want to get some critics on this battle verse

the guy i was battling had recently lost to Gayman

Good job dawg…a GayMan fucked yo ass up
Poor thug …yo face an his cock got a closeup
U should duck me again G, should let me be
Now I gotta duck u cos that gay dude gave u H.I.V
U rhyme like ur 14, da fuck u know about being witty
Betcha u’ll cum the first time u feel a titty
My 1st verse was shitty……Bro, Im humble
But u still less African than Bryant Gumbel
Bitch ass punk I see your will ready to crumble
So, next time bring your skill n get ready to rumble.