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Yo ima open this song up spittin electricity/
nothin is spit simplicitly cuz i never come consistently/
i understand how you come, worse than amtracks crashing/
your rap career came and went quicker than lightning bolts flashing/
This bitch's determinations off the charts, but his lyrics are definatlly not/
He'll set his Keybaord on Fire, and tells himself that if he types then people will think his bars are hot/
Go ahead and try to spit tight but ur shits blind, like a boat in the water guided by moonlight/
make ya stutter when ya spit more times than an edited version of one mic/
I'm the mountain, next to me your barely even a bump in the ground/
your success rate is worse than that of blind people searching in lost and found/
Goin' back to basics for this, I've given up on complex shit/
Ultimately un-needed, I'm facing a g-unit fan thats dyslexic/
Three losses kid? I'm expecting some played label references/
Includin the 'Big L' I've named your 5 bar punch preferences/
With that shit you'll never 'elevate yaself above the front lines'/
'Like ya elders in trench warfare' , you can't stand correct with no spine/
I.C.U peeped my old battles just now.. lookin for something/
I've put 2 + 2 together tho 'n like you it amounts to nothin/
Droppin 5 mins after check-in...... some real hardcore spittin/
-30 seconds a bar......fool, tell me that shit ain't pre-written/
lets see who won then
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lets get some votes in here
alright i give my vote to The Aftermath and here is why..
structure- Stretches lines fuck up your flow ICU you gotta watch out for that shit ..also just a tip stop using these...../////
flow- has to go to Aftermath agian cause your stretched lines fucked up your flow but no hate dawg..
punches- both had some nice ones.....i give this one to ICU..tryed harder
personals...dyslexic G unit fan ..eheh that won it for you..
overall aftermath...both y'all show me love vote on this if its still open one..
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Aftermath takes this with better punches, format, and wordplay.
I.C.U. most definately takes the metas and the fucked up structure.
Nice battle, wasn't too long.
Didn't suck for me to read.
Peace
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all cats go to aftermath imo. ICU had kinda simple punches n his flow was fucked. aftermath had kinda simple punches too but he seemed to try harder n some of em came out ok. i guess if this was supposed to be a 5 minue key, it was ite, but u both got room for improvement.
+1 aftermath
shit aftermath ur drop was ill u better sweep this battle
u wud easily have my vote if i could but yeah that was dope
flow:I.C.U.
punches:Aftermath
vocab:Aftermath
metas:Aftermath
now there was good spits from both and I.C.U.'s was a real freestyle it didn't take too long but aftermath barely got this with punches
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This was a good battle:
Opener:Afta
Structure:I.C.U
Flow:Afta
Punches:Afta
Closer:I.C.U
Overall:Afta both were good but Afta was just a little betta
Peace>DABOSS
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Poll vote N/A.
Im postin to give a honest opinion..
I find it unthinkable..this is gettin slept on.
Anyways the feedback.
I.C.U
It was ok, obviously a frontline verse with all my respect.
You came simplistic, didnt add anything special really..
Some ok lines, no real punches..no quotables..
Aftermath/Harlem's Finest
I find it hard to believe..this battle aint over yet.
Cleary you had the upper hand in all catagories..
Wordplay, structure etc..but more important punches.
Some witty lines, nice personals..for what they where.
I'dve broken this down, though there's no need to.
The winner of this battle should be Aftermath..
I've cleared all freeposts and unexplained votes.. please no more freeposting.
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harlem took this.. much better structure which abled his flow to be fluent and his disses to be clear.. a few good personals, first cat was dissing himself in his opener "i never come consistantly" didnt get that.. harlem i can see is a little more experienced and came with another level, first cat got a good flow just need to work on the punches/personals vote-harlem
aftermath wins this cuz he had better flow, punches, and wordplay
icu, you need to elevate still...but ur gettin better...work on tha following:
wordplay
multis
personals
metas
vote-the aftermath