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You've checked the flow of a lotta pricks, I see why ya been called Know P
cuz u take a backpacker's image, doctor it n ur all O.G.
Ya lack direction, ya follow me? Ya need to find an occupation
and get off the site...there's no virtue in your life of moderation
There ain't bread in being super mod, it ain't a job that ya do fer fees
it's a silly act, so there's no Wonder that ya pockets are gluten free
So positively sick, it's funny, I could make Magic Johnson's AIDS a joke
No offense, but he's kicking game with plays that go two ways at most
Watch me trip, I'll lift some spirits but won't offer em a praise or boast
that just means Ill raise the toast that ends up turning K to ghost
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Jersey fresh…. Negro please
This faggot don’t want static, you’re barely above average
I usually don’t have my opponents back, but this time I’ll take a stab at it
Put this contender in a trauma center for tyrina get savage
have your body with more needles in your arm than a meth addict
your bars are something to drool over, you put us to sleep quick
haven’t seen a pussy put this many niggas to sleep this once since freak nick
dog you gotta be vexed, get wrecked for getting amped
leave ya brain more twisted than media during a Kanye rant
u monogamous or not? I don’t care. Do what suites you
but ya girl be making my stick shift while you trying to remain neutral
You've checked the flow of a lotta pricks, I see why ya been called Know P
cuz u take a backpacker's image, doctor it n ur all O.G.
I think i get get it but it didn't connect
Ya lack direction, ya follow me? Ya need to find an occupation
and get off the site...there's no virtue in your life of moderation
This was okay
There ain't bread in being super mod, it ain't a job that ya do fer fees
it's a silly act, so there's no Wonder that ya pockets are gluten free
meh
So positively sick, it's funny, I could make Magic Johnson's AIDS a joke
No offense, but he's kicking game with plays that go two ways at most
meh
Watch me trip, I'll lift some spirits but won't offer em a praise or boast
that just means Ill raise the toast that ends up turning K to ghost
not feeling it
vs
This faggot don’t want static, you’re barely above average
I usually don’t have my opponents back, but this time I’ll take a stab at it
nice opener
Put this contender in a trauma center for tyrina get savage
have your body with more needles in your arm than a meth addict
nah
your bars are something to drool over, you put us to sleep quick
haven’t seen a pussy put this many niggas to sleep this once since freak nick
dont get it
dog you gotta be vexed, get wrecked for getting amped
leave ya brain more twisted than media during a Kanye rant
nah
u monogamous or not? I don’t care. Do what suites you
but ya girl be making my stick shift while you trying to remain neutral
ok
KnowP went easy on Esse but still came out on top. His opener is what won me over. V/KnowP
You've checked the flow of a lotta pricks, I see why ya been called Know P
cuz u take a backpacker's image, doctor it n ur all O.G.
^^ This was a clean jab 3/5
Ya lack direction, ya follow me? Ya need to find an occupation
and get off the site...there's no virtue in your life of moderation
^^ Again short and sweet hit here 3/5
There ain't bread in being super mod, it ain't a job that ya do fer fees
it's a silly act, so there's no Wonder that ya pockets are gluten free
^^ This was a nice follow-up to the previous bar, solid wordplay and execution here. Really dug this one. 4/5
So positively sick, it's funny, I could make Magic Johnson's AIDS a joke
No offense, but he's kicking game with plays that go two ways at most
^^ The magic Johnson/aids/sick angle is a smidgen played out but this was still executed pretty well despite that. 2.5/5
Watch me trip, I'll lift some spirits but won't offer em a praise or boast
that just means Ill raise the toast that ends up turning K to ghost
^^ Very good closer. 3.5/5
Overall – 16/25 you have a very clean delivery with punches. Short and to the point with very little filler. I like this type of style and think it’s very effective. Would like to see more relevant wordplay like the gluten free bar that type of angle works really well with your style. Awesome verse.
This faggot don’t want static, you’re barely above average
I usually don’t have my opponents back, but this time I’ll take a stab at it
^^ Very solid opener, triple entendre executed exceptionally. 4/5
Put this contender in a trauma center for tyrina get savage
have your body with more needles in your arm than a meth addict
^^ Feel like this type of thing has been done quite a bit, good clean little jab nothing spectacular. 2.5/5
your bars are something to drool over, you put us to sleep quick
haven’t seen a pussy put this many niggas to sleep this once since freak nick
^^ At first I thought this was a compliment since drooling over something means you like/want it. But you flipped that pretty well the other direction. (I assume you meant “to sleep at once” instead of “to sleep this once” so I read it as the former. 3/5
dog you gotta be vexed, get wrecked for getting amped
leave ya brain more twisted than media during a Kanye rant
^^ Haha this made me chuckle, Kanye falling apart man. 3.5/5
u monogamous or not? I don’t care. Do what suites you
but ya girl be making my stick shift while you trying to remain neutral
^^ I get the monogamous aspect, since she’d be cheating in this scenario but it still struck me as an awkward question. No less the car angle was cool 3.5/5
Overall – 16.5/25 some pretty cool angles taken here and delivery was nice overall. The opener was really cool which sometimes sucks if the rest of the verse isn’t up to par afterwards. None of your other bars were quite as good imo but they still did the job in their own right.
Vote – Know P got this for me even though Ess had a verse more in tune with my own liking. KnowP just had more oomph behind the punches rather than just finessing. But could easily see this going the other way. Good battle fellas!
You've checked the flow of a lotta pricks, I see why ya been called Know P
cuz u take a backpacker's image, doctor it n ur all O.G.
ok
Ya lack direction, ya follow me? Ya need to find an occupation
and get off the site...there's no virtue in your life of moderation
nah
There ain't bread in being super mod, it ain't a job that ya do fer fees
it's a silly act, so there's no Wonder that ya pockets are gluten free
nah.. i get the wonder bread/gluten concept tho
So positively sick, it's funny, I could make Magic Johnson's AIDS a joke
No offense, but he's kicking game with plays that go two ways at most
who was this aimed at? Magic or Know P?
Watch me trip, I'll lift some spirits but won't offer em a praise or boast
that just means Ill raise the toast that ends up turning K to ghost
ok at best
vs
This faggot don’t want static, you’re barely above average
I usually don’t have my opponents back, but this time I’ll take a stab at it
decent
Put this contender in a trauma center for tyrina get savage
have your body with more needles in your arm than a meth addict
nah
your bars are something to drool over, you put us to sleep quick
haven’t seen a pussy put this many niggas to sleep this once since freak nick
ehh.. most dont even know what freak neek is lol
dog you gotta be vexed, get wrecked for getting amped
leave ya brain more twisted than media during a Kanye rant
like that one
u monogamous or not? I don’t care. Do what suites you
but ya girl be making my stick shift while you trying to remain neutral
nice closer
Know P get my vote for having the better punches. E was decent, but nothing really connected to be hard hitting.
There ain't bread in being super mod, it ain't a job that ya do fer fees
it's a silly act, so there's no Wonder that ya pockets are gluten free
this was nice.. good wordplay, solid punch
Overall verse was ok but a lot of your punches fell short, imo. 2nd and 4th bars were a complete miss for me
vs.
This faggot don’t want static, you’re barely above average
I usually don’t have my opponents back, but this time I’ll take a stab at it
dog you gotta be vexed, get wrecked for getting amped
leave ya brain more twisted than media during a Kanye rant
These two were my favorites.. opening bar was nice and I think the Kanye bar was very solid. First one I've seen since the latest meltdown
Decent battle. Know P was just more solid overall
Vote - Know P
Ya lack direction, ya follow me? Ya need to find an occupation
and get off the site...there's no virtue in your life of moderation
There ain't bread in being super mod, it ain't a job that ya do fer fees
it's a silly act, so there's no Wonder that ya pockets are gluten free
So positively sick, it's funny, I could make Magic Johnson's AIDS a joke
No offense, but he's kicking game with plays that go two ways at most
vs
This faggot don’t want static, you’re barely above average
I usually don’t have my opponents back, but this time I’ll take a stab at it
I thought P's verse was very elementary... needles/ meth addict....the stickshift/neutral line was plain and pretty sure ive seen it used here before. EE's bars were decent but the set ups kinda falter... the flow is better than K's though...
not a great battle, but I thought EE squeaked it out on this one
Gluten free
Vs
Freak nick, Closer lol
Overall: I felt ess had a couple cool concepts in this, one failed to hit & his other [gluten free] bar hit decent at best. I felt there was times in the battle when he wasn't even talking about his opponent. Like when he decided to rap about fucking magic Johnson of all ppl, lol.
Vote: know
5-1 Knowp wins