Toner vs Born To KIll

I shouldn't have to tell you but....no crew. d/r or whack votez.
No bitin or shit
8-10 LInez you spit first

Let's Go

This will be a good battle........ jus upset I can't vote coz It'll be a crew vote........................ please for the thought........... hit my very close battle up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93048

Checkin in...

Will drop asap...

Good luck.

Peace

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A stand of Defiance

My verse unfold events that are catastriphic...this Cat's too simplistic,
I'm Sadistic...Plenty O' witnesses...Causin disruption to his statistics,
Do ya risk it...Headhunter soon to be extinct...Ya didn't think,
Ya dare to blink...Ya battleships I'll sink...rip an shred with paper and Ink,
Ma verses drop lyrical bombs on Houston...Your veteran status is an illusion,
Your runnin out o' linez to choose from...Born to Kill,thats just a delusion,
Sorry cases like you make me sad..Slappin ma call out was your bad,
Takin Revenge like a Triad...for the 69 of my fallen comrades.

Peace

Fuck It, I spat first............................................. .................................................. ......

Ya jotted a verse...but the paper, you abused it.
Cuz ya pencil had potential, until ya actually used it...
Now here ya are, disgracing RB with ya rhymes...
Comin hollow with flow, he could actually be a wind chime.
Runnin out of Toner, and ain't lookin for replacements...
No one wants ta copy a kid who's lower than a basement.
Condemned ta never elevate, like a clipped wing bird...
Destined ta show he sucks, after rappin one word.
Toner must be tone deaf, thinkin he can produce...
Soundin more like Tom Green, when he humps his moose.

...........Ma mommas on your lips ma momma on your lips............Come on Son..Vets shouldn't need to.

breakdown-
punches=b2k
flow=b2k
sustainment=both
metas=b2k
multis=toner
struc'=b2k
opener=b2k
finisher=b2k

not a bad battle but toner jus dint bring heat in his punches

MAKE SURE YA HIT UP THE ARAGORN BATTLE IN MA SIG PZ

Other than that a good verse............................................. ...........................

Ya jotted a verse...but the paper, you abused it.
Cuz ya pencil had potential, until ya actually used it...

that's a fuckin' strong opener..... good battle (just comenting not freesposting or voting)

Oh shit I meant to put 73 of my fallen comrades.......................................... .................................................. .......

This was a good battle, born 2 kill, had some strong ass words. Good battle Keep elevating.. Holla ......... Peace

B2K got my vote

punches: B2K
FLOW: B2K
CREATIVITY: B2K
STRUCTURE: B2K

JUST PLAIN OUT FUNNIER: B2K

FINAL: B2K


drop a honest vote on this plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92861

PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93272

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Toner-

- good multies in the intro... not bad!
- pretty good follow up line too
- soft in the middle
- ending was lame. this is a battle...

Born To Kill-

- great start!!!
- nice middle...
- good disses and personals
- good flow
- nice diss on the ending.

Winner: Born To Kill

i see Toner is elevating after every battle..........is it enough???


Opener(+1)-Born
closer(+1)-Toner
punches(+2)-Born
personals(+2)-Toner
wordplay(+1)-Born
multis(+1)-Toner
originality(+1)-tie
complexity(+1)-Toner
cornyness(-2)-Born
enjoyment(+1)-tie


overall-Born To Kill (+4)....Toner (+7)-----Winner....honest vote.....

please vote honestly right here.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92866

b2k took this, quite close but really his experience stood out in every catagory but other guy got potiential, b2k's punches jus hit harder in this one!

vote-b2k

can you vote on my battle wiv aragorn, thanx

fuckin obvious battle

born to kill wins
he got punches
opener
closer
wordplay
he killed toner

toner your shit was wack because you forced your multies anybody who isnt an herb can see that cuz it makes little sense as far as bar after bar, make sure all your bars make sense with each other or else ure just throwin out 1 liners which is gay