10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u drop first
JEGO AND 1LINER CANT VOTE
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10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u drop first
JEGO AND 1LINER CANT VOTE
Checkin in...........................I'll drop afta u playa holla back
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I'll drop tommarow.
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Yo, check it...
Only time peeps mention ya name, is when they say Wattz he talkin' about?!/
Gets Turned On by a Screw, but I'm turnin' this Light Bulb out/
How his name sopose to be Wattz, when he cant even Light-Up a line/
This nigga bends over to get Screwd-In so much, he Cums-Hard-Like-His-Spine/
Of course this kids name is John, his verses are Full-of-Shit/
Tellin' me to vote for you on AIM, well thats because ya Punches-Cant-Hit/
Tell ya what, I'll get a mod. to Close this before ya Stop-Breathin'/
No, not a Close battle, I said Close the battle, we know how You-Have-Trouble-Readin'!!!/
You now just Lost-Ya-1st-Battle like me, Feels-Hard now dont it?!/
I just stoped ya Foward Progress, like a Full-Speed-Car-Doin'-Donuts!!!/
Yep, another win to the record. Have fun tryin' to beat that.
Me... ------------ You...
:shoot: -------- :huh:
Uppin' for you to drop...
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Vote #1:
C rocka .vs. damurderousone
Vote #2:
Vasaline .vs. Frito
i'LL DROP IN A 1 HOUR I HAD TO HANDLE SOME BIZ
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This nigga ape bolded his shit and it still don’t stand out//
Jwattz winnin w/o a doubt,cut ape's neck so his spit can air out//
u low life 19 yr old u gotta be a complete retard to wanna be a ape//
u look more stupid than decaprio in who’s eating gilbert grape//
I already heard ya shit befo its like another re-run of family matter//
quit ya chatter,I got punches that will lyrically make ya heart shatter//
Peeps all them nigga in my sig choose ya spot cause ur tha next 1//
ya already done,ya head is gone like I’m Oswald wit tha gun//
I have trouble reading?I juss don’t prefer reading ya whack shit//
ya used the word "close" 3 times in ya spit,ya punches still didn’t hit//
Line 1: he bolded his words
Line 3:he’s 19
Line 4:in that movie decaprio was playin a slow kid
Line 8: Oswald shot president kennedy in tha head
Line 9:he said I got trouble reading
Line 10: u the word close 3 times in his bar
Yep, and once again, Ape come out victorious.
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Close Battle...Breakdown...
FLOW=BOTH
PUNCHES=BOTH
PERSONALS=BOTH
WORDPLAY=APE
OVERALL=APE
VOTE=APE
Ape Edged It Out With His Wordplay...Both Came Hard, But Ape Edged It Out...Keep Battling Guys...
opening - watz
flow - watz
punches - both
personals - both
struct - watz (ape dont bold ya words and do blah-blah-blah)
metas - ape
multis - none
closing - tie
overall - watz
aiyo watz if u aint in a crew you should come try out for D.O.I.
breakdown
flow-wattz
wordplay-ape
punches-ape
personals-wattz
opener-tie
closer-ape
gonna give this one to ape by a hair make a better closer next time for a guy with a record of 5 and 0 telling someone there punches didn't hit was the best you could do?....come now...vote ape
Not Too Bad A Battle But For Future
Refferences Don't Bold Your Words
Ape...Jonny's First Bar Was Nice But
Every Thing Else Was Blah, Ape Came
Consistent.
Poll Vote= Ape Better Puns, And Meta's.
Please Vote Honestly.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95451
opener - ape
closer - ape
punches - tie
wordplay - ape
overal - ape
johnny wattz fed from ape's verse and that is not cool.
Damn peeps, can you please break down a verse line for line so we each know what are the strong points of our verses?!
opener:wattz
closer:both
punches:ape
word play:ape
overall:ape
good battle dawg but ape gets da vote
oh my bad vote goes to ape but also vote for this battle yall...honest votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95731