14 Lines MAX
Check in here...
Well drop together later
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14 Lines MAX
Check in here...
Well drop together later
5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate
all votes must be explained
Catagories
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flow -
metas -
multis -
punches -
wordplay -
complexity -
structure -
closing -
overall -
iight yo im checkin in....when are we gonna drop
how bout 25 mins from now??
u down??
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Drop at 6 PM EST.................
I wanna eat dinner b4 i start writing
100 char 100 char 100 char
iight......
i will
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EnVy I’ll have you "fallin breathless" quicker than “fat peeps on treadmills”
Sayin your tha champ, yet you get-killed cuz I shred-Skillz
Played lines are making a comeback, mainly cuz this^ faggot emcee
Well when i spit, it's 'as-salt'... yet my lyrics are completely 'sugar-free'
The esscence of battling, ideal balance of personals-and-punchlines
In this battle Envy's takin more "cuts" then "fat-people-in-lunchlines"
FreeYayo was your best opponent ..how the hell you claim to be hard?
And of your punches just "miss in" the point ..like a wnba guard
Out-stompin you is my sole purpose ..and did i mention that i'm gellin?
Tha only time you write 'sIC' is when your correctin his spelling
I'ma fuckin you up kid, like a police officer at a doughnut buffet
Your a fat boy with no life.... your droppin 50.46 posts per day
In all reality though, kid, I really gotta admire you on your persistance
Too bad im sendin you back where you came from: Non-Existence
You’re Fake-And-Wack, but I'm endin you're reign “Just In Time”//
When I "Make It Clap", let's see if you can "Bust A Rhyme"// [1]
Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”//
New Rap Order must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2]
Damn it I'm Focused-So-Fear, Post-Against-Queers who stand no chance against such a “Potent Carrier”//
Don’t “Hope To Be Spared”, cause when i put this "shell to your ear", I guarantee it wont be the "Ocean You Hear”// [3]
This Kid wouldn’t do a “Good job” with his “Thumb being glued “Up”//
Your flows wouldn't have “Intellect or Weight” if you was “Professor Klump”//(The Nutty Professor) [4]
Kids winning streaks always Revert-and-slow cause his VERSES-“FLOW"//
with the same consistency of a "pregnant" bitch on "BIRTH-CONTROL"// [5]
U don't even “Step Close” there's gotta be “Less Jokes”, I “Wreak Dopes” with “Tecks Folks”//
I just won this battle 5-0, cuz Being on “The Weakest Link” is the only place you'd “Get Votes”// [6]
My-Craft-Teaches, I’ve-Matched-Jesus...not-trying-to-Brag, But-Please-Kid, EnVy “Off The Chain” like “Snatched Pieces!”//
You Cant-Beat-This”, Im’a-Rap-Genus, I Pack-Heat-Shit....with “three life lines” that’s-Half-decent, even “Ask Regis!”// [7]
and yo dominator... i never claimed to be hard or to be the champ
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uppin for some votes..............
.......need some votes............
com on yo................
dont sleep on this
shit my bad... on the 2nd bar its supposd to be
Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”//
Dominator must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2]
not new rap order
when me and new rap order were gonna battle, i wrote my verse for him the day that we were gonna spit....but he neva spit his..so i didnt use it, so i decided to use it for this, yea i kno its pre-write...but it only took me 20 mins to write it b4 and i didnt edit it, as u can see.
This is what its supposed to say:
You’re Fake-And-Wack, but I'm endin you're reign “Just In Time”//
When I "Make It Clap", let's see if you can "Bust A Rhyme"// [1]
Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”//
Dominator must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2]
Damn it I'm Focused-So-Fear, Post-Against-Queers who stand no chance against such a “Potent Carrier”//
Don’t “Hope To Be Spared”, cause when i put this "shell to your ear", I guarantee it wont be the "Ocean You Hear”// [3]
This Kid wouldn’t do a “Good job” with his “Thumb being glued “Up”//
Your flows wouldn't have “Intellect or Weight” if you was “Professor Klump”//(The Nutty Professor) [4]
Kids winning streaks always Revert-and-slow cause his VERSES-“FLOW"//
with the same consistency of a "pregnant" bitch on "BIRTH-CONTROL"// [5]
U don't even “Step Close” there's gotta be “Less Jokes”, I “Wreak Dopes” with “Tecks Folks”//
I just won this battle 5-0, cuz Being on “The Weakest Link” is the only place you'd “Get Votes”// [6]
My-Craft-Teaches, I’ve-Matched-Jesus...not-trying-to-Brag, But-Please-Kid, EnVy “Off The Chain” like “Snatched Pieces!”//
You Cant-Beat-This”, Im’a-Rap-Genus, I Pack-Heat-Shit....with “three life lines” that’s-Half-decent, even “Ask Regis!”// [7]
sorry bout that...
opening - dominator
flow - dominator...envy ya shyt looked a lil streched
metas - both
multis - both
punches - dominator
wordplay - envy
complexity - dominator
structure - dom...again streched..(this shouldnt b a catagory)
closing - dom
VOTE- DOM.......OVERALL BETTER VERSE
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drop a vote here n make sure to poll.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92259
n vote honestly........1
overall -
Dominator won this to better punches and a more consistent flow. Envy's lines were stretched a lil.
vote= DOMINATOR
Hit this wit an honest vote:
Infinite Skillz vs. TAG-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779
uppin.... ill hit those up when I get home......
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^^^herbish vote infinite skillz
opener(+1)-D
closer(+1)-D
punches(+2)-D
personals(+2)-D
wordplay(+1)-Envy
multis(+1)-Envy
complexity(+1)-D
originality(+1)-D
cornyness(-2)-Envy
enjoyment(+1)-D
Overall- Envy Skillz (0).....Dominator (+9)-------Winner....no hate honest opinion.....
honest vote here please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92866
follow the outline infinite skillz..........................................
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quit snoozin people..... quit snoozin
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Envy Skillz
Came Basic Wit A Few Played Lines And Some Nice Metas...
Dominator On Da Otha Hand Came Wit Personals, Punches, Metas, And Came Hard...
Gotta Hand It To Him For Dose Personals...
I'ma fuckin you up kid, like a police officer at a doughnut buffet
Your a fat boy with no life.... your droppin 50.46 posts per day
In all reality though, kid, I really gotta admire you on your persistance
Too bad im sendin you back where you came from: Non-Existence
Dopest Lines^...
Vote...Dom...
-P
thanks for following the catagories....ok....if u tell me not to vote on your battles then dont vote on mine bitch...
anyways uppin for one more vote to finish this shit off.......
uppin x 4.............
it dont matter who votes really.......
if it was close....... it would matter......
but uhmmmmm yah....... nuff said
4-0 lets go.... lets close this
UPPIN X 5
Hit this up
Drop a link and ill drop an honest one on it right away
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opening - dominator
flow - dominator
metas - dominator
multis - envy
punches - dominator
wordplay - envy
complexity - dominator
structure - domiator
closing - dominator
overall - dominator
good battle by both but thats how i see it