Cannabarz vs Blaq woods

no dickridin, crew, alias, or hate votes
5 votes to win (by polls only),
due tomorrow nite, u spit first, 14 line max
checking-in.

checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...

ayo,

yo, what this cat barz think that he doin//
he get his shit ruined, betta yet, get his whole shit blew in//
foo, how you think you finna get some respect//
this whole ma fuckin web site wasen't ready yet//
this shit is petty (yep)//
nigga, how you get 2 and 0//
stop suckin dick where you flow//
blaqout nigga, there you go, nigga//
this ma fucka barz must be too fuckin crazy//
this nigga blak woods tuck you in wit this baby//
blatenly spit shit shady//
din't know i go fa ya head to keep shit hazy//
think twice, fa ya call me out ma friend//
beat ya prissy punk pussy ass down again//

now kat your up................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

Kid's a dyck-biter, using Writers block for-defence//
Can's more-intense, put the medal-to-woods like the Golf tournaments!// (tiger woods!)
you couldn't win "hacking the polls", so Blaq stays dumb-in-defenseless!//
blaq on this side-of-the-moon, cool..im "sonning"-ur-existence!//
For instance, your verse was terrible, ..your not tighter!//
Fuck it..you just can't "handle bars" like armless bike riders!//
Your punches are 2 hard? doubt it..
I'm take "blak" out, so they'll see why Newyork havin' another power-outage!//
the little experience, explains wackness in your raps-hood!//
made a campfire around his verse, 2 bad, Can laks wood!!!!!//

little weak...personals here and there..votes can proceed

canna seemed to go easy on tha newbie and still took it in ery category......................jus elevat blak ull get betta...............1............................

yo, what this cat barz think that he doin//
he get his shit ruined, betta yet, get his whole shit blew in//
foo, how you think you finna get some respect//
this whole ma fuckin web site wasen't ready yet//
this shit is petty (yep)//

Multis-none....filler...1/5

nigga, how you get 2 and 0//
stop suckin dick where you flow//
blaqout nigga, there you go, nigga//
this ma fucka barz must be too fuckin crazy//
this nigga blak woods tuck you in wit this baby//

Once again..filler...better personals 2-5

blatenly spit shit shady//
din't know i go fa ya head to keep shit hazy//
think twice, fa ya call me out ma friend//
beat ya prissy punk pussy ass down again//

Ehhhhh....1/5

Barz

Kid's a dyck-biter, using Writers block for-defence//
Can's more-intense, put the medal-to-woods like the Golf tournaments!// (tiger woods!)
you couldn't win "hacking the polls", so Blaq stays dumb-in-defenseless!//
blaq on this side-of-the-moon, cool..im "sonning"-ur-existence!//

Multis were sorta off.....i liked that tiger woods shit....and the sonning 2 1/2 /5

For instance, your verse was terrible, ..your not tighter!//
Fuck it..you just can't "handle bars" like armless bike riders!//
Your punches are 2 hard? doubt it..
I'm take "blak" out, so they'll see why Newyork havin' another power-outage!//

Hah....Nice handle bars line....multis still sorta off...but better then the first part 3/5

the little experience, explains wackness in your raps-hood!//
made a campfire around his verse, 2 bad, Can laks wood!!!!!//

Nice way to finish....4/5

over all-9/15...not ur best stuff

Vote-Barz

This was a alright battle..
Punches: Can
Flow: Blaq
Structure: Can
Metas: Can
Multies: Can
Overall a alright battle..but my vote goes to Can..props to both..but vote is Can.

and if you could drop a honest vote on my battle its much appreciated..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97690

can't poll but this will up your thread: Vote cannabarz


Like his name the boy knows how to play on words. He did that without stressing his flow. He had a superior command over his verse. I like his style in this battle.

keep forgetting...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1

vote cann

he took this is every aspect nice structure and wityness behind the punchs..good job..

Cannabarz!!! now now dont b pickin on da lil guy.........lol sike good spit dowg toltal merk job on ur part no need to write a breakdown cannabarz winz in every category! Blak u just need to spet up ya game playa watch and learn b4 u try to do things......no hate holla!

vote= cannabarz

ayo honestly... I agree... that nigga ate my ass clean... yo canna... thght verse. gotta give props... maybr in da future we can do dis again... much respect... 1 ma niggaz............................................ ..................................

Aiight.....

blaq:Flow was da only thing dat made ur verse worth readin,but u gotta work on ur personals n punch's aiight kid!.....

yo, what this cat barz think that he doin//
he get his shit ruined, betta yet, get his whole shit blew in//

^ nice opener but dats it!!.......

Ok Now......

Barz:shyt nice verse flow wasnt all dat good but u had sum good punch's n sum were funny!....hahah

you couldn't win "hacking the polls", so Blaq stays dumb-in-defenseless!//

^ dat was aiight!

For instance, your verse was terrible, ..your not tighter!//
Fuck it..you just can't "handle bars" like armless bike riders!//

^ dat shyt was funny!...nice punch!!

Vote:Barz

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uppin for votes!............................................ .................................................. ..............................

I vote for Cannabarz. I think that Blak has learned a good lesson and should probably try to go cop the old school Kool G Rap album or get up on some Rakim. That should open your mind up.
Vote. Cannabarz

cannabarz won this all over lmao he murked this dude i don't really need to explain myself he came hotter 100 characthers llalalal lol and his punches were titgher

vote on this pleaas
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97556