Life (Feat: MC Uski)

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Masta C:
Life is something precious something everyone worships..
Things may not seem worth it but in the end they turn out perfect..
Life can be hard but you can over come the rough obstacle…
So many things to choose from its just a tough topical…
Things constantly thrown…right in front of our optics…
And we cant stop it but you can always over come and top it..
The hope never drop it, cause its the only thing that holds together…
For worse or for better you just never give up do you ever?..
No, you cant let go of this precious thing we all have a chance at..
Life is something ya advance at, if ya forget just glance back..

MC Uski:
Life we all have To go Through it We Could Be Murderers Or Cold Blooded Killers..
Walking down cold dark allies and bein scared is normal It is only Lifes Thrillers..
Best Frends Saying Ur A Pussy Cause u Not affraid to Show Your own Tears..
Being Brave Means You’re the Only One That Knows You Worst Nitemares..
U Could Be Snobby And Rich Or U can be Hott And Pretty But a Big ass Bitch..
And Also Have Nothing Goin Your Way all ways Getting Dissed and called a Snitch..
Life has Some Deadly Corners But U gotta Keep Ya Head High And Keep Rhyming….
And Those Corners can Crush a Man And Also Make A Man Keep Climbing…(for the top)
Life can Get So Frustrating and u Getting angry and You Just Fell Like Ya Gonna Explode…
If U Hate Your Life Well Don’t Be stupid and Kill Ya Self Please Don’t Go Down That Road….


This was keyed in like 15 mins..But leave us some feedback on this.

Yea Uppin Yall Looking Fo Some Feed Back On this Aiight Peace Yall

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this was a hot collabo, both you came great, the flow was on point it had some good vocab and a lot of good detail very good read keep it up props to both of you

Yo uski u elavatin wit yo kolabes kuz, keep it krakin... masta ¢ ni¢e flow dawg, u got mad skills wit makein people think... id give this a 6/10... no offen¢e or nothin but it kuda been betta, iv seen betta from both u... den again diss wazin yo worst, either way keep it krakin yall.

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i disagree,,,masta you had a ncie flow and structure going....nicedrop..few lil multis thrown in.but....uski....you aint too bad but get rid of the scheme ya got...too simple...rhyming the last word aint what is needed...give it some thought.....keep at it ...pZ

good verses from both

keep up the topical shit

good flow and vocab

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This collab was dope, flow was on point, and had good imagery. Keep spittin.

That shit was awesome..good collab all around...Kudos to all yalls............................................. .....................

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This was a nice Colab. Very good word play from Masta C, and good descriptions by Mc-Uski ( bout the killas and nightmares ).
This was a pretty good drop hommies, Im feeling it. 8 / 10

---> Can you plz return the favor and check the flow in my sig. Im positive you wont be disapointed, aight hommies.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

Masta C, i'll give your piece 9.5/10.... you had some great emotion, you kept consistent multies and internals, and your piece flowed pretty much perfectly throughout the entire read.... great job! the only thing u didnt have that great was vocab, besides "optics" you didnt have much stimulating words... but the rest was great

MC Uski, you had some problems... although your piece was more storylike than Masta C's, the flow went off towards the middle to the end, and u didnt have advanced rhymes like multies and internals... same with the vocab... but your piece was above average... 7/10

9.5/10 + 7/10 = 16.5/20 = 8.25/10

so altogether, you guys make a pretty dope team.. nice work guys and keep dropping

I thought the begging was tight, the end kinda droped off. The flow was nice for both. Keep writting.

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This was good.. I mean the multis was def kicking from masta c.. people don't pay enough attention to them.. yet most people can't do them when their really easy.. There wasn't no quaotable.. The take on this topic was quite basic.. But it turned out above average.. The 'Life' topic is very played.. You pulled little pieces of this off well though..

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nice flow and good metas....great use of vocab

i would give it a 8/10

hot collab...

This was a hot collab here guys, i really enjoyed reading this, Masta C you always on top of the game i enjoy your stuff, masta your verse was nice i liked the multies and the flow of it....MC Uski i must say you did very well on this piece, I enjoyed reading your stuff, first time i read it and i enjoyed it, i will be looking for more of your stuff Uski it was hot, im sure like you are hehe...but overall good collab guys keep it up.

^^LoL I am ;)

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yeah man another decent drop jus checked ya last and i gotta say i thinbk masta you did better on this specially for it being played to fuck......good use of multis...and both had some good vocab......i think on the other you's were thinking more of the feeling....so lacked the vocab....this time there wasnt that distraction......yeah another good peice......

lol..Deva you replied to this twice you must have liked it that much or something lol....but thanks for the feedback though..keep the feedback coming in.

This pz was very true with a good solid point and theme and I feel where your coming from. Life's a bitch and nvr w/o a hitch. But
I have to pull to another side of the spectrum I wasn't feeling the flow I think it was to jerky there wasn't a solid consistency that I think would have put this pz on pac. Keep floing and going ull get there eventually. pz and luv

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Yeah Thanks For The Feedback, Uppping this to get some more feedback on this, Thanks.

i think the collabo was tight over all 7/10 good shit keep it up

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