alright again..
10 lines or more
due tomorrow..
house rules
3-0 is KO
first to 5 wins
checkin
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alright again..
10 lines or more
due tomorrow..
house rules
3-0 is KO
first to 5 wins
checkin
check in
heres my verse..
My Verbal skillz are dope and strong I’ll put them in yo ass so deep and dirty it’d be like Oprahs-Thong!//1
You better hurry quick-n-give up my lines are over you so you’d have to swing to hit-up infact you still can’t reach, you ain’t even Old Enough to get-ya-Dick-Up!//2
A gangsta from Canada is like a hick going to new York when they use they’re guns you guys uses a pitch-forks//3
The day you use a noose to hang your body will be the day I’ll bring the dailey news to your fuck up mommy//4
I think I’m not in the right-place this dude is label as a light-weight armed wit pillows when I have fist that might-rage//5
bar 3 he’s from Canada and his name starts with gangsta
bar 5 he’s title is light-weight
g0od luck
Yo...check it...
Ya fakeness Ima expose, ya trash, Ima dispose, befo this battle even started tha case was closed//
Ya see ma name an ya annoyed, tha fact that im ill isn't easy ta avoid, step up, 'n get destroyed//
A "restuaraunt"* from California, I've defeated tha faggots before ya, I am ya death, I enduce ya parinoya//
Befo tha call out I saw ya presence, 'n it wasn' now, it was then when i smashed ya essence//
Smash ya 'till ya face implode, ya fate been told, ya rhymes remindin' me of somethin' from an 8-year old...//
*His occupation in his profile jus' says resturaunt
Sry bout tha wait dawg...gl on tha pollz...
good job you win
verbal
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^^^^^^^^^^Dick Rider
Fuckin' explain ya votes, dickhead. Didn' ya read tha rulz at tha top of Frontlines? Explain ya votez!
GANGSTAONE it was a hate vote....He gonna get banned
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Shi', u righ' dawg...i hope tha' mo' fucka does get BANNED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol wasnt the best battle but...
Breakdown--
Punches-G.O
Flow-None
Sustainment-G.O
Structure-None
Metas-G.O
Overall-G.O..
both ya'll sort ya structure plz..props tho pz
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP...BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97712
A'ight thx dawg uppin(1)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Uppin(2)This bein slept on^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Bein' Slept on hardcore....Uppin'(3)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^
gangster one overpowered this...like BI sed the structure was kinda weird
but vote-g1....
can u hit this up please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97748
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97748
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97748
A'ight, thx dawg, too abd ya can' poll vote.............................................. .................................................. ...
Oh, 'n try ta make ya explanations longer too................don' wan' any trouble wit tha mods.............................................. ...................
this was a pretty weak battle i thought. but Gangsta took this one, his was harder hittin,... didnt like the way you's set it out, ...why?.......
punches=gangsta
flow=gangsta(just)
structure=tie
metas=gangsta(weak)
wordplay=gangsta
creativity=tie
opener=gangsta
closer=gangsta
vote=gangsta, both could be improved.....pZ
Holy hsi' this bein slept on...come on dawgz, letz get tha votez happenin'....Uppin(4)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^6
Holy fuck anywayz...this been slept on hard...come on dawgz, don' let us down...Uppin(Final)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^
yoooo if i could vote i would vote gangsta. sorry verbal i just wasnt feelin it as much as gangsta. gangsta do me a big fav and return the favor ....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97873
peace
Giving the slightest of edges to Gangsta...
He hit personally, and didn't stretch his shit AS MUCH as Verbal...
Better closer from him as well.
Verbal came with a weaker personal, I thought.
And weaker punches...
Stretched style that needs ta go, man.
You did have the better opener, I'll give ya that...
But that was as good as it got.
Elevate some.
Peace
gangsta wins this .i wasnt really feelin verbal............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ......................
Explain ya votez BETTER plz dawgz...I don' want any trouble wit tha mods....thx....................................... ......................................
ok nice try on this gangsta one you merked them so heres yer vote not a hate vote though you beat me once but yeah different flows i got now but moving on GOOD JOB