B.I.Denied Vs visinE

10 LINES MAX
NO FEEDING ETC
30 MINS TO SPIT AFTA CHECK IN
BLIND SPIT
GOOD LUCK

EXPLAINED VOTES WILL ONLY COUNT PZ

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my check in.............................keyin it now pz.............
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B.I.Detained, get ya brains left all over the hood on my Range/
Your life is framed, and now your gurl I'll be takin' in exchange/
Ya whole world raped and dis-engauged, no ecscape'n the chains/
Like a masked caper insane, rob you and go straight to da train/
No time to be statin' ya name, your first L?...I'm stakin' my claim/
I Don't mistake you for lame, thas just the nature of your game/
Hatred and shame, I'm breakin' your fame, you take me for tame/
You da man? that blatant insane, make you shake from my name/
Earth-Quake ya terrain, step to me now my gat werk statin' you slain/
Change ya name, Re-Arrange the same, and show you NEVER will I. B. Detained/

Keyed Blah!!!!
Wordplay--those who know vote--those who dont,dont

got no material on you...maybe this type of nylon is easily sonned
...only time ya feel good w/ happy days is wen ya filling the Fonz
can't you see I'm Ad-visin you...which is quit while ya still Down...
Town on ya bitch...see Hairy situations are wot you end in Clown
left dazed in certain circles(ava)...even b4 I put fingers to Keys...
..E said I'd be a BlowOver...made this hoe get down on 2 Knees
..I Propose a toast a chump that didn't make it to 100 posts...
...but like Most he got Embaressed N Hid in a Mode called Ghost
no doubt i can predict when i can come w/Heat or spit Lame...
...but the difference between us is that you think its the Same

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Opener-Vis
Punches-BI
Flow-BI
Wordplay-B.I
Vocab-Tie
Structure-...probably Vis
Closer-Vis( I liked the I.B Detained Part)
Overall-Vis 4-3... Feedback in My Sig Please

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good battle here

punches - tie
wordplay - tie
personals - V
structure - B
creativity - tie
enjoyability - tie
vocab/complexity - V

overall - close battle.........but V merked.........

-pace-
::wtf::

uppin for these 2.............................

v(up1)

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i dont know full seems like a tie im going wit visine on this one very close batttle though just dont know how to put my finger on it

nm the winner is visine nm sy i take that back visine got this battle all the way GJ man nicely said there

UPPIN FOR SUM REAL VOTES PLZ PZ..................
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wordplay-B.I.
flow-VisinE
punches-VisinE
structure-VisinE
closer-VisinE
opner-B.I.
overall-VisinE took this one
my VOte=VisinE

hit up the battles in my sig we bein slept on thanks yo peace...........

[color=limegreen] If i reach 100 posts in time ill poll my vote on this battle im soory that i cant guys wish i could thankz Peac3_____________________

Yo, herez tha breakdown:

Punches: Visine
Flow: Visine
Creativity: Visine
Vocab: I. B
Enjoyment: Visine

Overall: Visine

No beef, fuckin' awesome battle fa hurbs...nice start fa b

thx for your honest votes
Still need more tho
Still need more tho
Still need more tho
Still need more tho

Shit sons! Could you guys make it any closer? I'm gonna have to say Visine I felt your flow on that one bro. Fuck that was way too fuckin close gj both of you. I liked your meataphors though B.I good job.
If you guys have time could you check these out?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=96549

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=96809

Plz vote honestly.

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wordplay-B.I.
flow-VisinE
punches-VisinE
structure-VisinE
closer-VisinE
opner-B.I.
overall-VisinE took this one
my VOte=VisinE

I agree with unleashed... anyway hit up the battles in my sig Peac3!________________-

visinE DQ'ed For Uppin Six Times... I've Seen You In Other Battles Up A Lot And I've Let You Slide... Not Any More, Read The Rules.