12 lines, no more no less, stretched lines aloud...
all rules apply...
spit in 30 mins...
votes betta be fair...
November 24th, 2003, 10:30 PM
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yo...
tha king returned to his throne... saw me sittin there...
jus bring me a fortune in gold... may-b then u'll be gettin here...
ah just a wam-up...next 10 lines now...
oh, don't worry, be happy, it's not a thing...ur just not a king...
ur flow won't beat mine wit 5 votes even if u was tha Lord of tha "Ring"...
Aragorn has 6 wins and 5 losses... imma be givin u losses...not winnin...
so think about it... as soon as this battle finished...he'll have double vision...
my AK's r lyrical... his sword? literal... n yet my weapons stronger...
not to mention tha sword i'm effecient wit ( :hump: ) is almost twice tha length... it's longer...
u have just failed tha task to which u kneeled down n have sworn to complete...
tha sword's at ur feet... pick it up and still fall to a "before u were born" defeat... <
i ignore tha screams :cussing: ... no need for me to be bothered while i'm typin...
unlike u... tha phone calls n it's Gandolf...while u eatin he's doin ur ghost writin...
done...
November 24th, 2003, 10:32 PM
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last line edit: change "tha phone calls" to "tha phone rings"...
i tried checkin it ova real quick but i wanted to meet deadline...
November 24th, 2003, 11:21 PM
Quelude
I swing swords and bring hordes of soldiers to slay you,
I'm a general... I use hand motions to take you..
Spin a tale if you wish... Your words spoken By Tolkien
Me? I'm putting something potent in every lyric I'm postin
Every since your mother bore you, brought you into this world
Your life's destinies been at the tip of my sword...
Battlin me is like David/Goliath with an ending twist...
This time the giant stomps out everything that exists...
Topically your nothing to me, audio I'm the One...
Every key I type in text architects death son...
Wise men fear to tread where fools like you rush in
That's why 77 viewed... leave it to you to comment...
I'm embarrassed I battled you... don't want this thread to be seen
Same feeling you get... whenever you hit the latrine...
Your ideal threats don't connect... My whole defeat was a dream
Just your version of the matrix... The world ain't what it seems
WAKE UP!
(You said I could use stretched bars so here they are. I chose to cut off at eight.)
November 24th, 2003, 11:56 PM
Quelude
upppinn for votes
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Aragorn u had some overplayed lines but u still did well, Angeli tho had some originals and the lord of the rings punch hit ya hard so my vote goes to her1
November 25th, 2003, 12:00 PM
Verse112
i'm gonn have to agree with the rest of the Mc population on this one ...the lines about tolkein and tales and shit kind of played but you still hit him with enough punches to take this one plz hit up my battle it is being slept on thanx.
Yo yo yo yo I think Anglecia got this one son. But YO who wanta battle tha kid right here this A.Ce One mane, I take any challegne yall can't fuck with me mane really just face fact
November 25th, 2003, 02:12 PM
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drop a link n i'll holla back, yo...
otherwise, uppin to tha top to hit our heads on some clouds yes............................................... .................................................. ...................................
November 25th, 2003, 02:40 PM
_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_
well this battle was o.k. i think aragorn had a little bit of a harder verse, angelical had a couple punches but both's punches weren't strong. but i gotta give it to aragorn for better content more clean cut also. peep the battle in my signature and vote.
November 25th, 2003, 03:15 PM
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i think it's a hate vote^^
he's voted against me in text in battles i've taken 5-0 in poll in tha last 5 battles, shouldn't count...
yadda yadda n all that jazz sleep wit z's, naw mean?
November 25th, 2003, 10:23 PM
Rhymes
aight boys
this was tight realy tight
opener Ang
flow other guy
strucvture other guy
creativity Ang
Injoyment Ang
finish Ang
both were good
peace
November 25th, 2003, 11:09 PM
Quelude
uppin for votes
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November 26th, 2003, 06:54 PM
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ditto...
November 27th, 2003, 02:37 PM
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November 27th, 2003, 02:49 PM
dw.
aragorn took this quite easily, it was like other guy wasn't tryin ere i've seen much beta from u! aragorn had gud word play, a few played lines but made up 4 that wiv some strong punches n gud flow, props to both but quite an easy desision this time,
vote-aragorn
cud ya both hit up my battle wiv e-lyrical wiv an honest vote, thanx, appreciated!
November 27th, 2003, 05:18 PM
Slim Thug
Finish this vote up people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... ....................................
November 27th, 2003, 09:27 PM
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