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Blind Spit.
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Checkin in.....
GOOD LUCK!!!
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No-Crew. Hate. d/r votes
No-feddin
Blind Spit.
verse due 40min after check in.
ALL votes must be explained
Checkin in.....
GOOD LUCK!!!
goodluck to you also
this my checkin see you in
40min
peace
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Mic out your teeth and rip out your vocal cords and tie them around your neck make it a suicide with a rope...
Xtreme Pussy spills s.o.s verses of himself, full of chills , cold of Aids and no your Rhymes are but Dope...
This Totsie Roll with corn rolls on to tight think twice pray to christ you jus might die tonight...
This Rap game tied up in gold chains, Explicit ima frame on my wall and spit shine you all night...
Your just as tough as the houses you built, the lines you state is as stright as the mic you lick...
its through it you speak and breath not stroke and toung play like your boyfriends dick...
D.O.I biggist mastake was lettin you in, no good came out of you they just need 8 friends to begin...
your heart broken like your step mom wen i left her six kids with no bread and 7th child within...
im leathal with this mic, i dropped the gates and blades with this im i'll contegous and on top still...
Your still an mc who stands on stage chokes and feels your own nuts jus quit and i'll write your will...
lay you six feet under with no cover suffer through the after life carry this battle with you...
i'll call tupacs angels number to jump over to you and slapp the lines you wrote leave a simple FUCK YOU...
explanation on some stuff
Xtreme Pussy=XP look over his bio
just as tough as the houses you built= occupation construction
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Originally posted by Explict
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No-Crew. Hate. d/r votes
No-feddin
Blind Spit.
verse due 40min after check in.
ALL votes must be explained
jus so you no and everyone goin to vote
peace
Rhymes, hope your ready for an extraordinary coronary
call ahead to the coroner, and I'll escort you to the mortuary
Hmph..this kid is a mistake, misery on a plate
don't need utensils for this victory,
this dumb crumb is OK to waste
face the fact, your laced with wack,
you should've passed on that extra crack,
I got the ax in tact,
I'm up to the task but your the hack
there's no fix for his limp wristed rhymes
kid, stick with spyrographics, my chiropractic practice
will leave you ravaged
cats hunger for my madness,
while you sit in wonder like Freddy Savage
Catch a dick you pathetic prick,
your rhetoric is set to miss,
I spit hectic wreck-less script to push you off this precipice
here's my hypothesis,
your bound to bleed from my synopsis, you post protein deposits,
like your trying to squeeze the sperm out your esophagus
I'll mop up this mess,
you're not tight, you lack the style and the gumption,
somethin not right when you come to a cockfight with a penile
erectile dysfunction
Watch this dweeb drop to his knees,
fucker should've learned to bob and weave,
he's catchin lumps when I spew chunks and left Rhymes drunk with his dry heaves
look, sorry about the headaches and my bad for the length,
but, if you need something for the pain I suggest Tylenol extra strength.
so if I refer to you as my dog, what I really mean is you my bitch..
nice drop
lets get some votes
peace
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punches-XP
multis-Xp
closer-Rhyme
opener-Xp
personals-rhyme
winner- Xp
nice battle to yas both.....
thanks for your time and your vote.. good verse u had there Rhymes............................................ .................................................. .....................
overall from what i seen, xplicit won this one. he had a hot verse with some excellent vocab and some hard punches. rhymes, you had some decent personals but ya flow was off some and i wasnt quite feeling it. good battle overall, though.
I think both flows were choppy, but both had ok punches. Overall though i think explicit came a little harder. Plus rhymes you started off pretty wack but the last part of your verse was cool, just not consistent enough with the flow and punches as EX was.
aight thanx for the votes so far
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for more votes
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appriciate the those that took the time to vote.........uppin for some votes............................................. ......(1)
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more votes you'll drop a link and we'll return the favour
peace
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common people please stop sleepin on this battle. you wouldn't like it if people slept on yours.. uppin (2)............................................... ......
i say that explicit wonthis one.he had good flow,good lines and a killer opener. rhymes had a killer closer though.but overall i say that explicit took this one