WK 4:JEM.(1-1) Vs King(0-0) - King Wins

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@JEM. @King

going 2

Me too.

Ur girl gave me head for good luck, then said kill em. It's so true
She see Jem in a box n that bitch screamin YES!! like she got proposed to

JEMs Bar



Ha! This faggots sweet, a lacking G, the way I killed ya kin is scary
Made the web stir, & if you looking for family, get an e'fn dictionary

King got this one. Even with the MOST OBVIOUS flip of his name.

Not seeing how JEM bar was even an insult. Told him to get a dictionary if he's looking for fam? How does that even make sense?

Am I missing something here?

King.

Jem had a really cool idea. I like that u added some tie ins. End ya kin/fam webster/dictionary

Uu were just worried about making ur wp work and having tie ins which u had so props for that, now u just gotta execute it in a way that makes more sense and is harsh. Good shit tho im seein the improvement

Kings bar was good. Jem in a box was an obv np, but i aint seen it and it was executed in a comedic way, so even if i had it would still be solid here prolly

Good shit bros

King

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Originally Posted by Meth

Jem had a really cool idea. I like that u added some tie ins. End ya kin/fam webster/dictionary

Uu were just worried about making ur wp work and having tie ins which u had so props for that, now u just gotta execute it in a way that makes more sense and is harsh. Good shit tho im seein the improvement

Kings bar was good. Jem in a box was an obv np, but i aint seen it and it was executed in a comedic way, so even if i had it would still be solid here prolly

Good shit bros

King

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i fully agree w this
if yall want me to reword the same thing, i will

v/k

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Originally Posted by Amen

King got this one. Even with the MOST OBVIOUS flip of his name.

Not seeing how JEM bar was even an insult. Told him to get a dictionary if he's looking for fam? How does that even make sense?

Am I missing something here?

King.

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yes.

Jem- decent wordplay. Seemed a bit choppy to read. Also wasnt very harsh. But not bad tbh

King-urs was kinda predictable. But i thought "proposed to" was more complex than it was. I thought u was going for :
Proposed to/she suggests u kill him
Proposed to/ marriage

But it wasnt that. Lol still hit.

Vote king

Jem had a coo concept but execution was all over. Kings was pretty solid.

Vote King

For some reason I feel Jem did waaaaay to much here.. like the lacking G plays a factor as well as e'fn but tbh I can't put it together..all the other tie ins were cool but I felt the bar as a whole shoulda been dumbed down a bit.. King just had an effective np that landed.. good shit y'all..





King

6-0 king wins