check out my songs please critique me

yo here are some songs i made i would just like some feedback
let me know what you think and i will tell you what i think of your shit just leave a link
peace

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/fe...ellermusic.htm

come on it dont hurt you to check out my shit, i would really appreciate it. thank you
peace

i feel you. give me some feedback on my shit and ill return the favor.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98957

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yo check this guy out seriously he has some nice work going down....no reason for this to be splet considering all the garabage thats not...

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awesome man really nice
check my stuff out

what ur studio set up

digital 8 track and my computer thanks for checking my stuff. give me a link and i will for sure give you some input, thanks.

digital 8 track??lol
so takin' it back to the future huh?...i feel ya brah...


peepin Girls ar Sluts...funyy ass sample in intro...
im feelin the verses, i think u try to sound to much like established recording artists...

"whutever!"lmaaaao, i like your train of thought tho fully son...
u a funny nugga...that alone gets me interested in ya work...
ima sucker for creativity...man, on second thought im liking this verse more 'n more...each listen, i heat funnier shit...i like how u setup this shit akwardly...no real direction in the audio, but its still hot!

holla back bro, peep some FiL shit...if you like listening to hiphop..
lol, iLL shit tho, keep blessin us wit audios...
oNE...

leave me a link and i will check your stuff out, thanks for the input and appreciation for sluts
peace

lol.........I like the girls are sluts song....kinda eminemish.....funny intro.....lyrics was pretty good.......production was nice....I think Ima make a song about why I think girls are sluts,lol....like to see my chicago fam doin things like this....nice job

listenin to I AM...


beat is crazy.....your flow is hot....and delivery was on point....i like the versatility in your flow....lyrics is decent, i was feelin it.....i give this a 7/10...this wasn't awful but wasn't perfect....but it was good ya heard.....keep doin ya thing...OnE




I'm Ghost...

thanks, if you all got links to your stuff leave them and i will check them out
peace

anyone else check my stuff..............i dont bite.. leave me a link and i will check your stuff out
peace

i'm loving your style...


you are yourself... good tracks my man

ya got something go on man


so i guess your staying active now on RB..col cool

thanks man..............im glad someone can enjoy it........ha ha
peace

i liked " I am" for it made me want to rap along lol

they were good drops

my ex, even thou it was sappy i liked that one alot

and the girls are sluts, well it was funny as hell! lol

got some good stuff!

~Tera~
DONT HATE

anyone else wanna check it out..............................................
thanks

Listening To THe Girls Sluts.....Lol Funny Intro Lol Haha This SHit Is FUnny.......Wack Rhymes.......But It Was Funny When U Changed Ur Voice Like Females......And U Spit On Some Parts To Hard On The Mic.........Ok It's Just Funny Not Hot...

Now Listenin To Sobby Song...Awww Lol Beginning...Beat Don't Really Like It.......Ur Voice Is Not For Rappin No Offense.....But THe RHymes ARe Hot On This One........Just Don't Like Ya Voice

Now The Way I Am...The Beat Is Straight ......This Is Straight But Ur Off Beat Sometimes.......It's Ok I Guess

Overall Ur Aite Just Need To Work On On Ya Voice Which I Dunno....And Ur Rhymes Are Hot ....And Find Some Beats That Hotter Or Sometin.......Also Work On Ridin The Beat..

Overall 5.5/10

thanks for the input........................i appreciate honesty.............
thanks ...........anyone else...........

damn man you got some dope shit here, I love all 3 tracks, the "girls are sluts" one is really dope... make more shit quickly yea? lol

thanks...................more is on the way i need to get better beats and a new mic......... im using a cheap as mic
thanks

nice to see people respect...

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i feel ya wit the cheap mic

i like ya shit it flowed realy well i like that ya beats was aight to

get at me bout my shit

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/di...moneymusic.htm


holla at ya boi

cool anyone else wanna check my stuff............................................. ..................
thanks

anyone else wanna check this stuff, its kinda old now but i got some new stuff i will be posting soon
peace

x-girl:
so far it sounds like you can do a little better cleaning out some of those vocal pops..energy and style is tite..lyrics and delivery arent bad either..i think i have this beat..

i am:
this is dope..i'm feeling your style over such a cliche beat..i myself wouldnt choose this beat for anything..but you infact broke it off well..dope job man..

all in all both tracks were nice man..i think you're dope..keep it up..

pZ..

thanks man, anyone else wanna listen to my stuff

peace

HEy men nice job, really good way to let out your emotions, your lines really show how you feel men, I personally like the intro and the outro the way you took things from movies......and you flow and voice fitted with the song

thanks, keep checking please....................
peace

leave a link and i will check your stuff

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Originally Posted by Ferris

thanks, keep checking please....................
peace

leave a link and i will check your stuff

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Hey Ferris can you coment mine now plz
thx's peace

Yo Ferris...If You Need Beats, Check Out My Soundclick...

The Link Is In My Sig...