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Swags N flow
@Phalanx
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10 lines
Due Saturday midnight PST
Swags N flow
@Phalanx
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No problem. I'm ready when you are.
@Phalanx @For Battling
Y’all going to get this going or what?
Fuck this fagit bro. I ride thru ur city like the Alamo
So now ya know, if ur girl tries me then ima bump on her pussy like a camel toe
That’s FACTS nigga. “Phalanx? Who tf is that nigga?” A wack nigga
Get clapped nigga, or I’m steppin on crack to break her back nigga
7 shots. I left one go, that means there’s one left. I’ve got guns, tecs.
Small dick, but you’ll be the one who’s hung next. Then forget about it like drunk sex
Let me guess. You life with your mom, 39 y/o and have a stubble for a beard
One word, that’s weird. I’ll make this pussy cry - call it cat tears....
.....OR PUT EM IN A DIA SHIRT - NOW HE’S A FAT QUEER
took ur mom to your daughters prom. Music teacher says she don’t belong
You said nope she’s wrong...bitch I’m here to give her d’s nuts like donkey Kong
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@Kill Spree this guys had more than enough time to drop. Give him till this evening or DQ
Lmao @ You saying more than enough time when your the reason this was extended. My shits beeen done.
@For Battling aka fern
This rapid fire?
Have ya upolstery blood-ied! Lift em off his feet w/ the ottoman! Grab the toaster n buck heat!
Homie just trust me, furniture funeral...Get buried w/ the sofa n' love seat..
Dig "For material"? Nah I just think his is lame when I read it...
This battles "mine ore"; I'll swing pick axes til all his veins are depleted!
Gotta crazy demeanor, Did I mention that I carry knives?
If they say Fern gully....they meant that your the fairy type!
Ayo it's time for war! AR-15 hitting ya spinal cord..
You won't make it passed this semi-- This'll be ya final, For!
This is red rum reversed, no Project Pat- You catch " a L flipped off top" like a Do
I'm choppin' witta logger's axe, I'll just give you 10-4...Now go ahead and Roger that!
Round 2, FIGHT.
TWO FIFTHS!!!!! Fucknigga that’s an unequivalent fraction @Trvp Nvgga , he bout that action. Gang bang your bitch like “uhh did that just happen?”
Huge army. I lead dimes who squeeze 9’s, them gats’ll bless you when it’s sneeze time
Slutty hoes, sleaze grind. Muggsy Bouges, only 3’5. And yes I’m a cop so u know I bring the heat slime
On my barcotic flow, got my blade in hand. You’re a shitty player, couldn’t even pass train n’ camp
Good wordplay, Tic’ll MeElmo (Tickle me Elmo). There’s a knee for this, peoples elbow.
Quote:
Originally Posted by For Battling
I'm kinda 50/50 herr because you already used an Axel reference that didn't really hit as much. Nice flow thoughQuote:
Originally Posted by Phalanx
Ok I'm judging the rest of this by the better flow, consistency and swag performance.
Flow: tie... Because I felt both had their own unique approach that I enjoyed individually.
Consistency: I have Phalanx with this category. Mostly because he kept swinging even if some were a few stumbles.
Punches: Phalanx , once again came with some fire. Not enough to burn a building down. Just a few flames to kindle.
Swag: this was another tough one to decide on... But I did like For battling style a bit. Don't get me wrong his delivery wasn't as top notch. But I felt some spark within. He barely edged this category.
Overall: I have Phalanx as the winner. Nice battle guys. I enjoyed the flow from both a lot.
Quote:
Originally Posted by For Battling
Tf kinda swag and flow battle was thisQuote:
Originally Posted by Phalanx
I guess For Battling gets it
Fuck this fagit bro. I ride thru ur city like the Alamo
So now ya know, if ur girl tries me then ima bump on her pussy like a camel toe
^ok, setup failed tho
That’s FACTS nigga. “Phalanx? Who tf is that nigga?” A wack nigga
Get clapped nigga, or I’m steppin on crack to break her back nigga
^Cool multis, flat punch
7 shots. I left one go, that means there’s one left. I’ve got guns, tecs.
Small dick, but you’ll be the one who’s hung next. Then forget about it like drunk sex
^this was just ok, a bit wordy
Let me guess. You life with your mom, 39 y/o and have a stubble for a beard
One word, that’s weird. I’ll make this pussy cry - call it cat tears....
.....OR PUT EM IN A DIA SHIRT - NOW HE’S A FAT QUEER
^hated the pussy cat line, found it hard to follow the rhyme toward the Dia bar, but I kno u dislike him so I guess this was a bit personal
took ur mom to your daughters prom. Music teacher says she don’t belong
You said nope she’s wrong...bitch I’m here to give her d’s nuts like donkey Kong
^the punch evaded the setup and diminished in sting.
vs
Have ya upolstery blood-ied! Lift em off his feet w/ the ottoman! Grab the toaster n buck heat!
Homie just trust me, furniture funeral...Get buried w/ the sofa n' love seat..
^this was a dope concept, but the setup was a bit too stretched to give it the full affect.
Dig "For material"? Nah I just think his is lame when I read it...
This battles "mine ore"; I'll swing pick axes til all his veins are depleted!
^This was sick.. nice from start to finish
Gotta crazy demeanor, Did I mention that I carry knives?
If they say Fern gully....they meant that your the fairy type!
^didn't get it, didn't bother googlin, shouldn't have to, this is a miss.
Ayo it's time for war! AR-15 hitting ya spinal cord..
You won't make it passed this semi-- This'll be ya final, For!
^good one!
This is red rum reversed, no Project Pat- You catch " a L flipped off top" like a Do
I'm choppin' witta logger's axe, I'll just give you 10-4...Now go ahead and Roger that!
^fail.. unh un
So yea, this battle was supposed to be self glory or hype right? I really didn't catch too many lines in here like that. Still, an interesting read and actually I wasn't gonna vote because I much prefer battles to SnF matches, however this one was a battle forsure nothing much self glorifying about it.
Both opponents approached with good concepts but the difference here was delivery and impact. FB led the charge with a verse that almost captured that Swag and Flow feel , but lost points in terms of punches that fell off the mark and wording that seemed too 'playful'> if thats the right word, with lines like the multi one which was cool but generic and unimpactful in battle terms. His opponent however, I dont know if it was from being insulted about not showing after he allowed the extension, or whatever, but Phalanx brought some heat in terms of connections, personalization, and flow. He outclassed his opponent in this one atleast 3 to 1, but I'd venture so far as to say this was practically a shut out
V/Phalanx fairly easily
Camel toe
Vs
Mine scheme
Fern gully
Final 4
This battle had dope flow but no swag lol
I thought this was 1-sided and that side is...
V- phal
For Battling
Fuck this fagit bro. I ride thru ur city like the Alamo
So now ya know, if ur girl tries me then ima bump on her pussy like a camel toe
^^Not for me camel toes don't bump pussy
That’s FACTS nigga. “Phalanx? Who tf is that nigga?” A wack nigga
Get clapped nigga, or I’m steppin on crack to break her back nigga
^^No sir
7 shots. I left one go, that means there’s one left. I’ve got guns, tecs.
Small dick, but you’ll be the one who’s hung next. Then forget about it like drunk sex
^^A lot going on here. Not sure how it all comes together
Let me guess. You life with your mom, 39 y/o and have a stubble for a beard
One word, that’s weird. I’ll make this pussy cry - call it cat tears....
.....OR PUT EM IN A DIA SHIRT - NOW HE’S A FAT QUEER
^^Weird & beard? Nah... that's machine gun kelly-ish. And his line was wack
took ur mom to your daughters prom. Music teacher says she don’t belong
You said nope she’s wrong...bitch I’m here to give her d’s nuts like donkey Kong
^^Hmmmmm
Phalanx
Have ya upolstery blood-ied! Lift em off his feet w/ the ottoman! Grab the toaster n buck heat!
Homie just trust me, furniture funeral...Get buried w/ the sofa n' love seat..
^^Yeah. Did get the hyphen between blood-ied
Dig "For material"? Nah I just think his is lame when I read it...
This battles "mine ore"; I'll swing pick axes til all his veins are depleted!
^^Yes siiiir
Gotta crazy demeanor, Did I mention that I carry knives?
If they say Fern gully....they meant that your the fairy type!
^^I got it. Fern Gully is old school
Ayo it's time for war! AR-15 hitting ya spinal cord..
You won't make it passed this semi-- This'll be ya final, For!
^^Yes indeed
This is red rum reversed, no Project Pat- You catch " a L flipped off top" like a Do
I'm choppin' witta logger's axe, I'll just give you 10-4...Now go ahead and Roger that!
^^Roger that!
VOTE -> Phalanx punches were cleaner. Execution better
For Battling -
Pretty dope verse in a way. Decent wording with good ideas sprinkled around making for a decent all-around verse. The last line was a personal favorite of mine. Overall - Decent verse.
Phalanx -
I don't know, I've read better from you in ways. This was a decent verse, but could be better in ways. I suppose this was a decent verse, nice one player. Was it enough? Maybe not here though..
Overall - Decent battle, but for the better verse I'm going for For Battling..
V/ For Battling