Jo-we vs. TRUE*D (Rising star battle)

8-10 lines max
Both spit at same time (blind spit)
Check in
No dick, crew, hate votes
good luck...
deadline 20 min. after check in
this is my check in

Aight fuck i'm tired of waitin..imma go ahead and spit..


Aight you wanted it........



You can tell by True*D's sig that he's nuttin but phony//
Even if you pinned tripple H, you still wouldn't be on top of tha game.......homie//

When I spit you spit, but ya rhymes are Ludacriss//
I hit tha jackpot, you still whinin ya new to thiss//
Dog ya need to hire a architecht cuz ya rhymes got no structure//
I'm livin tha life, you thinkin a Geo is lucture//
Bitch thinks he's ill, Shyt ya cured with a cold syrum//
This devil wreckon ya life like them dukes in Duram//
You at Rap battles supposed to be defining Illness//
it's only 30 seconds in round 1, down to tha mat, my punches are endless//


now true*dat.....

peace

yo yo yo yo...... jo-we u think ur a baller u aint a baller
ur the 50 cunt caller, u claim u can rap dats only a fade on ur rap, every1 wantz 2 be the on the throne but i jus set da tone, u mutha fucker must be thinkin ure dmx but u aint ure wonderin who gona be next, my punch line will is hot n my balls will melt ya, jo ur a wanbe pac jus cause ur ma wana suck my cock, jo ur a p-u-s-s-y now im laughing and u wondering why but u just a pussy!

LMAO......aight aight...forget about the rising star thing....but anywayz...letz get sum votes in this ............

jo we had harder punches
ya both need to work on structure keep at it
vote= jo we
hit my battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99566

if i had2vote den my vote wud be on da lil bitch TRUE*D, he dodgy at da lyrics but he got da potential!!!jowe u gota work on dem lyrics cause dey were flat da day

lmao @ the sillyness of this.....how can ppl be votin for true*d when there is no structure, and tbh, most of his shit ent all that..... wierd....

jo-we took this as a cud read his........

both need to elevate alot

no hate

laterz

n who da fuck trying 2b damon dash??neways lad was dat a diss at me u lil fake ass home boy?u aint worth shit lad2be honest

Plz don't freepost in this battle thread....take it to call outs...........^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.................... ..............................

I have no room to talk but stucture it was all over the place but i liked jo-we's vs better because of his opener

Uppin this shit 1st time before I gotta go to work.............................................. .................................................. .....

come on...yall.....lets get some votes in this!!!!!!!!!!11.................................. .................................................. ........................

ok lol Jo we Is ok on his shit No hate but jo we got this overall all categories! i dont feel like listing but yeah The other dude structure is majorly fucked up and u lose the flow on it....Elevate dawg...my vote goes to Jo....

jo-we won
better punches
structure
wordplay
rhymes

nice drops by both tho

Jo-we can u up our battle im outa ups

Just one more vote....................plz sumbody get this shit over wit............................................... ........i'm ready to battle sumone who might be competition

Aight yall last time uppin......Letz get sum votes in this......1 more vote needed to end this cat............................................... ......................peace

sorry bout freepost..

u have one more up left after this one actually.....

jus thought id let ya know.....


END OF

oh aight......well now last time uppin............just someone finish this shyt off.....this battle wuz BORING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

one comment....Jo-we, ur one fast typer man, u thought of and dropped 10 bars in...6 minutes after u checked in. Good Job.

Well i think prophet basically summed it up, jo-we is basically every category, maybe the other guy has a structure I cant understand or sumthin but it really ur punches man, makes em weaker than they should b.

Drop honest votes on the battles in my sig plz.