McProfit Vs. Master O' Rhymes
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McProfit Vs. Master O' Rhymes
aight well who's goin first dawg????....................checkin in................................................ ..............................................
set it up how many lines and shit like that????????????????.............................. .......................................
Ready for a taste of Master O' Rhymes
I'm a rapper that's white, like no other kind
This won't even start, you got no chance
So fast with these words, hurry, get a glace
you got no talent, why even try
bitch, rappin' agaist me i'll make ur ass cry
man, you haven't even won yet
that's not gonna change, wanna make a bet?
your rhymes must really suck
the only way u'll beat me is luck
so don't get your hopes up on this day
cuz your shit is so weak and gay
all your shit is totally lackin'
this battle is gonna send your ass packin'
Unfortuately for you this is a new style,for you a walkthrough/
This is a flow that no emcee can compare with that's 4sho/
This is gonna be a win on my record I'll let you know/
You made know lines you made no rules you must be a noob cuz you be actin' a fool/
You fuckin stupid I can tell obviously checkin out your opponent doesn't ring a bell I've scared you so bad you've already fell/
Your say your gonna send my ass packin it's obvious to see what your lackin your always attackin/
You made yourself vulnerable like this shit or not try to spit on my and I'll show you what I've got/
You a bitch who's gotta clit there's somethin wrong with you cuz you claim to have a dick/
So fuck your mom and your boyfriend/ By the way how far did he make you bend/
You suck cock you take forever and you blow at what you do/
My bitch does better and she's a chick too/
You ever seen not another teen movie? I'm gonna shit on your chest after I pop one into your transfestite mess/
None of us know what the fuck you are now you though the monk was gonna suck your cock when he took a bow/
Get outta the monastaries you go back to U.S. where you fucked up like michael jackson and went to the priest to confess/
He was horrified what you done he says become a priest you'll have more fun/
Who want's a trannie when people like us would rather fuck grannies/
Go back to faireland where you can play with fagets in your cheap ass motel bed/
I'm leavin now you've ruined our stated of mind/
If I ever see you in life I'll have you read between the lines/
so I my fist can speak to your face matter over mind
^ fuckin a don't type so much
uppin ___need votes............................................. .................................................. ....
what hell? master o rhymes sucks a dick. mc profit wins.............................................. .................................................. ......
uppin for votes plz it only take 5 fuckin mins of your time so just do it it's not that hard to explain who won or not plz if you poll vote explain it ............ thanxs............................................ ...............Oh! and don't forget to vote. . haha
get this battle going vote and get it off the page already seen it round for ever no one voting............................................ .....................
Blend why don't you vote? you have 100 you can poll vote. Can People vote on this geeze I want this over with and everything. It's annoying even If I lose ok. (obviously look at my record) plz vote on this
meh...pretty weak battle, i think ya both need 2 elevate. Not much to do here, master of rhymes, ur scheme is way 2 simple, and u need to elevate ur punches. Basically one-sided...
Vote- McProfit
Return the favour with an honest vote here plz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98752
I need some votes to get this close. . . . Uppin yall comon (2) ahhhhhhhh Upppin............................................ .......................
uppppin for votes plz .........................(3)...................... ..................................plz vote people I will return the favour............................................ ...
Fuck come one people don't sleep on this it's real fuckin easy to say who wins and why. I don't give a fuck if it's me or not I just want this to end............................................... .................................................. ....
opener: profit
closer: profit
punches: Profit
structure: master
vocab: Tie
wordplay: Tie
overall: McProfit
aiight nice battle,
both y'all need to elevate, profit you need to fix your structure,
master, jus elevate dawg
aiight
peace
PLZ HIT UP THIS WITH AN HONEST VOTE, AS I HAVE TOOK THE TIME TO DO SO IN YOURS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98908
Aight thanxs 3-0 yay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I wonder if anyone else could look into voting............................................ ...........................................
Yo this shit was so gay were tha real rappers at this shit was terrible
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Fuck you mother fucka your just trying to get your posts up you lame ass bitch fuck you................................. No stupid ass mofuckin hate votes anymore or hate posts like that lame ass bitch
Thanx
can anyone else vote on this plz I really really need to end this battle^^^^^^^^^^^^^ gay ass post by ace the one
upppin (4)............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........
"You suck cock you take forever and you blow at what you do"
For some reason that's the only line that made me smirk...lol
well Mc Profit...a lot of emcees would say you lost this battle because you droped more then your apponent..they would called that a b*cth move...however I think you would have won even if you would have typed shorter...
Master O rhymes...listen fam increase your vocab and come with hard punches,.. punches are key....Keep practicing I say...Then battle other heads...
Vote: Mc profit
Can't poll but this will up the trhead: Vote Master O
This was a very weak battle. The only reason I voted for O was because his simple wasn't as long winded as mcprofit. Both where simple but that was just to much to read to not be any good. No hatin or d/r
that's cool everyone has an opinion but next time your not entitled to it mother fucker.... Jus playin
good battle but was it me or did profit have alot of writing compared to rhymes............................................ .............................
but overall i think that profit still tok it, he had betta punches that took the battle.
opener: Profit
closer: Profit
punches: Profit
structure: None
vocab: Profit
wordplay: None
overall: Profit
TAKE MORE TIME WRITING YOUR VERSE. If your a newbie, and you STILL need to elevate, don't make such short deadlines. Learn to write better before you can drop a keystyle.
Vote = Profit