5 bars/10 lines..
Due in 30 mins..
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5 bars/10 lines..
Due in 30 mins..
Checkin in........ 30 mins........................
IIght, due date changed until he checks in.. I'm not wasting a verse on a no show..
yo wtf is this? 30mins no
make it due tomorrow night theres no rush i got other shit to do, ight?
Lmao, w/e, up to you.. Whatsa matter? Can't have a quick battle? You gotta key it for hours? Like fuck, atleast make it due by 12 tonite..
no dude i got shit to do tonite, ill type it up tomorrow morning, whats it matter? chill tomorrow night,
W/e, have it tomorrow mornin/afternoon then at the latest..
Alright let's do this. Here's my verse. Sorry man my comp was real fucked tonight so i had to get rid of this virus. but yeah here it is.
My rhymes are like dynamite, they explode if you push the button
How can your flow be so off? Maybe you gave up on something?
But you plan to keep at it...I combust like twin planets
I crushed your winning average, your more spaced than teeth ravages
I plan to make records and put your career to an end real fast
Battling in my sleep, fuck game systems, I'll give you a dreamcast
So my lines enter your respiratory, making it hard for you to breathe
Instantly causing you to shake involuntarily like Parkinson's Disease
Talksick owns me? Not even if he were my slave owner
Your rhymes are moving North, the way they keep getting colder
Battle this bitch, I don't give a fuck,-yous-a-wack--
I'mma make like your 'avy' and 'cut-you-in-half'--
And 'smoke ya like weed', you outta-be-'boxed'--
I'm 'just gettin started', n yet you 'already-lost'--
*Pumps up*
Givin random scars, you the 'nail' as I 'hammer'-bars--
And ya only got 'so many options' like 'Standard-cars'--
So leave tha board-pronto son, who's the 'Mondo-Thugs'?--
Prolly 'shoot guns' but ya couldn't make a song-'blow-up'--
If ya rhymes 'grew fur' they couldn't be more-'bear'able--
Cuz just like your 'Open Mics', '...~!You're-Terrible!~...'--
nice ass battle. if i could vote i'll pick Standard.
LMAO @ you..
Uppin for some real votes^^^^^^^^^
Last uppin^^......................................
Close one...
Standard - I felt you had a lot of creative ideas in your verse. Unfortunately, creativity doesn't always win battles. Your shit just didn't really hit him hard. The teeth ravages line was hot, but the rest...eh. Like the dream cast line... umm, I don't get it, how is that a punch? The parkinson's disease was nice, you just wrote it wrong. Like the way you wrote it, it was just a statement.. if you just moved the words around you could have made it hit hard.
Talksick - You came pretty played and not as witty, but your punches hit and that's what counts. You came much more personal with the diss of standard cars and the one about Mondo Thugs. Your closer was pretty weak, as was the opener, but about everything in the middle was decent and was hitting so you take this by a slim margin
Vote - Talksick
Please return the favor
ight 1-0 talksick
lets get a few more votes in,eh?
uppin
Talksick took this cause he had more personals. Standard you had a good flow and good punches but they were a little to original. But at the end Talksick killed it.
vote Talksick
If I could...i'd vote for none of you. But I have to...so i'll vote for TalkSick. Why? That standard verse could of been used against anybody...didn't get really personal or anything...atleast talksick attempted that...
"Talksick owns me? Not even if he were my slave owner
Your rhymes are moving North, the way they keep getting colder"
^You gotta come creative man...can't drop shit that you know that others have posted like 20 billion times...
v/ - Talksick...I gave a short breakdown...but it's self-explanitory...
Standard- You didnt come weak but alot of you shit just wasnt connecting. or hard
ex:
How can your flow be so off? Maybe you gave up on something?
eh, i mean good flow but not really anything effective dawg.
Talksick- Hes def better and more advanced, on a differnet level than this cat. ATLEAST in this battle it would appear that way. Standard is good for where hes at now, im guessing hes new. Anyways talksick had some nice personals, good flow and decent punches. So imma v/Talk sick
hit me back with the battle in my sig.
v/talksick
Standard.... ur too standard... get a better flow goin.. pik up on multis and shoot em faster... needs some structure to ya verse
Talksick- Decent verse.. worked better then standards cuz everything just hit better...
nice flow...