TAG v. Boy Wonder

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No hate/crew/DR/etc votes
Blind spit
Drop within 10 minutes after you check in
When you get here check in and drop
When I see you check in I'll do the same and drop

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They call ya Boy Wonder cause my skills ya be "Robin"
Wearin tight ass spandex that leaves gay men sobbin
Jay-Z as your Avitar, man you should follow his lead
Stop right now, pause to regret battlin me and leave
Like a mousetrap I'm just waitin ta snap
And I bet I will after readin your weak ass rap

This was supposed to be a blind spit there buddy. It's very clear in the rules. Whateva newb. Jus post your verse

yo dawg yo flows not tight enough/especially when yo boys rappin tighter that hand cuffs/dawg play around and get yo shirt tagged up/and have you fellin like what good is yo life if you cant feel nothing from the waist up/nigga yo flow is weak thats a no brainer/me being better than tag is like a bitch that doesnt give head thats a no brainer






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TAG

They call ya Boy Wonder cause my skills ya be "Robin"
Wearin tight ass spandex that leaves gay men sobbin
(Good opener, good personal shit, funny too)

Jay-Z as your Avitar, man you should follow his lead
Stop right now, pause to regret battlin me and leave
(Decent)

Like a mousetrap I'm just waitin ta snap
And I bet I will after readin your weak ass rap
(OK closer)

Boy Wonder (unfuck yaself too, break ya shit down line by line)

yo dawg yo flows not tight enough/
especially when yo boys rappin tighter that hand cuffs/
(Aight opener, it works)

dawg play around and get yo shirt tagged up/
and have you fellin like what good is yo life if you cant feel nothing from the waist up/
(OK, lackin any kind of real punch though, mostly just filler)

nigga yo flow is weak thats a no brainer/
me being better than tag is like a bitch that doesnt give head thats a no brainer
(Weak closer)

Vote-TAG, his whole verse was just nice with good personals and punches with a little wordplay. Boy Wonder, break ya shit down like TAG did next time, i see confusing garbage like that again and the next time i go over ya momma's crib i'll tell her to keep ya locked up in the basement this time.

yo this was a coo battle but i got to go with Boy Wonder his flow was together tag you was hot too but Wonder got it

Where To Start... You Have The Same IP As Boy Wonder... So That's Reason Enough To Take The Vote Away... Also, Gay Explanation = Vote Gone.
-Axe

^Anyone else jus read that^ lmfao wtf? He beat me in flow? hmmmm maybe thats why your 0-5 lol whateva. Uppin fo some real explained votes

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Vote = Tag

Harder and more creative punches and if that aint enough structure lol

Boy wonder basically got merked here

METAPHORES - TAG
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - TAG
STRUCTURE - TAG
CREATIVITY - TAG
PERSONALS - TAG
OPENING - TAG
CLOSING - TAG
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - TAG

OVERALL - TAG

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uppin(3) for some votes please!!!!!!! .................................................. .................................................. .....

Tag took this, one sided battle, he had bw on punches, flow, and meta's. Thats all he needed, don't really need to put it in to a breakdown. Tag took this by far, quit battlin these herbs.
~1~

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vote tag he had sick lines and he came harder boy wonders shit was all fucked up and organized and it was pissing me off.................

i'm not gonna break this down boy wonder had no flow it took like a minute to get to your punchlines kid and then when i got there it wasn't worth the work ....TAG no question

tag got this wit better punches and more creativity

and JKid u have been reported to a mod for voting for yourself..cuz you are boywonder