10 lines
no crew,
d/r
b/s
1 ;ien
etc etc votes
good luck
no hate
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10 lines
no crew,
d/r
b/s
1 ;ien
etc etc votes
good luck
no hate
mic check one two............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......
take your time................................ im just makin me tea............................................... ...........................
I Hate To Say This But Your Wackness Is Outrageous
Dont Want To Attain This So Im Movin Down Incase Its Contaigeous
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*Ahem*
Right-off the bat, I can tell ya rhymes are “watered down” n tasteless
know your places kids.. don’t bother bluffin, I know ya hand is ace-less
ya played phrases wont getcha nowhere wit me.. givin u the cold-shoulder
putting the mic through torture, battlin the master, guess hes grown-bolder
like old-stoners.. ill make da 007 senile, through a memory lapse
to be retired no doubt, hip hops a concept this dick choker barely grasps
you’re ill fitted as an emcee.. like marathon runners stuck-on-crutches
my hunch-is, u like getting bullied, the way u love to munch-on-punches
yo yo im keyin up right now, sorry i was eatin i got proof i'll take a pic if you want i'll drop as quick as i can!!!
dowg just drop i aint no whinny bitch..............drop so we can get deez votes in good luck playa................holla
words seperate your hearts chambers, split the pulmonary veins,
expose your anemic brain, n the 'matter of facts' which it contains,
'hint', erase you merk list, they the worst 6 cats on rb alltogether,
yous like weak wrists, stand no chance after being freshly severed,
a reasonable doubt, needs to be proved to convince the RB jury,
evidence, even gods, and mortal men couldnt take my fists of fury,
rythmic attempts, to throw a punch leaves himself, in a confused state,
police leave him exempt, because judges cant charge, for verbal rape,
intricate precision, to take out this 'hitman', theres some advice,(sig)
left life-less, the tunnel which u see shinin bright, signifies the end of a life,
uppin...........................for votes............................................. ...................................
ooohhh not a bad battle..
both have elevated immensely
especially 007 w/ his structure
BREAKDOWN--
Punches-tie
Flow-tie
Structure-Tie
Metas-007
sustainment-tie
Complexity-007
Enjoyment-Both
Multis-007
Overall-007
jus had that air of complexity which
gave a good set up 4 punches
Props to both
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99336
opener R
closer 7
punches R
personals 7
wordplay R
overal R
blah
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wow emerge you have such a crazy votin system,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
second time uppin............................................. .........................................
Opening: R
Punches: R
Personals: 7
Flow: R
Structure: 7
Vocab: 7
Closing: 7
Overall: Damn a close battle but I gotta go with 7...
Repay the favor by voting on my Battle(s) in the sig thx-
uppin............................................. for the 3rd time.............................................. ....................
Breakdown...
Punches-Tie
Personals-7
Wordplay-Rythmic
Flow-Rythmic
Multi's-Tie
Meta's-7
Creativity-Rythmic
Overall-Rythmic
Vote on this battle yall its been up for a week with only 1 vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98550
4 th tome uppin...........drop honest votes............an one of us will return an honest vote..........if a link is provided.......................
opener - tie, both more rhyming than punching
punches - 007 - rhythmic didn't really punch
personals - none really
mutis - rhythmic
structure - 007
closer - tie
vote = 007
both yall can do better, but 007 takes this one
pz..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99772
yo I hit this up b4 so can ya'll check this out plz...
I'd really appreciate it pz
Opener - Hints
Punches - Tie
Flow - 007
Effect - 007
Closer - Tie
Structure - 007
~VOTE~ 007
Conclusion - This was a very close battle. Everything was pretty much even. This took me a while to really think of who im ganna give the vote to. But I think that 007 brought more effect with the punches. This was a nice battle, good effort to both...
( Please return the favor and make an honest vote on the battle in my sig. It would be much appriciated, it is 4-3, so it should be good to look at. Aight hommies, return the favor. )
i voted on loatsa battles................. i upped 5 time now......................... i waited a week nearly...............peeps sed they would vote........... an its still fuckin open!!!!
drop a fair votes an a link, an one of us will return a fair vote on ur battle....
an he wont up it!!!
personals- 007
flo- tie
punch- 007
meti4- hints
multi- 007
structure- tie
overall- 007.......way hints started off was ill...but it faded miserably
SUP...i liked ya verse 007 but i think Mental is goin to partner me now.....I've already hit this up so can ya make sure ya hit this up w/ an honest vote in return plz??
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101388
I Would Breakitdown Verse By Verse But Im Gonna Have To Leave A Comment and not a N00b Breakdown Like ^ He just did..
Hmmm BOTH VERY NICE.... for your level.
But Your bars were both to stretched keep them tidy 2... nice punches.... best two lines
blah this was the only decent line i could find you just keeped on goig on about shit no body unstands or cares about memory lapse?...Quote:
like old-stoners.. ill make da 007 senile, through a memory lapse
to be retired no doubt, hip hops a concept this dick choker barely grasps
other hand..
after thaty^ lie i got bored rest were blah that as a solid punchQuote:
words seperate your hearts chambers, split the pulmonary veins,
expose your anemic brain, n the 'matter of facts' which it contains,
V= Double... because the other guy had weak punches very weak...