wounded, gave, preached his word to make things right
Forget Pilot's spite, he did it.. so we too can die & walk in light
Kinda like the frogs, insects, and fish who reside first at the ladder
And not for tickets at a showing, but to die - & us it doesn't matter
And it doesn't, they follow fate - let it grasp & take em' by the hand
Maybe recarnate in a later life, the truth of word is what I demand
Time's Change quick, but go slow and call it redundant
But this word is truth; we're only half way to the summit
Our creation will lead on, live on; carry fables till another day
Before ya know it, we're gone-creation-Time's change in another way
Before Sacred Scriptures, Gods, Goddesses- before heros- empires
Fossils showed Dinosaurs, Jarassic ages took this world in its entire
We don't really know as much as we claim - facts are in bone material
The world set ablaze, scorching heat diminished evidence here and all
Through B.C. years, Moses parts the Red Sea, Noah, regions Arctic
Medieval times & Renaissance Era, that of Athens and Spartic
Up to the modern day, technologically advanced, brain waves ecsquisit
Cerebral knowledge, cells, hell.. chromosomes- all types to be specific..
Athletics & the Olympics, the critics & those bastards called poparatzee
Fortune & fame is not how it used to be, now it's formed in a posse'
In the old west followin' somebody, would be rollin the dice- yhatzee..
Odds on doubles, slip up & 2 colts to your head, snake eyes- got me?
Time's Change quick, but go slow and call it redundant
But this word is truth; we're only half way to the summit
Our creation will lead on, live on; carry fables till another day
Before ya know it, we're gone-creation-Time's change in another way
We've now gone past-to-present, as insight to time long ago
And the clock tic'ed centuries, to my pen, this piece now shown..
All the births & deaths, beginning and ends, this world provided
All the wars n' rage, innocent slay'n, conclusions one- sided
Can't hide it, it's written in words, spoken, taken in books..
Can find it in a library, or house.. anywhere, see what freedom took
History in its finest, but not the boring kind, one of passion
Everything is history the next day, yesterday & all your actions..
Time's do change, believe it.. cause it's relevant to the next generation
Ideas & wisdom gained, a new chance for next seeds non-segregation
More or less crime, downtown urban school's prevent- less hazing
Ethnic relations a lot more common, white, cuban, baby Asian
Throwin' concepts, givin' you a new frame of mind, let you decide..
Seconds in life tick right now as this pen unwinds...
Unveiling my words from top to bottom,
Everything takes time- Spring to Autumn
And I sit back peaceful, not to hide.. but I'll tell you why..
Knowledge has been gained, these perplex ideas on supply.. can't deny
Time's Change quick, but go slow and call it redundant
But this word is truth; we're only half way to the summit
Our creation will lead on, live on; carry fables till another day
Before ya know it, we're gone-creation-Time's change in another way
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Linked:
Ace- Story of you and me
Char-lee- A son's life
Leave feedback on this... might be my best.
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lyrically this was great.........but I just can't get in to stuff like this no hate cuz other than the fact that it dosen't spark my intrest it was great!!!!!! good job and keep doin yo thang
peace
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no doubt this was dope man.
fav. lines in first verse:
I follow the food chain, I live to eat what others eat to live..
It's survival; of the fittest, the bottom group was put here to give.
2nd:
Athletics & the Olympics, the critics & those bastards called poparatzee
Fortune & fame is not how it used to be, now it's formed in a posse'
In the old west followin' somebody, would be rollin the dice- yhatzee..
Odds on doubles, slip up & 2 colts to your head, snake eyes- got me?
3rd:
History in its finest, but not the boring kind, one of passion
Everything is history the next day, yesterday & all your actions..
the whole "frame of mind" in this was apparent. its quite obvious that this piece took a whole lot of thought in several degrees and for that i commend you. excellent piece man,the flow was something and the writer's voice showed supreme intellect. brilliant work Cam, when it came to imagery i just imagined someone who couldn't fall asleep at life, reflecting on the world in his eyes and through time. great way to make this come together man.
props.
peACE
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uppin, thanks for the legends nomination. It was very honoring. But after a few people said no cause they were pissed at other things, it got closed down. Would've liked more opinions... (of people i actually respect) but a certain few ruined that.
more feedback anyway, please.
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this shit was lyriccal dope and u smokin it
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This was real hot, i mean.. every line i read got me more into it, you just need more emotion.. but this was a great piece.
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thanks, upp.. 1 - 2 sentence feedback is okay. its better then nothing.
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all these views.. only 1 good feedback... lets go.
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yeah thats retarted about only one good feed back lol
I liked this piece alot it showed that you put alot of thought in it by the way it was wrttin liking the flow and the way it was structured also the content wise it was very deep. You put a lot of emotion in this piece and it shows
Athletics & the Olympics, the critics & those bastards called poparatzee
Fortune & fame is not how it used to be, now it's formed in a posse'
Liking the way you used the imegry to you advantage also dope piece keep them comming
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Word, this was a dope piece man.
Imagery, emotion, rhyme scheme and flow was all here. Could tell u put alot into this, tho i do gotta admit i lost interest halfway in, then got it back towards da end. Words sometimes confused me, but thats only cuz i aint sure on long ass words n complex shit n shit. But overall, this was a good drop, keep at it mayn.
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thanks guys.. i'll be sure to hit that up, woog.
uppn,,
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