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Quick drop, bro.
i don't Optimus, shots on point like Jordan n Pippen, son u'll see
but whenever u enter the game, nothin but misses, you a bum Bull, b
ur entertainment value is get'n worse, ya verses hardly get read
niggas Curry ur battles, the way they be hittin nothin but Net
there is no way u can throw leather in this tussle, kid
cuz when niggas beat that ass wit da strap, i noticed u buckle, bitch
yet u keep this going, waitin to be showered wit congratulations n cheers
lookin for a party? nah nigga, we throwin you into tables, napkins n chairs
you gone fission, retirement is near, in every damn battle ur bombs missin
my advice to u is start blog'n shit... hope that gives u a nuclear vision
else your ego gets shredded, all this work Networth, yet nowhere ur headed
grip ur shit back like a ponytail, n maybe we'll finally know where your head is
So yea,
Aye aint up @For Battlin Net, at the very thought he wuld dread
The tech's sound'll plug his brain... n turn him into an audio head!
Ima killer pussy, Ayo immediate family ain't safe once ur gon
Pop ya bitch n shoot any babies by her body, my pull out game is too strong!
U've only battled vs gay attempts, n that fag shit is hard to see kid
Hope the next opp who @Phalanx u, gives a better reach around than he did!
Any vote that can stomach this yung niggas Bslapped, wuld be good
Cos after the shit u threw up, I'm sure this kidSIQ for not backin out when he could!
I just wish you was smarter dude, I prayer learnin from things past
I mean bro u lost every battle from that thread.. of hope that u never seem to have!
...Mad I'd accept the rematch when I shuld get the freeze...
.......Cos if E.Coli 'm prolly too heated to notice wit dis ease....!
Pz
Good drop, bro.
Aeeyo
i don't Optimus, shots on point like Jordan n Pippen, son u'll see
but whenever u enter the game, nothin but misses, you a bum Bull, b
could have been fresh but bumble bee doesnt tie in anywhere else in the bar except with optimus which is also oddly placed and doesnt really mesh with whats going on. i see what you were trying to do but its hard to mesh some idea. too bad this could have been cool
ur entertainment value is get'n worse, ya verses hardly get read
niggas Curry ur battles, the way they be hittin nothin but Net
this was ehh. no horrible but the idea was a underdeveloped. im not a fan of execution here.
there is no way u can throw leather in this tussle, kid
cuz when niggas beat that ass wit da strap, i noticed u buckle, bitch
i think this is what @king w as talking about when he mentioned low hanging fruit. if you havent read that post its in the chat in LLL. if you are going to use a WP like this you have to put a really fresh spin on it or make it personal.
yet u keep this going, waitin to be showered wit congratulations n cheers
lookin for a party? nah nigga, we throwin you into tables, napkins n chairs
this was simple and i didnt really see a punch but at the same time this shit made me laugh
you gone fission, retirement is near, in every damn battle ur bombs missin
my advice to u is start blog'n shit... hope that gives u a nuclear vision
this was ok. tie in were there. punch wasnt that strong tho.
else your ego gets shredded, all this work Networth, yet nowhere ur headed
grip ur shit back like a ponytail, n maybe we'll finally know where your head is
this was also ok but there could have been harsher.
Aeeyo you have some fresh ass concepts here. if you where on your wording and execution you are going to have some killer bars
vs
Net
So yea,
Aye aint up @For Battlin Net, at the very thought he wuld dread
The tech's sound'll plug his brain... n turn him into an audio head!
i hate you for double spacing. unless you did it so i can write inbetween these bars then thats ok. not feeling this one
Ima killer pussy, Ayo immediate family ain't safe once ur gon
Pop ya bitch n shoot any babies by her body, my pull out game is too strong!
lol ok ok. thats what i do with chotic
U've only battled vs gay attempts, n that fag shit is hard to see kid
Hope the next opp who @Phalanx u, gives a better reach around than he did!
i like dem gay bars. this was ok. but that np is suspect
Any vote that can stomach this yung niggas Bslapped, wuld be good
Cos after the shit u threw up, I'm sure this kidSIQ for not backin out when he could!
no
I just wish you was smarter dude, I prayer learnin from things past
I mean bro u lost every battle from that thread.. of hope that u never seem to have!
lol ok ok now you back. good misdirection
...Mad I'd accept the rematch when I shuld get the freeze...
.......Cos if E.Coli 'm prolly too heated to notice wit dis ease....!
wording was off on this closer i see the tie in tho. definitely rushed.
v/Net
Even tho i think net wont this pretty easily Aeeyo had some shine to him. a bit more polishing and Aeeyo is going to have off those new perspective type bars that i see from Jit and meth. anyways good job fellas
Good feedback, bro!Quote:
Originally Posted by MV
i don't Optimus, shots on point like Jordan n Pippen, son u'll see
but whenever u enter the game, nothin but misses, you a bum Bull, b
Nah man... wtf this isnt even a punch
ur entertainment value is get'n worse, ya verses hardly get read
niggas Curry ur battles, the way they be hittin nothin but Net
Curry is a stretch... its carry... care-eee... miss
there is no way u can throw leather in this tussle, kid
cuz when niggas beat that ass wit da strap, i noticed u buckle, bitch
played concept... this was ok tho
yet u keep this going, waitin to be showered wit congratulations n cheers
lookin for a party? nah nigga, we throwin you into tables, napkins n chairs
could have been dope but cheers and Chairs dont rhymes
you gone fission, retirement is near, in every damn battle ur bombs missin
my advice to u is start blog'n shit... hope that gives u a nuclear vision
this could have been dope I mean how is nuclear vision/new clear vision a diss tho?
else your ego gets shredded, all this work Networth, yet nowhere ur headed
grip ur shit back like a ponytail, n maybe we'll finally know where your head is
nah man
Vs
Aye aint up @For Battlin Net, at the very thought he wuld dread
The tech's sound'll plug his brain... n turn him into an audio head!
this should have been doper...but calling him an audio head isnt a diss
Ima killer pussy, Ayo immediate family ain't safe once ur gon
Pop ya bitch n shoot any babies by her body, my pull out game is too strong!
Ima killer pussy? you saying youre a pussy? whole concept is played to
U've only battled vs gay attempts, n that fag shit is hard to see kid
Hope the next opp who @Phalanx u, gives a better reach around than he did!
light i guess....
Any vote that can stomach this yung niggas Bslapped, wuld be good
Cos after the shit u threw up, I'm sure this kidSIQ for not backin out when he could!
cool concept but this wasnt executed right man.... miss
I just wish you was smarter dude, I prayer learnin from things past
I mean bro u lost every battle from that thread.. of hope that u never seem to have!
idk what you even said here....
...Mad I'd accept the rematch when I shuld get the freeze...
.......Cos if E.Coli 'm prolly too heated to notice wit dis ease....!
No
OVerall ... Both yall need some work man. Both had played shit or bars that werent even disses. Some shit didnt make sense... Net takes this for have two light bars that hardley connected aayo had nothing really. Need to bring more witty,fresher concepts yall have the basics down but take time think of something clever and work with it
V/Net
Net wins