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How am i supposed to be able to get ahead
When i fell like the world punishing me as if i need discipline
I tried to go to college cause knowledge is clout
But u can take a wolf out the woods but u cant take the woods out
Learn biology wit college teens, me and my niggas excel in botany
So much so, we skip class to learn mo
in my partner room on the 9th flo,
So high up u cant see the herb smoke, when we burn down the balcony
On a college campus u a dummy to not make money, i did it wit ease
U can get mids or kush from me, give me cheese for the G's
Get free food from the caf put it on my tab i do what i please
Good girls tend to fall for the bad boys, naive but lucky for me
Every day a party, go to class hardly but make it to exams
Homework was unheard of, cop a 30 pack of brews from sams
I know u resent but i cooked rocks to vend, in the microwave in my dorm
Be out to the mourn tryna sell out, i look back on it wit scorn
If u got paper u got haters, stalking u plotting they caper
Got in the car to serve a new guy a cutie pie, he pull a glock wit a laser
He say he need the grass and the cash, it was my first time getting robbed
Learned my lesson bought a smith and wesson, thought this should do the job
Now its time to come up, got robbed so ima rob i guess
Conceived a carfull crime, commencing wit contacting my connect
I casually called sounding convincing and direct
Said i need a pound and to meet me, same place i used to shop at
didnt waste no time when i arrived, walked to the car sorry bruh i need mine
Robbed him real quick, no regret the next mourning i felt fine
They say 2 wrongs dont make a right, and karma hit harder
Hard ass knock i know its the pigs, hide the scale and twigs cause i'm smarter
Tell my boy phil to hide his sig and my 40 but he so dumb
Or selfish that he hid his and not mine, in no time they find the gun
I'm like what the fuck getting boogeyed up, next day i make bail
Noon i'm free gotta be out the dorm by 3, tell me expulsion papers in the mail
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So what yall think about the rhyme scheme and the line wit the alliteration.
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upping let me get a lil feed back
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Ok the last up, I guess yall wasn't feeling it. What needs work?
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not bad homie...i was diggin ya concept...but then u switched it up...n went on like hood shyt n robbery...good flow...some good metaphorz...not a bad story n shyt...pretty good lil read...idk why they aint feedin...pplz dropped ALOT of posts lately...i read 20 pieces back to back to back homie...KEEP ON WRITING BRUH!!!
yo RTF on any of my shyt...idc which ones...
