10-20 lines
all rulez apply
drop by noon sunday
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10-20 lines
all rulez apply
drop by noon sunday
yo...
this kat's only tendency should have been to stop battlin...
ur chance of endin me is like a straight YMCA - not happinin...
u took tha red pill and entered tha wrong place n time...
ur hatin mine, correct? u know, tha advanced way i'm sayin rhymes???
well stop wit tha ideas of droppin on Sunday so u can p-write...
cause God won't take that, jus say ur AMEN right before it's g-night...
tha only way u droppin sumtin must be tha letters, numbers, symbols...
from ur avy, too simple, like a matrix blonde wit some cute dimples...
poet? didn't know it? HA! u'll jus be anotha pediatrician, doc...
my glowin mic got u runnin right back to tha buildin blocks...
u're physical misperfection defined, mentally a lessin'd mime...
cause u don't think period, yet alone be flexin mindz...
u can't beat this if my hat was a condom that covered my mouth...
or if every single one of my vocal organs were pulled out...
get tha crucifix, stare at me, start usin it, abusin it...
but it won't work, so many bodies slain, i'm too used to it...
i got rhythms n lyrics injected to give me perfection...
pumpin blood into ur essence until ur heart is bein neglected...
now u don't want to battle anyone no more, yet alone face me...
so imma flip tha pencil on ur face n just start erasing...NOW HATE ME!!!
checkn in....gonna go ahead a drop now..mic check one two.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
you're a "lyrikal murder"? or did you mean lyrikal murderer?
get your grammar straight, no one wants to hear a stutterer
maybe you're right, maybe you can murder me with lyrics
the only problem is, you gotta get someone to want to hear it
like tupac, i'm taking this one day at a time
treating every line like it could be my last rhyme
that's why I'm praying, hoping I don't "pass" soon
like a typhoon, i'm coming, disturbing your room
if your occupation* really is rapper, you're right ~end of story~
the only exposure you'll get, is at 11 am on Maury**
you hit it on the nail dawg, your biography says it right***
there's nothing to know about you, other than you lost this fight
* and *** ....refer to profile
** if you don't know don't vote (talk show)
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poet you forgot to poll vote my shit. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93551
i will hit this up later.
junio, you gotta vote on this junk dude.......dag........uppin (2) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
both got skill, and potential to be ill
but my honest vote goes to angellica
the punches were alot more clever...she has got potential to be ill as fuck, but not there yet though...
poet, nice drop...but angellica is more experienced than you and it showed right here.
vote a
yo could u please drop an honest vote right here-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93551
Open- ang
Metas - tie
Creavitity - ang
Personals - poet
Flow - tie
Finish - ang
Abuse - ang
vote = ang
RETURN HONEST VOTES:
im gonna give this one to ang because of his punches n nice flow.. he came alot harder n i had more laughs so my vote goes to angel...
vote=angellicalr...good battle to both of ya keep it up
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hit these up with honest votes!!!!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92962
~and~
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93437
^^^^^^can people with 0-7 records even vote? what the fuck....anyway.....~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
matas- Ang
flow- poet
punches- poet
opener- ang
closer- poet
personals- ang
i enjoyed more- poet
my vote= poet
OPENER-- Poetic
PNCH'S-- um, AngellicalR
FLOW-- Gotta say TIE
PERSONALS-- Poetic
CLOSIN THA VERSE-- Poetic
Best line: (PT)" If your occupation * really is a rapper, you're right~end of story~the only exposure you'll get is @ 11 a.m. on Maury" lol that was a tight verse
(ANG):there were a few pretty good ones, um..."get the crucifix, stare at me, start usin' it, abusin' it but it wont work, so many bodies slain, I'm too used to it"
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But this jus' my opion.
give props ta both
now peep this one......................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93603
Damn... hard decision but i gotta pick one. Remember, I tell honest opinions and give honest votes. But Angellical got this one. Poetic had sum tight shit. Dont get me wrong. I like tha line wit maury and tha biography things. I mean damn.... that shit was hard hittin. Angellical's buildin blocks line was decent too. But yea. Honest Opinion... Honest Vote...
VOTE: ANGELLICALR
METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - AngellicalR
STRUCTURE - tie
CREATIVITY - AngellicalR
PERSONALS - poetictendenceez
OPENING - AngellicalR
CLOSING - poetictendenceez
MULTIES - AngellicalR
FLOW - tie
OVERALL - AngellicalR (4-2)
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93392