Cross Site Tag-Team
Round 1
Verses Due To Myself and/or Seanzo: Wednesday 11:59pm EST
@Bobby Bigelow @Amen @King @KBomb
Good Luck
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wednesday like in two days?
Yes, 8 lines 2 days.
8 lines per team or 8 lines per person?Quote:
Originally Posted by Elvis Freshley
either way check
8 lines per person. 16 lines per team.
@Amen where u at reply to my PM on RMBVA
Yerp.
@Fresh missed this one dude
@Bobby Bigelow & Body Bags (@Randy)
(Body)King n Kb ain't no tough obstacle,just hit n run victims when bags ready to kill
So watch me run over top competition like Tony Stewarts behind the wheel
(Bob)KBomb married to his Mod duties, This kid destined to be alone and silent
Only time you see him spreadin a broad (abroad) is catchin the Ebola virus
(Body)I'll Suplex KB ass, then step on his abdomen till his intestines r in plain sight
Shit the way I'll be stompin entrails you'd think I enjoy going on hikes
N Seriously, King WTF happen to u?,I used think that your verses were so fly
Until u went on a killing spree in FL,then ironically got destroyed in FL by that guy
(Bob)After this robbery ya'll can catch a bullet so dont even hype these clowns
Keep darin(Darren) me an I will son(Wilson) em by execution like Michael Brown
(Body)I'm the type to do a home invasion,kick down the door n rape ya spouse.
N after I give that bitch the pipe bomb.. I'ma use one to blow up ya house
(Bob)King killed larry but word on the street is you hand picked your opponent
Extra week(weak) for them punches n still couldnt land a heavy hit when u throwin
This a game to ya'll? Welcome to my side of the board, u can already see that u lost
No checkers but you'll find King doubled up when I place that piece at his top
@King & @KBomb
King
Bob an awful disgrace. I clap on him, but no gun talk in this place
Just hands makin noise...Combos soundin like applause comin off of his face
U got a new partner instead of no showin. Theres a bad decision
Now ur just fucked...ironic that Amen ended the only prayer u had at winning.
Cuz they fake I can tell. n Bobbys new partner aint gonna help
Dude picked up body bags as if he wasn't enuff dead weight by himselft
n God damn ur a cock loving queer. Theres srsly nothing planer
So honestly Bigelow, Bodysuits u perfect...cuz he's clearly a fuckin flamer
KBomb
Remember that we're both mods, so while you two gettin' served's the plan
If we lose, we'll just delete the threads and hit you both with perma-bans
Bomb n King let them rockets ring, watch out for what that drama bring
Calm your team, or you'll think you're in a Doolittle sequel when we let the llamas sing
roll up to your crib, take aim at you and your fam
eye to the scope, see body in a circle like the vitruvian man
Bobby don't know, but I stalk the kid while I palm the fifth, he's never expecting me
When I pop up, that cannon take half his head off like a hemispherectomy
VsQuote:
N Seriously, King WTF happen to u?,I used think that your verses were so fly
Until u went on a killing spree in FL,then ironically got destroyed in FL by that guy
(Bob)After this robbery ya'll can catch a bullet so dont even hype these clowns
Keep darin(Darren) me an I will son(Wilson) em by execution like Michael Brown
Quote:
U got a new partner instead of no showin. Theres a bad decision
Now ur just fucked...ironic that Amen ended the only prayer u had at winning.
Cuz they fake I can tell. n Bobbys new partner aint gonna help
Dude picked up body bags as if he wasn't enuff dead weight by himselft
Both had some decent punches, but as you can see above I was feeling King & KBomb's more.Quote:
Bomb n King let them rockets ring, watch out for what that drama bring
Calm your team, or you'll think you're in a Doolittle sequel when we let the llamas sing
Vote - King & KBomb
bobby and body:
N Seriously, King WTF happen to u?,I used think that your verses were so fly
Until u went on a killing spree in FL,then ironically got destroyed in FL by that guy
NOT BAD, OK PERSONAL, NOT VERY HARD THO
After this robbery ya'll can catch a bullet so dont even hype these clowns
Keep darin(Darren) me an I will son(Wilson) em by execution like Michael Brown
GOOD CONCEPT, CURRENT EVENT, BUT FORCED..STILL NOT BAD THO
vs
kbomb and king:
Bob an awful disgrace. I clap on him, but no gun talk in this place
Just hands makin noise...Combos soundin like applause comin off of his face
I APPROVE OF THIS..GOOD LINE
U got a new partner instead of no showin. Theres a bad decision
Now ur just fucked...ironic that Amen ended the only prayer u had at winning.
ANOTHER GOOD ONE
Cuz they fake I can tell. n Bobbys new partner aint gonna help
Dude picked up body bags as if he wasn't enuff dead weight by himselft
I LIKED THIS ONE AS WELL
Bomb n King let them rockets ring, watch out for what that drama bring
Calm your team, or you'll think you're in a Doolittle sequel when we let the llamas sing
THIS WAS DOPE
vote king and k bomb
bobby and bbags were ok, but just not enough for king and kbomb.
kbomb got those multies and fluid flow, but some of his punches were lacking..king carried this round tbh
@Bobby Bigelow & Body Bags (@Randy)
(Body)King n Kb ain't no tough obstacle,just hit n run victims when bags ready to kill
So watch me run over top competition like Tony Stewarts behind the wheel
^^^3/5 could have been executed better but this wasn’t a bad punch.
(Bob)KBomb married to his Mod duties, This kid destined to be alone and silent
Only time you see him spreadin a broad (abroad) is catchin the Ebola virus
^^^3/5 This was cool
(Body)I'll Suplex KB ass, then step on his abdomen till his intestines r in plain sight
Shit the way I'll be stompin entrails you'd think I enjoy going on hikes
N Seriously, King WTF happen to u?,I used think that your verses were so fly
Until u went on a killing spree in FL,then ironically got destroyed in FL by that guy
^^^ 6.5/10 first couplet was meh didn’t really land for me, and the second couplet was almost ruined by wording (repeating FL) but still hit pretty well.
(Bob)After this robbery ya'll can catch a bullet so dont even hype these clowns
Keep darin(Darren) me an I will son(Wilson) em by execution like Michael Brown
^^^ 4/5 fuck it I thought this was pretty dope. Michael Brown is a big deal right now so it’s cool that you used the concept plus you linked in the cop decently.
(Body)I'm the type to do a home invasion,kick down the door n rape ya spouse.
N after I give that bitch the pipe bomb.. I'ma use one to blow up ya house
^^^ 3.5/5 this was simple but pretty effective I liked it.
(Bob)King killed larry but word on the street is you hand picked your opponent
Extra week(weak) for them punches n still couldnt land a heavy hit when u throwin
This a game to ya'll? Welcome to my side of the board, u can already see that u lost
No checkers but you'll find King doubled up when I place that piece at his top
^^^ 7/10 first couplet was alright, to the point. I was digging the second couplet/closer though. The checkers thing might be played but I haven’t seen it so I think it’s cool.
Overall: 27/40 this was pretty cool you guys worked together fairly well. Some cool punches, some not so tough stuff. Overall though I enjoyed the verse.
@King & @KBomb
King
Bob an awful disgrace. I clap on him, but no gun talk in this place
Just hands makin noise...Combos soundin like applause comin off of his face
^^^ 4/5 the flow on this was sick, and the punch was clever too
U got a new partner instead of no showin. Theres a bad decision
Now ur just fucked...ironic that Amen ended the only prayer u had at winning.
^^^ 4/5 This was sick as well. The concept of Amen being literal is always done but I definitely liked your play at it
Cuz they fake I can tell. n Bobbys new partner aint gonna help
Dude picked up body bags as if he wasn't enuff dead weight by himselft
^^^ 4/5 see above haha
n God damn ur a cock loving queer. Theres srsly nothing planer
So honestly Bigelow, Bodysuits u perfect...cuz he's clearly a fuckin flamer
^^^ 3.5/5 this was cool, just wasn’t as clever/hard as the rest so I didn’t like it as the closer for your verse compared to everything else.
KBomb
Remember that we're both mods, so while you two gettin' served's the plan
If we lose, we'll just delete the threads and hit you both with perma-bans
^^^ 3.5/5 this made me “lol” haha
Bomb n King let them rockets ring, watch out for what that drama bring
Calm your team, or you'll think you're in a Doolittle sequel when we let the llamas sing
^^^3.5/5 this was slick, I enjoyed it wish the set-up was a little harder
roll up to your crib, take aim at you and your fam
eye to the scope, see body in a circle like the vitruvian man
^^^ 4/5 what?! de Vinci bars on deck!? Nice man.
Bobby don't know, but I stalk the kid while I palm the fifth, he's never expecting me
When I pop up, that cannon take half his head off like a hemispherectomy
^^^3.5/5 pretty solid closer here nice job using hemispherectomy in a rhyme haha
Overall: 30/40 You guys both came really solid here. King your verse (until the closer) was on fire. I was digging it the whole way through and the flow was on point. Bomb you had awesome stuff too don’t let the lower points confuse you he was just slightly more polished this time around.
Vote - King-Bomb… they just came more clever and harder. And had more polished bars.