yo 10 lines max, u spit first :shoot:
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yo 10 lines max, u spit first :shoot:
after this battle yull be seekin a new carreer
never gettin done up da but is ur #1 fear
don't shed a tear for ur long lost gay lova
and it jus anin't natural to beat of to motha
given bj's to a fat guy named buba payin rub a dub dub in da tub
grindin on some dude in a gay club
so please stop tryin to dub me
we ain't in a gay prison film so stop tryin to hump me
after this yur gonna be so mad ur gonna cut of ur hand
you so poor u think fruit of the loom is a name brand
let me show this chump....//
y was ur whole diss bout gays and bums punk?//
u seem 2 kno a lot bout gay-anal and spunk!!//
giv me ma sword, ima kill. any rapper im dissin,//
nex day ur mom al go to the cops shel b stressin,//
il b down as ‘Wanted’ ul b down as ‘Missin’//
i got more tools than a tool box, about 5 or 6 glocks,//
i got 3 black and 3 crome and il pop all 6 in ur dome,//
dnt spit til u ready dogg get that cock out ya mouth,//
u like a gay Nelly man u love it down South//
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anotha level where da hell is your spit for our battle bitch ass nigga...
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i think tom had better structure and punches. anotherlevel had good flow. but overall im gonna give this one to TOM.....................................
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ya this one goes to tom i'll post it if this is still open when i reach 1oo posts.. Another level get off the gay sex talk nub shit man elevate no one likes to read that... Tom it was a good move to call him on that weak shit in your verse but then towards the end you hit with that cock in his mouth weak shit try to stay away from that hit up the emergency center learn some shit and keep elevating love....one
ok check this:
let me show this chump....//
y was ur whole diss bout gays and bums punk?//
u seem 2 kno a lot bout gay-anal and spunk!!//
giv me ma sword, ima kill. any rapper im dissin,//
nex day ur mom al go to the cops shel b stressin,//
il b down as ‘Wanted’ ul b down as ‘Missin’//
i got more tools than a tool box, about 5 or 6 glocks,//
i got 3 black and 3 crome and il pop all 6 in ur dome,//
dnt spit til u ready dogg get that cock out ya mouth,//
u like a gay Nelly man u love it down South//
You were feeding off his, which is Sad, cuz his verse sucked. And your gonna lose this battle once a Mod see's it cuz you fed off him.
Shitty cuz it would have been an easy win. Stay with the rules.
Vote = Another Level (Unfortunatly)
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Vocab-none really
Wordplay-None really
Stucture-A
Closer-A
Overall-A
Vote-Anotherlevel
I feel his verse was whacc but since tom was feeding it made his verse even worse soo theres my vote deal wit it!
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thought big tom got this althoguh it was close. u shudnt jus focus on wat he said, expand ur drop.
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structure-level
flow-tom
vocab-tom
overall-tom
I can't poll vot but heres a quick vote anyway....
AnotherLevel's was played...esp. the gay sh.it....didn't have too much that stood out really.
Tom's was better...despite the feedin....better flow,punches etc.....
Vote- tom
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i personally thought Big Tom was better. he made a good comeback. big tom had better punches and another level needs to work on jazzing up the lyrics and thinking of some better punches. vote - big tom.