8 line min
16 max
no pre-writtens
check -in
ill spit first
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8 line min
16 max
no pre-writtens
check -in
ill spit first
make that a 10 line minimum
waiting for you to check in
remember no pre-writtens
good luck, (YOULL NEED IT)
checkin in g2g but i'll drop tommrow so you can drop later or sometin .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................
I spit fire leave your "retinals sour"/
Leave u invected, so your computer aint the only thing with "technical problems"//
Leave you headless like "Miguel Hidalgo"/
Have u missing on the milk carton like , "Where the hell is Waldo?"//
Im an allstar, can "pitch for innings"/
While your steady trying to ride horses like you are "Richard Simmons"//
Boy im a monster with dirty "intentions"/
Leave your girl with more kids in her mouth than a "barney convention"//
Pay attention as I give you my "thoughts"/
Battle me and you'll be facing more loses than the "ATL Hawks"//
I stand firm, cuz prove "u can win"/
I'm a vet you're a rookie, been rapper longer than "Yu Bin"//
You've "been feeble" with know "get back"/
Watch your mouth or end up like "Vin Diesle" when your vision fades to "Pitch Black"//
What happens if Yu Bin doesn't come fnish the battle .................Marvell.......................... ............
Ok Ok Here
I Didn't Feel Him Look Name Is Cartoon Character Game....
You Know Your Couldn't To Get Burned Like Paper Battling Flame....
It's Like Ya Dome Fell In A Snake Pit..The Way I Rattle His Brains..
Only Way You'll Ever Be On Top Of Me..Is IF Your Fat Ass Sat On Me Man...
The Skillz He Has Can't Be Found Just Like Good Rappers From Oakland...
You Think The Guns Had Swimming Lessons The Way They Properly Stroke Em..
I'll Smoke Em ...But This Chump Think He Hot Recitin Nas Writtens....
Treat This Herb Like a Human Convertible And Then I'll Really Leave His Top Missin...
aight: real close battle but to win a battle in my eyes, u must have hard hits that continue for tha whole vers...start to finish...
Yu's verse did...
Marvell didn't... he started off nice but fell off towards tha end...
winner: Yu
and Yu: drop ur verse soon or it'll be finished...
here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97559
my bad, switch it up...
Marvell started bad n game hard at tha end..
just used to puttin it tha otha way....
my bad as hell...
lol this battle was my weakest but uppin ne ways.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................
uppin this shit yo angel i will drop soon can't rite here after skool prolly but uppin 2................................................. .................................................. .........
uppin this shit again dammit............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........
damn. really nice drop from Marvell. especially since its ur
first battle. props for that. you came with nice hard hits. but
you didn't seem to follow thru. Yu hit from the start to the
finish. so thats wut gets him my vote. but honestly Mar.
nice hits, shulda challenged sumone with less experience.
props to both
vote-Yu
peace
yo i think yu won this because of his harder puched and easier flow. my vote overall goes to yu but a good battle.
return the favor with a vote on this i need one more vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97852
uppin this shit just need 2 freakin votesso........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
ok uppin this shit for the last fuckin time so holla............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........
my vote yu bin was hella tighter, marvell was hella weak
and punches did'nt make sense, he had one nice line off yu bin name and dats it
yubin came nicer
Marvel came pretty damn good...
If he'd had harder punches, he'd have won.
Great wordplay and meta display from Marvel.
But the punches and personals, as well as tha flow, went to Yu.
But this was really very close.
Weak drop, Yu...
Ya almost got sonned yourself!
pretty good battle...there was some good verses
Flow Yu
Structure Yu
Creativity Tie
Open Close: Yu
Overall. Yu
Good battle but i think Yu takes this with a little harder verse peace