lets go dawg
10 lines
NO DR,CV biting
you spit first
half hour to spit
checkin
good luck
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lets go dawg
10 lines
NO DR,CV biting
you spit first
half hour to spit
checkin
good luck
my bad close this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........
ok wtf............nvm don't close this..........................anywayz dawg/.....................................checckin in................................................ ........................
Lets go
ill battle still
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aiight u drop first............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................
Wassup wit ya ni99as 10 lines....whatever
Got my own style, dont care what u fags think/
I blow ur brains out til u think about E like a gas tank/
ill put the mac to ur stomach watch ur abs shrink/
ill pull my heat on c rocka, melt him like betty crocka/
ill put the nine to ur dome so i can be ur brain docta/
I dont desire beef, or id kill u, see where ur eternity leads/
Put shots in u, make u internally bleed/
After that, i'd ride off, gat in hand and all/
Pushing a small porsche/
And laughing cause i just left u wit more holes than a golf coarse/
yo you gonna spit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............................................
aiight check this dawg......
This kid just joined,well he's just about to leave/
Spit out acid and leave this kids shirt with no sleaves/
You put yourself in a bad position now you studdering like G,G,G-unit/
Rhymes left this kid lesbian,now he part of the sh,sh,SHE Unit/
I'm the ms.cleo of RB,i knew i won before i got here/
Drown this bitch with my lyrics,bitch get your scuba gear/
This kids still in first gear,while i'm up in the fifth/
My verse is nice,consider it my valentines gift/
Turn irv gay,now he talkin about how cute his boyfriend is/
i said Why you dickride so much,he said Thats my boyfriends biz/
WHAT LETS GET THESE VOTES IN PLAYAZZ
oh and on the last time biz means business
biz=business...................................... .....................................
aiight we got our verses in....sooo.....lets get these votes in..........................good battle mayn,............................................. .........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...891#post951891 drop some votes so i cna close out this battle its been up for a week and aint done yet hollaaaaa
lol ok...........................freepost playa lmfao what u think about this battle?........................................... ..............................................
yo yo, close battle props on both of ya'll, im goin wit Rocka, mad punches, miss cleo and the g unit are both tight, u gamin it man holla
there we go thanx dawg...................i appreciate the respect yall be givin me.......................word up................................................ ........
crocka got it in my opinon da 1 st cat need 2 add more words in his lines it didnt sound right 4 some reason it was hott it jus needed.more vocab but it was a good 1 holla
thanx dawg and yall stop calling me crocka lmfao its C-rocka............................................. .................................................. ...........................
uppin this ish come on dawgz can i get sum votes in this bizzatch it would be appretiated....................................... .........................................
Opening: C
Closer: C
Flow: tie
Structure: IRV
Personals: C (both sucked)
Punches: C
WIn: C
Kind of a newbie battle but Oh well. IRV work some personals into your flow and throw some punches towards your opponent, not jus someone in general
aiight dawg thanx for peepin this battle and the vote.............................................. ..............................lets vote yall.....................
ILL GIVE IT TO C ROCKA FOR PUCHLINES BUT I FEEL IRV WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF HE HAD BETTER STRUCTURE BUT IFEEL IT WAS A CLOSE BATTLE BUT C ROCKA PULL OF THE VOTE SO MY VOTE GOES TO C ROCKA
CREATIVITY C Rocka
puchlines C- rocka
Vocab Both
structure c- ROCKA
CHECK OUT MY LATEST BATTLE AGAINST Diverse AND GIVE ME AND HONEST VOTE BOTH OF YALL
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aiight thanx for the vote i am about to check this shit out............................................... ..................................................
.................................................. .................................................. ..................................uppin don't get lazy i will give honest feedback to ur battles
yo break down,
opener-c
punches-c
personals-tie neither had much
structure-c irv you had that gay super short line
metas- irv, i'm gonna say, close tho, neither had much
closer-tie
overall- c
nice battle, c work on metas, everything else is good, u got skillz bro, and irv, work on structure, punches,etc, basicly elevate, that verse was pretty elementry, that goes for c too, that gay shit is getting played too much.
i feel ya ...tryed to go for it 1 more tyme lmfao aiight dawg............................uppin............. .................................................. .
yo, shit my bad, i didn't see no cv. but yo i posted an honest vote. no hate here. and he aint an official crew yet............................................... ...............
.................................................. ............... y'all cool
.................................................. .................uppin............................ .................................................. .................................................. ..........
Gotta give this to C Rocka, not only because he hit harder but for sheer enjoyment. Nice battle man, keep elevating, and on and on....haha. Repay the favor if you will and vote on these battles that are being slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95069
and
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95433
peace
aiight dawg thanx for the vote....................uppin..................... .................................................. .................................................. ................................................
opener-C
closer-C
metas-Irv
vocab-both
structure-C
flow-C
Punches-C
personals-None
Peep my battles in my sig with honest feed back please...
come on dawgz uppin this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........
Always somone having the same choices as me. I agree with this, both need to work on personals. C, work on ya structure a little bit hommie. And Irv, elevate hommie, aight...Quote:
Originally posted by TAG
Opening: C
Closer: C
Flow: tie
Structure: IRV
Personals: C (both sucked)
Punches: C
WIn: C
Vote - C
---> Return the favor and vote on the battle in ma sig hommie
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion