10 lines...
Due asap...
No feedin...
Bring heat son...
:shoot:
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10 lines...
Due asap...
No feedin...
Bring heat son...
:shoot:
Cut ya bars wit hollow tips and solid clips that cumbust and scar,
i handle 'iron 9's' you just 'stroke' beef cause you aint "up to par"
i stand like statues wit teks, just to 'pose a threat'
rip out your lungs 'wit your own hands'...but winnin?
..dont "hold your breath"
Listen.....bitch i'll smack you till ya "head-rages"
only time explicit produces "numbers" is on the bottom of "web-pages"
i bring fire to flows and like retirment homes...your reps-feeble,
and ur wack ass verse to me'll do nothin...but boost your net-ego,
got heart? i write lines to rip thru all your bold-text,
and like 'joggers pissin in snowstorms' only thing you 'drop' is "cold sweats"
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I'll straight put ya rhyme ta shame.... teks verse neva got off the ground like an iraqi fighter plane\
ya rhyme’s are plain droppin wak quit talkin back .....or else i’ma cream this pussy like monistat\
just stop the act ‘fore I stomp this cat...tek’s like jenny craig rejects you just ain’t droppin fat\
ya not jus wak tek fa real ya bland...and rubbin between ya toes is the only way ta feel ya jam\
ya quick ta ‘dodge’ wit no skill ta ‘ram’ in the end like sex changes gone wrong I’m still the man\
kill ya plan cause all that ya spit is filler....shit I could even feed off your verse then shit it iller\
this kids a killer? doesn't tek see he's just a textcee battlin newb's only reson his records ten three\
you'll neva get-me no matter how hard ya flow tries....cause this battles a mismatch kinda like ya multi's\
ya gonna lose no lies what even gives this coward the nerve...cause jus like cops I got the power ta serve\
uppin this shit for some votes............................................. .................................................. .....................................
votes anyone?........................................... .................................................. ......................
I saw that rule about only uppin your thread 5 times, but does that really apply if you havent got a singlee vote and everytime you up the thread its on like the fifth page back anyways up for the 4th time
i cant vote but Tek had a nice verse
but
rip out your lungs 'wit your own hands'...but winnin?
..dont "hold your breath"
^^^^^^^one of THE MOST played lines man!.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................
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stop with the ups lol.....u will get DQ'ed ova wise :|
u dont want that!
Tek shud win this neway as his verse beat yours in every category
vote = tek
Gay Vote... Gone
-Axe
Tek
good lines rhymes meta's, took over all, u won tyha battle.
liked ya first 2 lines, good start
vote TEK
can u vote on my and tribal battle
and my and 1st to wrecks battle
honest votes apprciated hommies.
holla
pz
Gay Vote Also... Hoe.
-Axe
Upppn... appreciate votes...
drop links coz i aint gonna go searchin...
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Uppn (2)... vote plz
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dayme how stretched was ILL.
Breakdown====
Punches-Tek
Flow-Tek
Personals-Tek
Enjoyment-Both
Sustainment-Tek
Metas-Both
Overall-Tek...flow matched punches
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97712
Forget buggin dawg... the shits hit aight... nice break down too.
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No really... can i get some votes???
Im followin all links dropped so plzzz vote..
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Aiight.........
Tek:Shyt was hott flow was nice,punch's were nice,structure was aiight,overall nice verse!...keep it up!
Cut ya bars wit hollow tips and solid clips that cumbust and scar,
i handle 'iron 9's' you just 'stroke' beef cause you aint "up to par"
i stand like statues wit teks, just to 'pose a threat'
rip out your lungs 'wit your own hands'...but winnin?
..dont "hold your breath"
Listen.....bitch i'll smack you till ya "head-rages"
only time explicit produces "numbers" is on the bottom of "web-pages"
^ sum nice shyt!!
Ok Now....
I.E:shyt wasnt bad,nice flow wit it,it was enjoyable,but tek made me laugh more!!....but keep it up!!....nice try.
I'll straight put ya rhyme ta shame.... teks verse neva got off the ground like an iraqi fighter plane\
ya rhyme’s are plain droppin wak quit talkin back .....or else i’ma cream this pussy like monistat\
just stop the act ‘fore I stomp this cat...tek’s like jenny craig rejects you just ain’t droppin fat\
ya not jus wak tek fa real ya bland...and rubbin between ya toes is the only way ta feel ya jam\
ya quick ta ‘dodge’ wit no skill ta ‘ram’ in the end like sex changes gone wrong I’m still the man\
kill ya plan cause all that ya spit is filler....shit I could even feed off your verse then shit it iller\
^ sum nice punch's!!
Vote:tek
reason:he gets my vote by a little!!
my votes goes to tek to me he had a better flow wordplay was good even punches multis were about the same both had vocab
over all vote TEK
Gay Vote.
-Axe
uppn this... an wtf @ End for gettin rid of all my votes???
i shoulda won by now or have at least a few more votes.
yo uppn mayn... can we get some gotdamm votes plz???
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Stop Upping... If You Up Your Battle Once More After This... You're DQ'ed.
-Axe
check it i'll hit this up with some vizotes no hate
structure- goes to Tek... you spit stretched lines MC.. its ok though ..
flow- Again Tek cause stretched lines will fuck up your flow...
punches- Tek kid knows what he is doing you had some ok ones... jenny craig one for example but he "Edged" it out since he fuckin likes that word...
personals...Tek his were just funnier and shit... sorry but he clowned on you...
opener-i'll give to MC wasn't feeling that opener Tek..sorry not my style...heh nice verse though..
closer - GOes to TEk
overall- TeK 9 blows this Kat away love..and fuck your vote..
and by MC i of course ment ill explicit my bad with the name ....one love if you read the breakdown you'll know i took the time and fuck it either way.
Cut ya bars wit hollow tips and solid clips that cumbust and scar,
i handle 'iron 9's' you just 'stroke' beef cause you aint "up to par"
Nice opener ^ let's break it down.............................................. .....
Opener=Tek
Closer=Tek
Punches=Tek
Flow=Tie
Personals=Tek
Metas=Both
Overall-Tek
Nice drop peeps. FINALLY a decent non-one-sided battle.
Werd nuks.. preciate it.
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punches-tek
flow-tie
personals-tek
opener-tek
closer-tek
structure-tie
overall-tek
hit this up witha a honest vote......thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98986
Punches: Tek
Metas: Ill (could ya toss a few more, I don't think there were enough in ya verse!)
Format: Tek
Punches: Tek
Wordplay: Tek
Comments:
Ill: That was an 18 line verse ya threw.
Shorten that shit up, it fucks ya flow all to hell.
And it's looked upon as cheap cuz ya really breaking the rules by going that long when ya opponent ain't.
Tek: Lay off the gangsta rap. It's pretty played to death to be talkin bout 9's and shit. Also, kill the quotation marks in ya verse. Herbish.
Peace