!st to wreck vs Remixed Illusion

aight 10 lines
blind spit
30 minutes after check in
no hate
crew
d/r votes
explaned votes
break down

aight check in and then 30 minutes to spit aight....

checkin in right here.............................................. ..................................HOLLA

yo this my rein to end ur life, take it to my hands and shank u wit my knife//
u think ur hard, well after my blade i think i left ya scared, and bleeding//
i'ma leave ur family greeving at christmas, because u lost this battle, and got dismissed//
u take no tolerance, well u will when i tower over ur stance, u stand no chance//
my lyrics are like a army of red fire ants, here tha chants, and leave tha stage//
better yet leave this dimension, in a utter life barred suspension//
tonite ut tha first to get wrecked, b put in check, and then stand tall and get decked//
a fist to tha face, and a broken nose, from tha flow of lyrics that grow to show//
but for my finisher, i will diminsh u wit regretes that take effect
after this battle gets errect, to leave u to lose, and to b a closed as a rejected subject//

Battel:vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95531

awaiting for ur verse
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I'm bout to kill you twice in 10 lines, but that's been done before...just look at your record, them losses stand out too much to ignore...you think you gon merk me; that pot must be gettin to your head...i'll come though with no buzz, and make sure that your dead...i'll leave you with brain damage and a hole in yo skull... and then break you like a pencil, non sharpened; dull...don't endulge in the dream, that you can beat my team...i'll petrify you like the ring, and leave you whipped like cream...and you a bitch, with no flows, so what i accomplish,.. is that without an accomplice, you'll be a soft and stomped bitch

well...votes? and i gotta be out peice...*shake hands*


i'm ghost.........................Holla

hahahahahahaha uppin for some votes
UPPIN FOR VOTES
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hey uppin, lets get some votes up on this, holla....
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UPPIN, how long duz it takes ta get votes? holla fuckin christ, holla on this battle who got merked.
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remixed illusion i think you won this battle.. good job yo.. you had some ok punches and some ok wordplay. 1st to wreck you had an ok verse but it wasnt good enough to beat remixed.. i will get 100 post and be back to poll..

overall-remixed

can you return the favor and post and honest vote on my battle.. its being hella sleept on.. you should know how that feels.lol..get 2 more posts and hit up and honest vote..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=96981

it would be much appriciated..

thank you

Poll vote hommies
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UPPIN, don forget to poll vote peeps,
holla hommies and poll a vote up in here
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oh and vote on this yo'z
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=97204

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cant really find the winner.....
dont matter, i cant vote ne way

but

the structure was kinda weak on both, yall can easily fix that tho

had soem good ideas on the punches....both of u try to make ur punches around cleverness, not the rhyming word that fits best after ur set up..know what i mean? think it out a little more....but there was some good stuff. pretty even battle..

if yall get a chance hit up my shit if your bored...

vs. elude
and vs. meters

thanks

flow - RI
structure -RI
multis -RI
punches -RI
wordplay -RI
Overall-RI

Vote:RI

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ON3

1st got this better flow shitty structure but better punches. remixed your verse was aight but nothing stood out and frankly the lines weren't rhyming well and you had no hard punches. 1st check my battle with j-yo and vote, thanks

onee

POLL VOTE HOMMIES
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flow - RI
structure -RI
multis -RI
punches -RI
wordplay -RI
Overall-RI

Vote:RI

^ He took this with out a dought, everything was better... ^

--> Return the Favor and make a honest flow Here It would be much appriciated...

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

Remixed took this hands down like 6;30. even though his flow was falling off alot, he still had somewhat of punchlines and his verses better overall....

vote - remixed.

ohhh, and please vote for this.

Vote Here!

POLL VOTE HOMMIES!!!!!!!
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wow how fucked up was 1st to wrecks structure.??? lol
Breakdown--
Punches-R.I
Flow-R.I
Enjoyment-R.I
Creativity-Both..1st was kinda witty
Sustainment-R.I
Overall-R.I
not a bad piece but i say ya change ya structure
it'll be more affective for flow..pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...065#post975065

yo i hit this so hit up that link above plz^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I'll give the edge to Remix but it was close. The metas and multis were ok for both but I think !st lost it with the ender.

Can't poll but this will help up the thread.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1

hey mods can i get this closed, no one is voting on this battle.

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1st took this easily. neither had incredible flow or structure or anything, but 1st was harder than remixed....

vote-1st

good battle


1tw you need to work on your structure and need to come harder when your doing a verse, read other battles and see how they do it..


i think remixed got this battle because of his punches and structure but you need to work on your flow

Remixed Illusion Is DQ'ed For Excessive Upping... Read The Rules.
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