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This is my check in, hope u drop so0n. pz
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No crew, hatin d/r votes
Due by 12:00 eastern time
Check in before u drop
5votes to win, 5-0 is a KO
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED otherwise they will not be counted
This is my check in, hope u drop so0n. pz
iight man,im checkin now............................................... ......................................
hey fagget,y the hell u a rappa,u cant hack it/
u call yoself DaIllistRebel,U aint no fuckin rebel man,u'll look like a fruity pepple when im done with u./
Your icon shows u think ur a thug,u'll be stumped like a rug after my verse,u wont be able to thinka shit except to make fun a my nickname,shit,u probly think a rap as a game./
U wont win this,im a kill this,like i killed yo fatha./i filled your momma las night,damn shes loud,i thought i was at an opera(shes the fat lady),and the fat lady is about to sing so i gotta go n get ready to swing.
man i took it easy on u to
the last line wasnt part a the verse,vote for me................................................ .................................................. ..........
Lol u shouldn't have "taken it easy on me". W/e here we go, if you don't get the punches, don't vote:
You sayin I can't hack it, look at urself, about to be 0-2 with no skill...
Ur rhymes couldn't be "on the money" u were rappin, standin on a "$20 bill"...
You really thinkin u SLIK? No chance of "swimmin w/ this league" ur a "fish with no gills"...
Cause I'll force u "backwords" w/ one "L", I should thank you "4" uppin my "kils"(kills)...
(Little style switch comin to the end)
This fence, is too high to climb, now readin my verse ur a little tense...
Like a "hobo tryin to get a job", your punches "make no cents" (sense)...
Ur nothin but pretend, hittin you with words that hard for you to comprehend...
Compare this line to football, I'll leave u "runnin back" to square one by ending with a "tight end"...
EXPLANATIONS:
Kils is Slik spelled backwords. The "one L" refers to the one loss that he's about to have.
A Hobo can't make money, make "no cents"
In football, a running back and a tight end are two players on a football team.
Let's get some votes.....................
Uppppppppppin this.............................................. ...........................................(1)
DIR ot this fo a better punches.......his disses was also tight...
Killa work on ur structure,disses,and punches..................
Vote:DIR
hit dis up honestly when u get 100 posts
http://rapbattles.com/forum/forumdis...p?s=&forumid=6
Iight thanx for votin uppin this.............................................. ............................(2)
Cmon ppl, don't sleep on this please, drop a link n I'll hit it up. Uppin...........................................(3 )
y the fuck isnt anybody voting?........................................... ...........................................
METAPHORES - DaIllistReBel
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - DaIllistReBel
STRUCTURE - DaIllistReBel
CREATIVITY - DaIllistReBel
PERSONALS - DaIllistReBel
OPENING - DaIllistReBel
CLOSING - DaIllistReBel
MULTIES - DaIllistReBel
FLOW - DaIllistReBel
OVERALL - DaIllistReBel
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93392
yo the vote down
open D
Flow D
Multies D
Pounches D
Close D
overall vote Daillis
hit this up i took the time return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94913
peace
I will vote on this when you do one good favor for me. could you please go make a vote on my battle with lilthug87. The battle conection is in my Sig. aight. right after that I will vote in here for sure, aight homies.
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion
Vote=Dallis....................................... ...........................yo u shouldnt of took it easy Killa............................................. ......................
Opener: rebel
Closer: rebel
Flow: Rebel
Structure: rebel
Personals: rebel
Punches: rebel
Win: rebel
Rebel took this easy. Work on ya structure Killa cause it throws ya whole verse off. Return the fav and vote honestly on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94829
Ok, thanx 4 votin, I will return the favors but 1 of u forgot to poll. W/e uppppppppppppppin.............................(4)
Aight I'm gonna have to say DIR nice nice lyrics and punchies G. You aight look me up sometime you need a battle. Well fuckin' done killa you need to work on your structure. Otherwise nice job boi's. Peace
Iight thanx 4 votin, cmon please don't sleep on this. One last up................................................ .....(5)
METAPHORES - DaIllistReBel
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - DaIllistReBel
STRUCTURE - DaIllistReBel
CREATIVITY - DaIllistReBel
PERSONALS - DaIllistReBel
OPENING - DaIllistReBel
CLOSING - DaIllistReBel
MULTIES - DaIllistReBel
FLOW - DaIllistReBel
OVERALL - DaIllistReBel
there ya go
Aiight......
META's - DIR
VOCAB - (bad)
PUNCH's - DIR
STRUCTURE - DIR
CREATIVITY - DIR
PERSONALS - DIR
OPENING - DIR
CLOSING - DIR
MULTI's-DIR
FLOW - DIR
Overall-DIR
Vote-DIR
its pretty obvious who won dis shit....da illest took this shit so fuckin easy. killa you need to quit now...while ur defeated. don't embarass urself or the rap game any more....lol
vote-dir