aight
You spit first
10-15 lines
normal house rules
i will pm you the link to this battle
if noone shows up by tonight
he is DQed and takes the lose
peace and goodluck
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aight
You spit first
10-15 lines
normal house rules
i will pm you the link to this battle
if noone shows up by tonight
he is DQed and takes the lose
peace and goodluck
checking in
i'll spit after your done
peace
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Checkin' in. I'll drop in about twenty.
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Nothing's worse than an emcee named after what he's bad at making/ (Rhymes)
It's like if an impotent man were to call himself fucking "babies"/
I refuse to sign the truce when rhymes already hangs from the gallows in a noose/
Even though the rope was loose his neck still cracked like a pair of ceramic shoes/
Even if he wrote pre-writes, he still wouldn't have rhymes to use/
He's like the Chicago Cubs in that it's his destiny to lose/
You came to get down so i bound you in rope and threw you off a cliff until i heard you hit the ground/
Couldn't decide which was a more sickening sound: your rhymes or the fleshy pound/
My rhymes hit you like a plummeting anvil as you daffy DUCKed down/
Buried you in a mound but when i digged you up later, only BUGS were found/
Rhymes is like a jewish person smoking on Christmas without a doubt/
Santa Claus may go into the chimney, but only Hannuka Harry comes out/
Sorry, some explanation if it's really needed.
The Chicago Cubs lose all of the time because of some curse supposedly.
The wordplay is a take-off on loony tunes.
The last line is like the holocaust...smoke comes out of the chimney. It's alright, i'm jewish so i'm allowed to make those jokes.
yo i'm not sure how long ago u wrote if anything sorry i took long...
Ima merk Meters untill he's a undisclose discription...
I'm like a docture fill you up a new prescription...
Teach you a lesson this mic is wet, like a bitch you suck...
You jus through the ammo im your gun you better duck...
Rip out your vocal cords do everyone the favour...
With rhymes like that it adds another victory with flavour...
Dissin my name wen the prof is said and just...(justified)
Add another win this newb is nothin i ever seen before blow you off like dust...
End this up with a mic kill with three pill of extacy...
Cusse this mutha fuckin fag standin next to me...
"I'm like a docture fill you up a new prescription..." it means add one more lose to his score board
peace
punches====meters
flow====meters
werd play====meters
rhyme scheme=====rhymes
overall====meters
meters' was the illest
vote=meters
Opening: Meters
Punches:Meter
Personals: neither really but meter was betta.
Flow: Meters
Closing: Meters
No contest. Ur really doing well since I merked u meters :-p haha good job bud - peace
Haha, thanks for the vote HeadWrecka but you merked me? I don't think so dawg. Haha. Actually. Yeah, you did fucking merk me. Anyway, UPPIN..............
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Punches: Meters
Disses: Rhymes
Personals: Meters
Wordplay: Meters only by a meter or so
Metas: Meters
Multis: Meters
Creativity: Rhymes
Vote: Meters
this battle was ok..nothin really hit hard..
meter was medocre until his second paragraph..he hit with some iight punches...the rest was so so...s closer sucked!!
rhymes verse was soft..nothin stood out either..very basic..punches were lackluster..both need to elevate
vote meters
upping third time
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man, i cant officially vote, but Meters extinguished Rhymes.......Meters, you have won in my opinion.....i cant vote on urs but.......you can vote on mine?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95117
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peace
Opener: Meters
Closer: Meters
Flow: Rhymes
Punches: Meters
Personals: ------
Win: Meters
A decent battle. Both need ta elevate some but not too bad
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open:meter
closer:meter
punches:meter
flow:rhymes
word play:meter
overal:meters:
ok battle...................................good shit dawg keep elevating
I think i have 6 votes : \
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Somebody has to kill this thread.
im sorry but this battle wus whack meters took it n couldve with a no show punches-meters personals-meters multis-meters
flow/structure-meters theres no need for further explanation METERS took this
peep my battles in my sig sorry meters i dint no u can only do 2 battles at a time OUR BATTLES R BEIN SLEPT ON
yo, here it is...
flow: rhymes...
opener: tie...
closer: tie...
wordplay: meters, he actually had one ;)
creativity: meters, rhymes is just to simple...
complexity: see creativity...
meta's: tie...
multi's: niether...
needs more elevation: tie...
winner: meters...
ok battle for two peeps who need elevation, jus keep it up on cloud 9 yo...
Opener: Meters
Closer: Meters
Flow: Rhymes
Punches: Meters
Personals: neither
Win: Meters
this was an ok battle both need to elevate some....
shit!! meter deffantly got this 1 .. sry man ... but deal wiht it... U LOST.....
yo... do me a favor and hit this up and vote 4 my lil cuz..... he kinda fucked my s.n up 4 me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=95721