This mother fucker said he would battle if I set it up, so here we go. Let's go for 20 lines/10 bars. Due by midnight tomorrow. Don't let the door hit you in the ass on your way to failure bitch.
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This mother fucker said he would battle if I set it up, so here we go. Let's go for 20 lines/10 bars. Due by midnight tomorrow. Don't let the door hit you in the ass on your way to failure bitch.
Look in the call out section dumb fuck, I said 12 lines (6 bars) due Friday, take it or leave it you fucking worthless herb
I'm anger prone and laser focused,
you wanker nose, your claims are bogus
insults ain't your onus, your lines are too long to make your flow fit
they should call you filler styles, so many words, no flavor noticed
rhyming like a stale potato, flowing like you ate your own dick
catastrophe, sad to see, blah blah blabbity blabbity,
you rap shitty faggoty played ass bars from the lavatory
you laughably lack the means to neuro-plastically combat with me
as I collapse the seams of gravity with intergalactic free-rhapsodies
in the cavities between super-clusters, and quantum static seas
you ain't got no stylez, I sprout new stylez with magic beans
you're a whoreson, with forced puns, poor ones, you're done
you're mom smoked so much crack you didn't even form lungs
you're a hypoxemic crack baby, thinkin' "perhaps maybe they'll think I'm a sworn thug-
if I act crazy and don't admit I whack daily on pornhub"
if you whacked off less, your raps may be less wack, so write a track daily and do more drugs
I killed your stylez, left your filler stylez in piles that look like hills for miles
filled your pie hole with knuckle sandwiches till' you're quite full
you ain't ill, you're a filtered vial of diseased liver bile
I'm FactMachine, your bitter rival, your skills are miles below me...
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Too late bitch, 20 lines or you forfeit.
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Don't be a lazy cocksucker, this is short enough as it is piss ant.
we didn't agree on verse length or time due, you just went and took a big shit all over this and other posts, so I'll reply when I feel like it you fucking retarded faggit
What's the matter pussy, you want less bars because it's going to take you a week just to come up with a single line?Quote:
Originally Posted by Killer Stylez
@Fact Machine
Bitch thought he had me on the run....
Fuck this lame!....
I gotta try harder.. lately I've just been coasting with practice…
but this time I'll have to come correct... you for posting that wack shit…
I’m killin niggaz at random, out of a hat I pull names, and pick-souls…
Punches just flying out ya screen, leavin blood drippin from ya pixels…
Bitch I’ll put you on the run, I know your yearnin' to flee…
If one punch connects you’ll be Lookin' over your Shoulder permanently…
Fag Machine gets shut down relentlessly, that's why he's with a web ho…
Live dating is in, you should get with it.......but even "it" would say no…
Fuck politeness, you're a fake. Actin hard on the forums, and tryna fight…
Call yourself Fact Machine, so why do you lie and bullshit everytime you write?...
Fuck your vocabulary and whack multis, we know what your verse brings…
This British fag tryin to look hard and convince voters, but your loss is a sure thing…
Wack Machine trying to act hard, but he’s a bitch, never will this foreigner strive!...
He’s fucking hopeless! Only way he’ll ever be cold is after the local coroners arrive…
No one cares about you, after this deadly beating, you’ll leave no mourners weepin’…
So whats your options? Lets explore all avenues, and find you a dumpster to sleep in…
I made jokes, but I don't care where ya from, the UK or overseas, ur still the worse…
I could give two fucks about a European, I'll still take a shit all over ur verse…
So go on now bitch, copy and paste my shit, click print, then commence to rippin it to pieces…
That’s the only way you could ever shred my verse or even come close to competin’…
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@Dia @KnowP
Can you open for votes?
KS got this. I didnt' read the hwole thing but he just seemed better. SO MANY MULTI SYLABICS. CRZY.
Fags machine flowed nice, It seemed like he wrote it to mims this is why im hot beat. If you read it to that, it's better.
DOPE BATTLE GUIZ. GOOD SHIt.
VOTE KILLLLLLERSisles
Fact Machine is more focused on creating multi's, but nothing really hits, and the closer didn't even rhyme, the verse seemed rushed and kinda lazy....
The one bar I liked out of his verse, but the set-up did not coincide with the punch.... so was it a hit?
"you're a whoreson, with forced puns, poor ones, you're done
you're mom smoked so much crack you didn't even form lungs"
Killer Stylez had some misses but better attempts at creating punches, and a couple hit....he does need to try and make his verse "Flow" better tho...
Vote Killer Stylez
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I gotta try harder.. lately I've just been coasting with practice…
but this time I'll have to come correct... you for posting that wack shit…
ok, so clearly fact machine wrote some generic bars and tried to just apply it to Killer...u cant menation his name 3 or 4 times and act like the verse is about him... cause it was not... ur whole beginning was just tired multis....
Killer wins just by posting a half decent bar...
v- Killer
Who the fuck is killer styles and HOW THE FUCK CAN ANYONE WRITE NOTHING BUT GENERIC BARS ABOUT HIM.
LETS MEE TAKE 69 POSTS AND TURN THAT INTO SOME MAGICAL PERSONALS THAT"LLL PLZ GRIIIIM REAPERSZZZ STOOPID AZH.
FUCK.
killers gets my vote again, grim reaper 10 lines due in 20 mins go!
1.firstly, shut the fuck up....Quote:
Originally Posted by MUKBANG
2. THIS aint the call out spot
3. see #1
3-0...
It's ova....
It's an objective obvious fact that my verse was better than his. Everyone votes against me based on nothing but a general dislike for me, there is no basis for it other than that.
Enough with the crybaby pitty me no one likes me freeposting!! You don't vote, you write lazy verses that you somehow think are magical fucking scripts that cant defeat anyone, fuck!! You lost, enough with the bullshit free posting! Maybe somebody in the UK told ya you was dope or something, idk, or your ego is just that big.... but either way, you lost, now GTFOH
Thought Fact machine did good, was off to a good start but the whole rappity lines didn't have much punchline impact. Killer Styles showed wittiness from the opener, also I liked the personal attacks like him being a foreigner.
Killer Styles gets my vote for punchlines that were executed better
-fact machine: i wasnt impressed. It was just a lot of nice flow with bad concepts. Nothing really that jumped out as clever or witty. This might have been better on a track but as text, wasnt feeling it. Nothing quotable.
-killer styles: you had poor concepts as well. the only difference is you executed ur attempts a bit better. you did a somewhat better job of attacking your opponent.
neither of you should have went 20.
vote: KS
Killer styles had more punches i really didnt see any in Factmachines verse, tbh i think ur a troll dude trying to get LOLs with the way u dropped.
v/ Killer
Killer Stylez was pathetic compared to me. Damn, you ass holes must be spite-voting because I make you all look like failures at this shit.
This is ridiculous. Killer styles wins by DQ. Closed.