Hot Shit- Peep This People

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camarac
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94245

rule
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95297

lyrical mob
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...402#post946402

Notice the overabundance of explosives here/
Bitch i'll blow up ya chest like your name was Britney Spears/
That's right I'm obsessed with weapons/
makin rappers fall apart like P. Diddy after J.Lo left him/
Say whatever I want, I'm a lyrical villian/
When I rap, cats get excited like Micheal Jackson in a room full of children/
Everybody love my flow/
Even got white folks watchin me like a reality show/
The day I fall off the throne/
Will be the exact same day Ashanti learns to hit a high note/
I'm P.S.L.'s Big L, but I'm still alive/
Plus I grab attention like Serena Williams' theighs/
Shavin my nuts bi-weekly, yeah it's all in the Rogaine/
Arsonist, I'm like Hank Hill, cause I always use Propane/
and propane accessories, I'm corrupt with complexity/
My rhymes deserve mentioning, my style is deafening/
I'll battle a Banks,Budden,Jones,Carter, or Marshal/
confidence overwhelming, IQ is partial/
Don't wanna start no/
beef; write an article/
bout this unsigned hype, the unbreakable monacle/
My word! I say that SPIKE is bloody good!/
Websta is my rap name, is that understood?/
Let it be known that I'm climbin the ranks/
So fuck wit me an ill leave ya body floatin on the banks/

GOT DAMN!

Yo Dunny i don't know why people are sleepin dis...

HOTTNESS!!!!!

Lyric's was solid... Lmfao...Flow was no point... concepts where there...

You came off hott with opener...closer??? dunno bout dat but..

"Notice the overabundance of explosives here/
Bitch i'll blow up ya chest like your name was Britney Spears/
That's right I'm obsessed with weapons/
makin rappers fall apart like P. Diddy after J.Lo left him/
Say whatever I want, I'm a lyrical villian/
When I rap, cats get excited like Micheal Jackson in a room full of children/"

You Killed it there son fa sho... 9/10... good spit...

keep ya game up, an never stop elevatin... On3

THX FOR THE ROPS MD.

now quit fuckin sleepin on this people, damn.

HOLY SHIT THE SLEEPERS HERE ARE UN BALIEVIBLE.
QUIT SLEEPIN ON THIS MUTHA FUCKAS.
UPPIN^

UPPIN^^^

Yeah this was pretty good....I liked the britney line, made me laugh....but your structure could be a bit better though, you should try to make your lines around the same length....vocab in this was pretty good....overall this was a good piece...keep at it.

I don't think this was at hot as MD let to believe. . but it was cool none-the-less. .

The concepts were there, although some of them very played.. JLo/Pdiddy, Britney Spears, etc.

The flow was good in this, though, and was very easy to pick up on. .

Overall a decent piece, not eye popping or anything, but solid.

YO THANKS FOR THE FEED BACK MAST C & KREDIT.

UPPIN^

yo son this was raw i dont know why cat thinks its a fucking posturpedic bed yo i got a crew out we trying to do our thingyou welcome in if you want

YO THX FOR THE PROPS WORD, AND ABOUT THE CREW THATS A DEFF. YESS ABOUT JOINING. ILL PM YOU BOUT IT

you wuddup this was a pretty good drop...there were a few lines that had me laughing...flow was good but short lines in some spots were difficult to fallow...a few stand out lines were:

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Notice the overabundance of explosives here/
Bitch i'll blow up ya chest like your name was Britney Spears/
That's right I'm obsessed with weapons/
makin rappers fall apart like P. Diddy after J.Lo left him/
Say whatever I want, I'm a lyrical villian/
When I rap, cats get excited like Micheal Jackson in a room full of children/

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yo by P.S.L do you mean port st. lucie in florida???

holla

THX FOR THE PROPS REHAB, ABOUTH THE PSL ILL PM YOU

pretty good drop your flow was alright had some great metas and multies nice vocab keep doin ye thing hot drop pz...an yo cud you hit my battl wit an honest vote thanks man

wait nevermind you only got 57 posts

THX FOR THE FEED BACK RULE SRY BOUT NOT BEIN ABLE TO VOTE PZ.
UPPIN^

Notice the overabundance of explosives here/
Bitch i'll blow up ya chest like your name was Britney Spears/
That's right I'm obsessed with weapons/
makin rappers fall apart like P. Diddy after J.Lo left him/
Say whatever I want, I'm a lyrical villian/
When I rap, cats get excited like Micheal Jackson in a room full of children/

^^ laughing real hard there great stuff................. had great vocab good multis and good flow

9/10

YO THX FOR THE FEEDBACK NITRO, AND ILL HIT UP YOUR STUFF TO MY NIGGA.
PEACE

come niggaz dont sleep on this shit. uppin^^^^

UPPIN^^^

DONT SLEEP ON THIS NIGGAS.

UPPIN^^^