Brendan vs. McProfit

Aight herres the laydown.
10-20 lines
No D/R
No Feed
No Noob brackets and shit like that
Blindspit (obviously)
Check in within 5 mins and spit within 20 mins after check in
No Hate

Peace good luck.

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Aight you from Rhode Island I call it faget land/
Where little pussies like you try to give out a helping hand/
I'm lyrically ill my rhymes will leave you hypothermally chilled/
You like the bitch on the corner except you ain't lookin for clit your lookin for boners/
Brendan nice emcee name it sounds like a faget who's got weak game/
Fuck the wackness emergency center at the rate your goin you can let me be your mentor/
What happened to your face it looks like someone ploughed it with a mace/
Your mom must have a lazy eye cuz when she tried to stick my dick in her mouth she poked herself and started to cry/
Why you have to make this shit so easy, just because you found your momma on her knees tryin' to please me/
It's like youz attackin' without lookin, you gonna hit my fist for a substitute stop sign and you'll end up trippin/
You rhymes are wack I'm afraid for these people because if they laugh any hard they'll have a heart attack no ones got your back they all laughin cuz you and your momma live in a shack/
You call it a home it don't have a phone don't need a loan to buy that place it's like a houseboat on a river except when it snows the cold makes your place shiver/
You underestimated my power and now your startin' to cower cuz someone like me with rhymes like these is too
Deadly.

aight good luck boi, sorry y'all I was off my game .........................
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Umm.. should I even respond? This has gotta be a joke
I can't even understand half that wack shit your wrote.
"Faget land?" Come on, you can't even spell your punchlines
the illiterate shouldn't waste thier time writing rhymes
My verse hit ya so hard you be like, "Yo what happened?"
Hurry up, take that dick out ya mouth and start rapping!
I'ma call this chump "skittles," he blows like el nino
on his knees in a Gay parade so he can "taste the rainbow"
Making fun of my name? Son, what's the deal?
You're named 'Mc'Profit like you're a fucking happy meal
10 lines yet? don't even matter, this battles mine
You suck Profit, thats the truth, *bottom line*

come on spit boi aight............................................. .......................
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i thought htis as a pretty close battle, both came harder in different catagories...but i gotta say i think the newb took this one...heres Dev's breakdown....

punches=Mc
flow=bren
structure=bren[Mc ya lines are stretched to fuck]
creativity=tie
enjoyment=bren
opener=Mc
closer=bren
wordplay=Mc

Mc took this if it was on punches,,but i dont only go on that....i jus felt that ya had too many played lines......so my vote goes to bren...pZ......

yeah he also fed off me and it was supposed to be a blind spit read the rules^^^^^^^ that's aight though

I also said no noob shit like his but he did it anyways^^^^^^^^
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ok uppin for votes plz............................................... .....................
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very stretched lines MC....spoiled it abit.... some nice punches

Bren, some of ur shit was played...but ur verse made me laugh! quite funny shit u got there!

like the happy meal thing, played..... but a like it

close in most categories tbh.......

ermmmm, hard to decide the winner......

vote - MC..... only thing wrong wiv ur verse was stretched lines, plus Bren used too many played lines

Vote=Brendan(Mcprofit like ur a happy meal, LoL) Nice Punch homeboy you tore Mcprofit the fuck up, and then ripped him from head 2 toe

personals-bren
punches-tie
flow-bren
entertainment-bren
opener-tie
closer-mc
humor-bren
structure-mc
rhyme-mc
vote-Brendan
~peace~
vote on my battle with Lil'C please, i voted on yours.

aight uppin for votes again plz (3)............................................... ...
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Bottem Line......Brendan fed miserably.......

Mc-had he not have...he might have beaten u...
^^u really need to work on your structure

as far as i'm concerned he broke the rules so theres no need to break down

vote McProfit

Aight goos battle
MC u had good punches,aight disses, word play was good
bren Ya flow as good, and structure

Bren got this cuz MC ya structure and flow was all over, bars s was bad too

vote Brendan

hit this up wit an honets vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100172

and hit this battle up to wit an honets vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99656

peace.

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Umm.. should I even respond? This has gotta be a joke
I can't even understand half that wack shit your wrote.

Ouch.

"Faget land?" Come on, you can't even spell your punchlines
the illiterate shouldn't waste thier time writing rhymes

Nah.

My verse hit ya so hard you be like, "Yo what happened?"
Hurry up, take that dick out ya mouth and start rapping!

Ouch

I'ma call this chump "skittles," he blows like el nino
on his knees in a Gay parade so he can "taste the rainbow"

lol

Making fun of my name? Son, what's the deal?
You're named 'Mc'Profit like you're a fucking happy meal

Nice punch!

10 lines yet? don't even matter, this battles mine
You suck Profit, thats the truth, *bottom line*

eh.


i dunno. i think mc took it ;)

thanx bro try to poll vote it when you get 100 votes. Peace...........
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Originality - Brendan.. nice
Flow - Brendan.. nice rhythm made for betta punches
Punches - Brendan.. Mc was all general an played
Personals - Brendan.. tho u shouldnt feed
Structure - Brendan.. Mc's bars were stretched

VoTe = Brendan

^^was much more personal.. Mc's coulda been for anyone but Brendan's was tailor made.

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Punches=Mc
Flow=Tie
Structure=Bren
Creativity= Tie
Enjoyment = Mc
Opener = Mc
Closer = Mc

MC YOUR VOTED ON MY ATTLE BUT FORGOT TO POLL IT PLEASE GO POLL IT

THANX

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100300

brendan won this no question

haha he embarassed u __________________________________________________ _________

YO MC PROFIT I REALLY NEED THAT VOTE DAWG ... YOU STATED YOUR VOTE IN MY THREAD BUT YOU DDITN POLL IT .. PLEASE GO POLL IT

THANX MAN

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100300

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I give this to brendan for his great structure and witty punches. Definitely played punches but witty. McProfit came a lil raunchy and really wasn't too smooth with the wordplay. the rhyme didn't quite flow well with me. Maybe I didn't read it right who knows? but it was a lil off to me.