aight rules:
3 barz only
no hate, DR, crew votes.
u spit first, and i'll reply in 30 mins if not sooner.
gdluck
peace
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aight rules:
3 barz only
no hate, DR, crew votes.
u spit first, and i'll reply in 30 mins if not sooner.
gdluck
peace
aaihgt lol dont laugh but does 3 barz meen like 6 lines or wat lol ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????
like would it be blah...
blah...
blah...
blah...
blah..
blah...????lol
aaihgt well i guess im spittin 6 lines lol thats wat u rote in the callout so i will --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
worst mistake ya could ever make, was pikin beef-wit-me...
like in the fall i take a rake, and have u in piles easily...
more creative n artistic then leanardo decaprio...
got you n ya crew singin they verses liek a rap-trio...
like fishin, uve just been filleted and cleaned...
all ya been spittin is shit lookin like its commin out of mc dees ice machines...
hey man wen u come on spit ok ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This holster has no lyrical guns how he xpect to beat me in a war/
Huh? Im da one that will fuck u up and leave u wit lyrical scars//
This is another battle u'll lose so dont come xpecting to defeat me/
The only way u can win is if i let u... but dont xpect me to show mercy/
Cuz when im in a battle i go all out showin no sympathy for the emcees that i have killed/
U aceptin this callout from me... shit u really looking to get ur blood spilled//
peace
yo man dont get madd aihgt but the first to barz dont even ryme im not hatin im just tellin ya is it suppost to ryme???? like wtf? or am i just rate lost?
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This holster has no lyrical guns how he xpect to beat me in a war/
Huh? Im da one that will fuck u up and leave u wit lyrical scars//
This is another battle u'll lose so dont come xpecting to defeat me/
The only way u can win is if i let u... but dont xpect me to show mercy/
no beef man??? i dunno im just pissed becuz im loosin battles n the other verse hardly rymes but good spit man
Open- holster... holster was wack, but at least creative...rj - basic n played
Metas - none
Creavitity - holster
Personals - none
Flow - holster
Finish - none
Abuse - rap jesus.....holster ya punches were weak as fuck
vote = Holster
seriously if i could i would vote against both of u. Holster ya rhymes r wack, n rap-jesus those were the most basic played lines ever.
RETURN HONEST VOTES:
aaihgt lol thanx for the vote n the tips ill try to work on ma punches lol
uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ..................
peace
METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - neither
STRUCTURE - Rap~Jesus~
CREATIVITY - tie
PERSONALS - neither
OPENING - tie
CLOSING - Rap~Jesus~
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - HOLSTER
OVERALL - Rap~Jesus~ (2-1)
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93392
aight thx............................................... ...................... 1-1....... uppin fo votes.......................
peace
agreed....vote = rap jesusQuote:
Originally Posted bt MP Phasiz
METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - neither
STRUCTURE - Rap~Jesus~
CREATIVITY - tie
PERSONALS - neither
OPENING - tie
CLOSING - Rap~Jesus~
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - HOLSTER
2-1 for me still upping for more votes.
thanx man............................................... ..
peace
quote:
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Originally Posted by Da_Legend
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Originally Posted by MP Phasiz
METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - neither
STRUCTURE - Rap~Jesus~
CREATIVITY - tie
PERSONALS - neither
OPENING - tie
CLOSING - Rap~Jesus~
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - HOLSTER
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agreed....vote = rap jesus
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But props to HOLSTER. U had sum decent shit. But I just felt Rap Jesus' verse a lot better. But both of y'all need to hold back on tha line stretchin. Kinda threw me off on certain parts.
yo man can u plz poll it, thanx..................................... 3-1................
......
peace
shit man i have to agree with most, this was a weak battle, with no hard hittin punches and basic vocab.......but someone has got to win so i vote Rap, it was set better, and a TINY bit harder hittin.....but both you need elevatin.........aight Pz
vote=Rap
aight 4-1 one more vote for me and the battle is closed,............................... thx
peace
ite rap got this on flow and punches not a bad verse do frm holster keep elavateing man............................................... .................pz