All the Stars

All The Stars
https://youtu.be/GfCqMv--ncA

Nah i feel it on me
It felt real but then he let them do it to me
He sat there and watched, he never waited, he wanted to be with everyone else
While he left me in the field collecting war belts
So just imagine what it FELT like waking up to a nightmare
Knowing I respected less with that cold stare
When I really wanted to spit
Do he even know who he dealing with?
It’s not the moral to the story
I put my entire life to it
Knowing he didn’t even break me off a little bit
So what do I do? I just sit...
Pacing... sick, cause I was still wishing he’d be it
LOVE!! I thought finally found it
But hey it’s better then the one wanting that dick

Link one: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...72-Robbin-Hood

Link two: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...of-Punchlines)

Message was here, the structure was not. Thing was, the lines threw this way off. So flow was choppy as hell. I dug the topic, but the structure killed any chance this had to be dope. Not hating, keep writing.