Da Chronic G vs. J.K.O

15-20 lines.
No feeding.
5 votes win.
i go first.
i g 15 minutes to drop my verse after u check in an u got 15 minutes to drop urs after i drop mine.

Now J.K.O went on 'bitch slapped' 2 call me out and branded me a bitch,
This battles gonna be a T.K.O, coz u aint got the skillz 2 match this, BITCH!!/
Now this bitch wanted 2 'bump heads' so he tried 2 step 2 me,
But if we werent battling u'd vote for this verse, coz u know i'm the more skilled MC/
Like 'Scary Movie', i'll make a parody out of ur fucked up rhymes,
actually scratch that, coz ur funny, coz ur wack wen u write ur best bar/lines./
I feel sympathetic for u tho, coz u seem more confused than ur sexuality at times,
This is the RAP elite scene, bring ur weak ass lines to another site/
Like a comic i'll make a joke of u, like an interviewer i'll put u on the spot,
U got a much chance of winning this battle as a 'dumb' tryna rap, and a transexual dyslexic tryna get kocc/(Cock)
So come on then bitch hit me with ur weak ass lines,
and jus' to help u get started, u can even quote some of mine/

yo im checkin in i will spit later cause theres only a couple minutes lef in my computer class

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im a exterminator,tougher than the terminater/
scared this kid so he cant have sex, so he checks in to the vibrator/
bitch knew his ass was gonna lose, so he has to ask for dick favors/
you thought you were a player,walkin on my turf/
but you got slurped,your just a scared stupid jerk/
da chronic g you a chicken, i barely move and he starts to flinchen/
and you i was trippin, bitch you make me sicken/
now just listen, i could beat your ass even if i was limpin/
stupid faggot why did you even except/
this match, its like you crazy except you keepin it real like safe sex/
you got a fucked up name, its pure lame/
your like your name, your never gonna get just a little fame/


havent battle forever so yep theres my verse^^^^^

im a exterminator,tougher than the terminater/
scared this kid so he cant have sex, so he checks in to the vibrator/
bitch knew his ass was gonna lose, so he has to ask for dick favors/
you thought you were a player,walkin on my turf/
but you got slurped,your just a scared stupid jerk/
da chronic g you a chicken, i barely move and he starts to flinchen/
and you thought i was trippin, bitch you make me sicken/
now just listen, i could beat your ass even if i was limpin/
stupid faggot why did you even except/
this match, its like you crazy except you keepin it real like safe sex/
you got a fucked up name, its pure lame/
your like your name, your never gonna get just a little fame/

had to fix thed thought in the fourth line

sorry about that

uppin for some votes comeon ppl aint that hard to vote

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uppin for votes, do not sleep on this ppl.
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OPeneR: Tie
Closer: Chronic
Flow: none
Personals: Chronic
Punches: JKO
Win: Chronic
Can yall hit this up with an honest vote? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93223

My vote goes to J.K.O coz I feel he had better humor used in the battle, both openers were good although DCG had a stronger finish... vote= J.K.O plz hit up my battle to return the favor... much needed I only need 1 more vote, thanx.

I forgot to post the link to my battle... please drop your vote much appriciated

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92827

uppin.2. dnt sleep on this.
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uppin comeon yall 2

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JkO: good hits n flow, much better flow than DCG...

DCG: stopped wit strected lines, it don't help, good hits though

it was even so it came down to flow which i felt JkO had a lil better so JkO gets this...

Very close battle...

Both ya'll need ta elevate ya wordplay and punches...

Seriously.

But for better structure, rhyme scheme, flow and punches...

JKO.

Peace

uppin 3

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flow- tie
multies- j
vocab- Chron
punches- tie
structure- tie
wordplay- chron
metties- tie

close battle...
vote- Chron for winning most categories

Could yall do me a favor and drop an HONEST vote on this battle...
its gettin mad slept on and alot of no Polls...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93202

PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93272

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Da Chronic G-

- not good intro... you rhymed bitch and bitch
- not hard punches at the start
- not great metaphors but at least they are there
- not good ending. you need some work my friend... no offense.

keep it up though

J.K.O -

- decent opener... could have been better. but better then opponent

best line-

da chronic g you a chicken, i barely move and he starts to flinchen/
and you i was trippin, bitch you make me sicken/

that was still soft but not bad.

- week ending. you should be better for being 15-7

WINNER: J.K.O by a cunt hair

uppin for vote come on ppl.3
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come on vote ppl dnt sleep on it.4.
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come on ppl this is my last uppin. vote dnt sleep on it
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uppin for my last vote to close this battle 3

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comeon yall finish this battle ppl uppin 4

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stop sleepin ppl just need one freakin vote to finish this battle comeon yall uppin and stop sleepin its only one vote

final uppin


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flow- tie
multies- j
vocab- Chron
punches- j
structure- j
wordplay- chron
meta's- tie

overall-j.k.o

pretty close battle..but J.K.O takes...