" My Thoughts " ( Peep this shit )

“ MY THOUGHTS “

I’m trapped in a stripe jack-it, No straps but Locks and latches
Only capable of using my mind, Eternity to practice
Beef causin static, But im repelled from the action
My first thought is there death, but that’s just a fraction
I’m a mind of worries, reality continues to go blurry
I would call for help, but would they hurry... (Police Sirens)

I’m in a position where my emotions are slippen
Doing cycles of circular motions in repetitions
My Soul Itchin, but what the use is of quiten
Can’t speak my word to the world, will anyone listen
Some days, my mind approaches the paper with a block
The clock still ticken, wanting verses to be in stocks…

I’m nearing the end, friends acting as convulsions
Explosions of hate, but crawl back into implosions
My motions slowin, as my muscles start rotting
Body aching and breaking, death now plotting
I’m not ready for the end, is there ever an exception
1 last question, may lead to an opposite direction… (Sound of Wind)

I’m welcomed to hell, with torture, despair, and Revolutions
A constant war with-in itself, but never seems to be loosen
Not only bruises, but open gashes and limbs missing
Magma spitting, axes catching contact, bodies now splitting
I didn’t come here for sin, this is my destiny
The Blood of my own, is added to the recipe…
But it’s endless (Fading away through hell )




~LINKS~

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...447#post939447
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...450#post939450
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...457#post939457

yo i was feeling you kid ...you could use better punches but the work you did was hot none the less.

Thanks homie, Nice to here that from a vetren on this site. Thats on the real. Can I get some more replies homies...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

UPPIN ^^^^

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

This was a good drop and it went smooth. I can picture a beat and to this. It's good skills.

Thanks hommie, I appriciate this. Uppin for more replies.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

this is the first of your shit i have read
personally, i hope they are all as good as this man
real dope
8/10

Yea, all of my flows are this good or better. LOL. Uppin for some more votes up in here plz.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

ayo playa... shyt came off nice... good flow lyric's an all good ass ish pimp... keep ya game up... rep solid... on3

Thanks for the replie hommie. Hey, show me what you got in the Open mic. If your better in here, we could use some people on the open mic and topical battle area of our crew. Aight hommie.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

yeah i es felin rthid, bu thought tit couls use some complexity in ya shit. but ya got potential kid...likin it so far,....expand...look forward to see'in more...Pz./..........

sorry bout the bad vocab, but im pissed

LOL, its straight hommie. I was able to to read the whole thing. uppin for some more votes, and suggestions for me to work on.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

yo i was really feelin this verse. ya rhymes and vocab depicted real skill. i like pieces about "my thoughts" i do em alot cuz its just a good form of expression and its cool to write about when u dotn got a specific subject..

you got talent dawg

Thanks alot hommie. I will go check your raps out. Since we have a similar state of mind and all of that. Thanks alot hommie, Uppin

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

not badd i like and im hard to plezz but u calling the copps thats pretty soft stay off of the soft topics and ull do real well

Your a fuckin lame, just dont even post in my threads you dumb shit. I can already tell your ganna bring bullshit to this site. If you had a creative mind, you would know that wasnt the damn point. So please go excell some where else. But thanks for the replie :)

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion