kaos theory-vs-dreamer

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im bout rearrange ya brain lyrically, they call me dreamer cause ill bring ya pain physically, mentally and spiritually//
theres no doubt ill win this bout, cause im ~sending a trap~seems like you got diarrhea at the mouth, so im ~ending ya crap~//
I spit shit you cant forget, you tried a quick hit, but you cant brake a brick with a stick, stupid//
im deleting ya ~claim to fame~completing the strain on ya brain,you should change ya name cause i ~aim to shame~
niggas thats lame//
are you ready for dismantle, keep the machete, steady by the handle, ya skills should be blew, like a candle, you beating me is like Ru(ru paul)beating a fag scandle//
how you going to ~contest the champ~you fighting a giant, im bout to~molest this tramp~better than kobe bryant//
and leave him teary eyed and weary, change his loud profile, to a queit smile, and call him the calm theory//

Is he going to spit or am i going to be sitting in this mufuca for ever zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

yo someone put this retard to sleep.... this mans-cripled... its that damn-simple
fuck it...i'll knock you out so hard.... you'll be dreaming longer than rip van-winkle/
this guys got talent?? size wise... his shit comes up to about my leg-femur
trying to rap??get tha pillow and blanky... say goodnite to this day-dreamer/
my brains-crude... to this lame-dude...i'm a make a win slot... and push your face-through
i'm ashamed-of-you....this bitch couldnt play me...if i was a nintendo game-cube/
trying-to-play??this cross dressing queer puts on more make up than violent-jay
by-tha-way... this fags loss record is longer than most liscence-plates/
do you have AIDS??dreamer's tha ideal example of trying to cum-from-behind
this kids dumb-and-blind....you just got jacked!! only thing you is a record of one-and-nine/

Shit its about time good verse any way uppin .................................................. ................................................

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enjoyment - kaos
structure - kaos
wordplay - koas
punchlines - koas
creativity - dreamer
flow - koas
metaphors - none
overall - koas
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94131]Phayme vs Justin Kredible[/url]
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Phayme posted.... enjoyment - kaos
structure - kaos
wordplay - koas
punchlines - koas
creativity - dreamer
flow - koas
metaphors - none
overall - koas

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enjoyment - kaos
structure - kaos
wordplay - koas
punchlines - koas
creativity - dreamer
flow - koas
metaphors - none
overall - koas..................

1 over Hannibal. your not aloud to quote votes.
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o yea.... can sum1 vote on this battle? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93664 I would appreciate it very much. Thanks

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enjoyment - kaos
structure - kaos
wordplay - koas
punchlines - koas
creativity - dreamer
flow - koas
metaphors - none

peace
overall - koas

my vote goes to chaosssssssss..................................... ..............
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thanks for tha vote rap.............................................vo te ..............................................quit sleepin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

punches=kaos
flow=kaos
structure=kaos
creativity=tie
overal=kaos

good battle ya both had good spits but kaos had better punches!

vote= kaos

return favour, drop an honest vote at this link!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94077

thanks kid............................................... ..........................................damn this shit takes forever.........................for real

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this was a nice battle hear...dreamer has potential...you got forced barz...work on your structure..ya opener was'nt that good...you had nice punches but they really did'nt cause an
impact..disses were so so.. be a lil more creative..nice closer which was ya best...

kaos opener was nice but elementary...tha game cube line was way to basic for a punch..nice wordplay off the name...ya 7&8 line hit with a decent punch...

both need to elevate a lil but i vote kaos..he edge with a betta flow also

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kaos flow was betta and he has betta lyrics......................////////////................._________________________________ __betta in every aspect
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thanks man.........................................lets get one more poll vote now
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Ok kaos killed him in most ares vote=kaos

Battle being slept on please vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94374