Out the Cradle, In the World ft. Clee

Out the Cradle, In the World
By: Konquerer and Clee

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How is hate..
an outcome of love?
Abandonment; at the
root of misused emotions
True definition
remains undiscovered.
like a childhood memory
that hides under;
the covers in a thunderstorm.

Flashlights that shine,
exposing what vanished
in the night.
Midnight milk run,
don't cry over spilled...

But life keeps moving;
after a tragedy..
Hearts keep beating,
cherishing the clock
and both hands
caressing the time,
they've been given.

Quote:

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A time for love,
a time for hate,
a time for peace,
I swear it's not too late

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history lessons-
tales of war,
spruced by violence
in a crimson highlight,
leading our youth
down the same path
teaching the future
to fear the past.

a struggle to keep
up from the start
to finish the fight,
told to speak
with a loud bark
for even babies bite.

we stand-
open-armed to
a closed society,
where an old dog
with older tricks
can lay down and die
…quietly.



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ascend

Well done lads, this was a subtle read. From what i got out of it, I'd say about love and hate and how the cycle never dies even from a tender age. You guys combined well in this read i can't even tell which one of you wrote what.

Quote:

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But life keeps moving;
after a tragedy..
Hearts keep beating,
cherishing the clock
and both hands
caressing the time,
they've been given.

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I really enjoyed those line because to me, they made a lot of sense. We all rise and fall but time never waits for us. We should be striving for the best out of every situation that we find our selves in. I also liked the personification of the hands of time.

This was a good read, I don't have much negative criticism except that maybe when writing about something as sensitive as love, you should try to exploit as much emotion as you possibly can. Just a thought.

-Tific

This was a pretty nice job, your styles are very similar and mesh well together. Anyway, I liked this. There was some clever lines thrown in there that are worth mentioning such as the 'thunderstorm' line, the 'cherishing the clock' and the 'loud bark for even babies bite' lines. Thought those were the best of the bunch. I do agree with Scientific however, the technical aspect was good. However emotion was there but in parts lacking. Also, I don't really think the picture ties into the topic 'that' well, I mean I know what your getting at but I just don't think it was needed. Anyway stay up guys. Nice job. :)